Championship Match: Pinot Grij vs Tic - PINOT WINS

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NBL Season 9


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[Tic]

Sup.

[Pinot Grij]

Hi pal. I'm gonna go 16.

[Pinot Grij]

I roll thru your hood with AKs, sprayin’ errything like a crop duster
These bullets’ll stream thru every house and shut down your Block, buster
Think I won’t pop, then you’re stupid… that just means more to dump
Watch my shotty bang this retard, it’s like Jenny from Forrest Gump
I bet you’re a dud with the broads, you’re one ugly disgusting monster
Cuz when we see a Tic on a girl, she’s usually screaming to get it off her
And a Tic is a parasite that needs a host - I'm tellin', yo
Judgin’ by all your gay moves, yours is probly the host of the Ellen show
You stay claimin’ you undefeated, denyin’ the losses you actually take
Ok, keep spinnin’ ya record 'til I pop you in the face, Jam Master Jay
I’d never fuck your chick… her pussy’s so diseased, it’s a shame, bro
That’s why I only enter through her mouth… I call that bitch Castle Grayskull
And you’re a walkin’ STD.. that shit’s written all over your pitiful face
I mean, I could paint a picture, but I don’t wanna give voters visual AIDS
I got an iron will, how did you think I wouldn't defeat you???
C'mon, even a bitch could conquer your spirit - that's the Ghostbusters reboot

[Tic]

Infiltration 2-0 vs. Pinot Grij 2-0 - INF WINS

That Tragic loss was hard, got cocky but he finished you, friend
So if your run was Forever, explain why when there's a battle w/ Infinite ends
Plus you worked hard to rob Ill, it all seemed so convenient
You beat Nik on a Day Off. So congrats on Working Overtime for that PTO achievement
Your streak is Under Review, plus ya lines are basic as shit
Most of ya wins have us in Wonderland…Analysis just a fitting nickname for this bitch
You’re getting Housed faggot. From MY view, you better hope & pray pal
Fuck seein the living room from the kitchen. Have ya chest split on the floor - that’s an Open Layout
Quit tryin faggot, when I pull it & blast you'll die & that’s it
I’ll take the cap off, put it up to ya lips and press like applying Chapstick
Whether it's topics or text, you’ll get wrecked in this hobby
That’s why ya technique is Under Construction…along with the rest of ya body
Ya lines leave me Floored, but beat me? I’ll make it hard, kid
Try to put Tac down & I’ll lay you on top & stomp like replacing carpet
You can't run, P. Wherever you go the piece will follow
Fuck a Horror flick, when the shells hit it's night night. I call it my Sleepy Hollow

[King]

You stay claimin’ you undefeated, denyin’ the losses you actually take
Ok, keep spinnin’ ya record 'til I pop you in the face, Jam Master Jay
god damn
I’d never fuck your chick… her pussy’s so diseased, it’s a shame, bro
That’s why I only enter through her mouth… I call that bitch Castle Grayskull
I got an iron will, how did you think I wouldn't defeat you???
C'mon, even a bitch could conquer your spirit - that's the Ghostbusters reboot

vs

Your streak is Under Review, plus ya lines are basic as shit
Most of ya wins have us in Wonderland…Analysis just a fitting nickname for this bitch
Whether it's topics or text, you’ll get wrecked in this hobby
That’s why ya technique is Under Construction…along with the rest of ya body

Pinot had a pretty consistent verse. good wording throughout. i thought jam master jay was a banger, grayskull was funny shit too. Tics wording fucked up a lot of his bars for me. The opener for example, open layout, etc. i can see what ur going for but they were just choppy to me. Cool battle tho.

vote Pinot

[Wanderer]

