05-09-2019, 12:01 AM | #1 |
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heres a snip of some unique structure and rhymescheming.. feel free to peep the audio track (link at the bottom)
Stop.. Watch.. in Time I'll get the Past Gone, I Drop.. Songs.. with Rhymes to get my Fans Off, Guide um with my Tracks On, Line up on the Back Wall, Try me for the Facts because it's Silent if you Ask God! Drop.. Jaws.. ya Mind is my Trap Locked, the Top.. Dog.. Divided by the Path Walked, Find me in the Back Logs, Violence is a Last Straw, Dying just to Ask the question Why I'm in the Last Spot! but I'm.. Fine.. to Do this as a Hobby, and it's Grind.. Time.. Move in as a Top Seed.. I have Proven to my Posse that I'm Truthful when I'm Dropping and Conclude it with my Songs cuz in the Booth I'm never Sloppy.. and I Climb.. High.. a User of the Bomb Weed, I.. Try.. Using what I Got Free.. Music can be Costly and Truthfully Exhausting, but to be on top I need to Lose what Tries to Stop Me! https://lyriscologist.bandcamp.com/track/damn-barz |
05-10-2019, 08:24 PM | #2 |
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I think its dope as multi pieces go but I wouldn't call the structure unique
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05-11-2019, 10:44 AM | #3 |
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show me a song thats structured this way
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05-11-2019, 12:14 PM | #4 |
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It’s literally just an AB with extended As Anyone could invent a “unique structure” by using an AB and extending A/B, but I don’t think this particular structure flows spectacularly and it lacks twists and turns and variation. Last edited by DMS; 05-11-2019 at 12:25 PM. |
12-12-2019, 11:02 PM | #5 |
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lol did you even listen to it
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12-13-2019, 08:37 AM | #6 |
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