01-07-2022, 08:18 AM | #1 |
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shifting states
lets get off the beaten path skydiving into tractor beams
planting fields with magic beans in fractured dreams snapshots im capturing for the furthering of legend of twisted deep infernos forever churning in their remnants precision made pistons fire on the blood of gifted apes mystic shapes existence paints has shifting faces they gaze in misty mountains that open to a cave you dive deep within a chasm closing right behind your legs as time begins to slow it meets the crux of spinning atoms spirals bend in tandum helixes that flex with grinning phantoms the flicker of a halo starts to form above the scene vacuuming the essence it compresses to a seed a black moth appears above it flying off to breed off to the intended harbor of its genes farmers market of a dream where the beast peddles its eggs chickens hatching in quantum entanglements of legs this centipede weaves central themes throughout spaces of time divinely crafting ageless webs where legends age like wine near mountain tops where Zeus still lives in anvils made of clouds lightning strikes display his anger booming thunder raining down Thors hammer makes this sound in the forging of four blades meant to slaughter a foreign army that's swarming over banks meeting the force with all his rage slicing through their ranks a berserker wields an axe bleeding from his eyes double edges splitting waves of men in half eating them alive fleeing from demise past a four armed soldier standing on his ground each hand holding kukris pointing up and pointing down the berzerker hears a spark ignite gas rising from beneath and he charges frothing at the mouth cracking all his teeth in a fountain of fire two blades cross the axes shaft as the others chop his legs off before slicing him in half yellow eyes appear before him and rise up in looming walls and the air around him hisses as the mutant just dissolves turning into a cloud of smoke that reappears on a shore filled with bloating corpses on pyres all waiting for his torch lighting the tinder purges his brothers of their loss before he turns into a giant raven flying further on to God |
01-07-2022, 09:52 PM | #2 |
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Very impressive Pat.
For the record I enjoyed this much more than some of your Hell Volumes. Reason being, I thought this displayed your technical prowess. Beginning the next line with a rhyme from the last, impressive syllable matching and flow, quality imagery, interesting phraseology and intriguing subject matter. Overall a very quality drop from a veteran and I knew you had it in you. |
01-07-2022, 10:34 PM | #3 |
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thanks bro. appreciate the feed.
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