Originally Posted by Pinot Grij

I roll thru your hood with AKs, sprayin’ errything like a crop duster
These bullets’ll stream thru every house and shut down your Block, buster
Dope
Think I won’t pop, then you’re stupid… that just means more to dump
Watch my shotty bang this retard, it’s like Jenny from Forrest Gump
This is ok
I bet you’re a dud with the broads, you’re one ugly disgusting monster
Cuz when we see a Tic on a girl, she’s usually screaming to get it off her
Ok but the "a Tic" kinda stretch and this gotta be done on him before
And a Tic is a parasite that needs a host - I'm tellin', yo
Judgin’ by all your gay moves, yours is probly the host of the Ellen show
Not really feeling
You stay claimin’ you undefeated, denyin’ the losses you actually take
Ok, keep spinnin’ ya record 'til I pop you in the face, Jam Master Jay
Don't get
I’d never fuck your chick… her pussy’s so diseased, it’s a shame, bro
That’s why I only enter through her mouth… I call that bitch Castle Grayskull
Haha ok
And you’re a walkin’ STD.. that shit’s written all over your pitiful face
I mean, I could paint a picture, but I don’t wanna give voters visual AIDS
Ok
I got an iron will, how did you think I wouldn't defeat you???
C'mon, even a bitch could conquer your spirit - that's the Ghostbusters reboot
Not feeling

Vs

Originally Posted by Tic

That Tragic loss was hard, got cocky but he finished you, friend
So if your run was Forever, explain why when there's a battle w/ Infinite ends
not really feeling it. like, I don't feel the sting in this
Plus you worked hard to rob Ill, it all seemed so convenient
You beat Nik on a Day Off. So congrats on Working Overtime for that PTO achievement
This is ok
Your streak is Under Review, plus ya lines are basic as shit
Most of ya wins have us in Wonderland…Analysis just a fitting nickname for this bitch
This is alright but again, kind of a lack in sting
You’re getting Housed faggot. From MY view, you better hope & pray pal
Fuck seein the living room from the kitchen. Have ya chest split on the floor - that’s an Open Layout
this is cool
Quit tryin faggot, when I pull it & blast you'll die & that’s it
I’ll take the cap off, put it up to ya lips and press like applying Chapstick
Ok
Whether it's topics or text, you’ll get wrecked in this hobby
That’s why ya technique is Under Construction…along with the rest of ya body
I must be missing something here
Ya lines leave me Floored, but beat me? I’ll make it hard, kid
Try to put Tac down & I’ll lay you on top & stomp like replacing carpet
Haha nice
You can't run, P. Wherever you go the piece will follow
Fuck a Horror flick, when the shells hit it's night night. I call it my Sleepy Hollow
Not feeling

Tough one to call. I got 4 from each that stood out to me. I felt like Pinot's verse was a little more simple (in a good way) and just gave off more swag. Tics looked as though it had been worded in such a way that it was getting a bit overcomplicated at times and as a result, some of the sting from the punches lacked. Both had some cool shit but I gotta go with Pinot. Enjoyed the read more and also felt that Block Buster was LOTB. Props to both

V/Pinot

[Hush]

Originally Posted by Pinot Grij

I roll thru your hood with AKs, sprayin’ errything like a crop duster
These bullets’ll stream thru every house and shut down your Block, buster
---the block buster angle is really played I see u tried to flip it diff here but I wasn't feeling this.
Think I won’t pop, then you’re stupid… that just means more to dump
Watch my shotty bang this retard, it’s like Jenny from Forrest Gump
---really simple and straight foward punch here . I don't find it clever or harsh tbh
I bet you’re a dud with the broads, you’re one ugly disgusting monster
Cuz when we see a Tic on a girl, she’s usually screaming to get it off her
---eh kinda simple
And a Tic is a parasite that needs a host - I'm tellin', yo
Judgin’ by all your gay moves, yours is probly the host of the Ellen show
---lol nah bro
You stay claimin’ you undefeated, denyin’ the losses you actually take
Ok, keep spinnin’ ya record 'til I pop you in the face, Jam Master Jay
---this is doper u kinda worded the punch in a way that's most most impactful for ur style
I’d never fuck your chick… her pussy’s so diseased, it’s a shame, bro
That’s why I only enter through her mouth… I call that bitch Castle Gray skull
---that's fire
And you’re a walkin’ STD.. that shit’s written all over your pitiful face
I mean, I could paint a picture, but I don’t wanna give voters visual AIDS
---omg super played
I got an iron will, how did you think I wouldn't defeat you???
C'mon, even a bitch could conquer your spirit - that's the Ghostbusters reboot
----ok

Seems like Pinot got bar fatigue here this is not the level of shit he been putting out week after week. Concepts weren't as fresh as usual

