04-21-2019, 01:38 PM | #1 |
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Innovator (0-0) vs. Adonis (0-0) - INNOVATOR WINS
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Due Dates: Verses are due Thursday and will be open until Sunday. Battles that lack votes may close later. One sided battles may get closed early. Extensions are 24 hours Line Limit: Minimum of 10, maximum of 16 If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first. Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ FAILURE TO VOTE ON A MINIMUM OF 4 BATTLES WILL RESULT IN A DEDUCTION OF 2 VOTES IN YOUR BATTLE. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! VOTE ON 4 BATTLES MINIMUM OR YOU PAY THE PRICE. SIMPLE! COMPLETE RULE THREAD: http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=140091 @Innovator @Adonis |
04-21-2019, 01:58 PM | #2 |
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04-21-2019, 11:27 PM | #3 |
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04-22-2019, 11:08 PM | #4 |
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04-25-2019, 01:19 AM | #5 |
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I’ve heard of long hair don't care, but this guy really let lose; a fuckin goatee full of pubes
You're extra noob a "vet confused", but I admitt your flex is butter - Harvey Milk - After the Flu I've seen your rise and your fall, only, its mostly the ladder Which is ironic cuzzo, the only rung you reached is under my soles when I battle I'm saying... Come on vader, why'd you have to go and remove the Mask? Now, Boy! Meet World. His name Adonis, yours? It's just lost in the past This a flash in the pan, and Inno punch drunk but he's nimble I'd roast you On-Line but your moms, she probly try and eat you for dinner For reall though, we're cool, I just gotta be fed I know you're Mid-West, me, California Kid. I eat toast, you, eat this toaster, in-bred BANG!! ~
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04-25-2019, 08:41 PM | #6 |
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Listen I’m throat punching that fat bitch you call a wife with my dick
She serves me like a bartender, funny cuz she only works for the tip. If I said I came in her mouth, that’s a polite retelling of the whore She’s got me deep in her web so when Internet I do more than explore I’ll pull triggers this pussy won’t last till dinner when I clap back Fuck this nigger, in this battle I’m pushing hard for the ER, that’s a Cash back Let the pound ring, that bitch don’t have no missed calls So when I touch you, there won’t be any hands to catch your fall Always come up short, you give her 6 and she gets mad n throws fits We don’t size up, I give her 12 cuz she says the shoe always fits Last edited by Inno; 04-25-2019 at 08:43 PM. |
04-26-2019, 06:10 PM | #7 |
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Adonis def has a different style. You can tell he’s a topical guy. I wasn’t really feeling much of it. Everything was worded weird. A lot of it could’ve been over my head tho. Like the toaster in bred thing. I get the connection but it’s worded a way that took away a lot of the impact. Also, for a topical guy I was expecting more multi’s.
Inno has more of a traditional battle verse. Nothing really stood out. Opener was probably the best of his verse. Concepts just weren’t hitting for me. Didn’t get the hands line. Everything else, I got where you were going....it just didn’t connect for me. Sorry, guys...I wasn’t feeling much from this battle. I think I have to give it to Inno because his verse was more my style as a traditional battle verse. |
04-26-2019, 07:22 PM | #8 |
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I’ve heard of long hair don't care, but this guy really let lose; a fuckin goatee full of pubes
You're extra noob a "vet confused", but I admitt your flex is butter - Harvey Milk - After the Flu weird fuckin reference but I did you a solid and looked it up. I like the flow and the wordings good but the punch is decent I've seen your rise and your fall, only, its mostly the ladder Which is ironic cuzzo, the only rung you reached is under my soles when I battle nah I'm saying... Come on vader, why'd you have to go and remove the Mask? Now, Boy! Meet World. His name Adonis, yours? It's just lost in the past nah This a flash in the pan, and Inno punch drunk but he's nimble I'd roast you On-Line but your moms, she probly try and eat you for dinner decent For reall though, we're cool, I just gotta be fed I know you're Mid-West, me, California Kid. I eat toast, you, eat this toaster, in-bred .....no no Vs Listen I’m throat punching that fat bitch you call a wife with my dick She serves me like a bartender, funny cuz she only works for the tip. lol ok If I said I came in her mouth, that’s a polite retelling of the whore She’s got me deep in her web so when Internet I do more than explore inc her nets? Not feelin this wp I’ll pull triggers this pussy won’t last till dinner when I clap back Fuck this nigger, in this battle I’m pushing hard for the ER, that’s a Cash back this sounds good but is really only decent after deciphering the actual punch and reference lol Let the pound ring, that bitch don’t have no missed calls So when I touch you, there won’t be any hands to catch your fall nah Always come up short, you give her 6 and she gets mad n throws fits We don’t size up, I give her 12 cuz she says the shoe always fits ermmm Adonis did what I suspected a topical head would naturally do, and that’s have good flow but lack in punchline content. Adonis had some decent attempts like the opener but didn’t really follow through. Inno had a cool opener and overall just a more battle style verse in general, the disses were better. Vote Innovator |
04-27-2019, 04:43 PM | #9 |
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I wasn’t feeling much of Adonis verse tbh... sorry man try dumbing it down and go for the throat
Inno- Opener was laughs. The ER joint was decent... oh your internet bar I didn’t really get man...and your closer was light. Decent verse Got inno with more hits here. |
04-27-2019, 05:08 PM | #10 |
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Adonis was very simple and worded bad for the most part. |
04-27-2019, 05:42 PM | #11 |
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v/ Innovator innos best bar was his closer and adonis best line was the ladder/rung line (good wording, solid execution) |
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04-28-2019, 12:37 PM | #14 |
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This a flash in the pan, and Inno punch drunk but he's nimble
I'd roast you On-Line but your moms, she probly try and eat you for dinner Vs Listen I’m throat punching that fat bitch you call a wife with my dick She serves me like a bartender, funny cuz she only works for the tip. I’ll pull triggers this pussy won’t last till dinner when I clap back Fuck this nigger, in this battle I’m pushing hard for the ER, that’s a Cash back V/inno, this was a ok battle both had some igh attempts, yah just need to word shit harsher but i got innovator winning this one.
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04-28-2019, 01:20 PM | #15 |
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I’ve heard of long hair don't care, but this guy really let lose; a fuckin goatee full of pubes
You're extra noob a "vet confused", but I admitt your flex is butter - Harvey Milk - After the Flu long bar brodie I've seen your rise and your fall, only, its mostly the ladder Which is ironic cuzzo, the only rung you reached is under my soles when I battle st8 I'm saying... Come on vader, why'd you have to go and remove the Mask? Now, Boy! Meet World. His name Adonis, yours? It's just lost in the past nah This a flash in the pan, and Inno punch drunk but he's nimble I'd roast you On-Line but your moms, she probly try and eat you for dinner cool For reall though, we're cool, I just gotta be fed I know you're Mid-West, me, California Kid. I eat toast, you, eat this toaster, in-bred lol ok Listen I’m throat punching that fat bitch you call a wife with my dick She serves me like a bartender, funny cuz she only works for the tip. lol If I said I came in her mouth, that’s a polite retelling of the whore She’s got me deep in her web so when Internet I do more than explore ehh I’ll pull triggers this pussy won’t last till dinner when I clap back Fuck this nigger, in this battle I’m pushing hard for the ER, that’s a Cash back I see what you did Let the pound ring, that bitch don’t have no missed calls So when I touch you, there won’t be any hands to catch your fall ehh Always come up short, you give her 6 and she gets mad n throws fits We don’t size up, I give her 12 cuz she says the shoe always fits decent closer I got Inno brodies, keep at it!
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