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Old 02-28-2022, 12:43 PM   #1
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Catch a tigers toe, a liars nose with a wired phone.
Couldn't find the disconnect even with a dial tone.
Knock, knock, I am home where the giants roam.
David slung rock, brought down an empire's glow...
To the sky I go, high off familiarity & childish prose
You're still trying to find the right type of milestone.
I applaud that, weather the storm & all beyond that.
You withered in form a hard sail for a washed act.
Get blazed off contact, fly by like me...yeah I saw that.
Seesaw'd back on my own weight alone, take a note.
Take two, simulate sitcom over mistaken quotes.
Third party rituals written within the sacred tome.
Resurrection process en route in the shape of hope.
Prophesized in forsaken shows of affection.
Ideas that lack direction with emotional baggage...
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Old 02-28-2022, 08:53 PM   #2
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Good to seeing you still rocking tightly!
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Old 03-08-2022, 10:46 PM   #3
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Yo J this was dope. good word choice. nice rhymes. strong mechanics.
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I'll get to this

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Just more solid mechanics from J,
who was dropping chit like a pigeon on cyphers even before me & jesodist & 2trip & whoever else back in the day...
BUT it was usually decent -to- good chit, cuz he is technically proficient when he constructs.
Read this ONCE and it's all right there. He clicked send on the final draft, after all the important cypher warmups...

Liked his GWL verses from 2 yrs ago too, and good day to the J the joker himself
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