Originally Posted by Tic

That Tragic loss was hard, got cocky but he finished you, friend
So if your run was Forever, explain why when there's a battle w/ Infinite ends
---good wp this was aight
Plus you worked hard to rob Ill, it all seemed so convenient
You beat Nik on a Day Off. So congrats on Working Overtime for that PTO achievement
---nah just shit I don't relate to
Your streak is Under Review, plus ya lines are basic as shit
Most of ya wins have us in Wonderland…Analysis just a fitting nickname for this bitch
---awkward ass wp clever but I don't really fuck with the line
You’re getting Housed faggot. From MY view, you better hope & pray pal
Fuck seein the living room from the kitchen. Have ya chest split on the floor - that’s an Open Layout
---mad wordy this didn't hit so good
Quit tryin faggot, when I pull it & blast you'll die & that’s it
I’ll take the cap off, put it up to ya lips and press like applying Chapstick
---that's fire until I thought what does take the cap off mean in reference to a gun. Kinda don't make sense tbh
Whether it's topics or text, you’ll get wrecked in this hobby
That’s why ya technique is Under Construction…along with the rest of ya body
---um nah. Just don't make sense to me bro
Ya lines leave me Floored, but beat me? I’ll make it hard, kid
Try to put Tac down & I’ll lay you on top & stomp like replacing carpet
--cool idea but I'm not feeling ur wording this week
You can't run, P. Wherever you go the piece will follow
Fuck a Horror flick, when the shells hit it's night night. I call it my Sleepy Hollow
--- that's fire

This battle was aight Pinot surprised me with some of the angles he chose where as tic dissapoints with his wording choices here for me


Both had one fire ass line
Sleepy hollow vs gray skull


Both were killer


V Pinot

[JShazo]

dope on both ends, felt likt Pinot had afew more bars that hit harder, in his verse tho.

slight edge to pinot, but tic was good to tho

vote - pinot

[Allen Knight]

You stay claimin’ you undefeated, denyin’ the losses you actually take
Ok, keep spinnin’ ya record 'til I pop you in the face, Jam Master Jay
I’d never fuck your chick… her pussy’s so diseased, it’s a shame, bro
That’s why I only enter through her mouth… I call that bitch Castle Grayskull
And you’re a walkin’ STD.. that shit’s written all over your pitiful face
I mean, I could paint a picture, but I don’t wanna give voters visual AIDS
I got an iron will, how did you think I wouldn't defeat you???
C'mon, even a bitch could conquer your spirit - that's the Ghostbusters reboot

Vs

That Tragic loss was hard, got cocky but he finished you, friend
So if your run was Forever, explain why when there's a battle w/ Infinite ends
Plus you worked hard to rob Ill, it all seemed so convenient
You beat Nik on a Day Off. So congrats on Working Overtime for that PTO achievement
You can't run, P. Wherever you go the piece will follow
Fuck a Horror flick, when the shells hit it's night night. I call it my Sleepy Hollow


V/pinot, this was a cool battle, both had some bangers & misses...tics sleepy hollow jawn
was fire, i just feel like pinot had one more bar tbh this shit is close tho, but pinot
grayskull line was flames an record spin to, props to both guys here.

[Witty]

Pinot - I enjoyed every bar except the Tic on a girl bar, that was pretty weak, I liked the ellen bar, and that Jam Master Jay shit was fire.

Tic - didn't understand Under Construtction, open layout wasn't great, other than that I enjoyed the verse. Closer was dope as fuck.

Giving it to Pinot by one bar, dope battle, sorry for the short vote.

[Saint]

You stay claimin’ you undefeated, denyin’ the losses you actually take
Ok, keep spinnin’ ya record 'til I pop you in the face, Jam Master Jay
I’d never fuck your chick… her pussy’s so diseased, it’s a shame, bro
That’s why I only enter through her mouth… I call that bitch Castle Grayskull

vs


Plus you worked hard to rob Ill, it all seemed so convenient
You beat Nik on a Day Off. So congrats on Working Overtime for that PTO achievement
You can't run, P. Wherever you go the piece will follow
Fuck a Horror flick, when the shells hit it's night night. I call it my Sleepy Hollow


Both had some misses. Pinot in having that Ellen lime and a played visual aids line, tic just rushed wording on a few lines fell flat imo.. Concepts were ok, but like that opener coulda been better. I almost gave it to tic but castle greyskull might be lotb to me, then sleepy hollow, then pins jam master line..

so vote pinot