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Old 10-13-2021, 10:36 AM   #1
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When did this drunk bum make a life of this living...
"Blows like piss" ... not just for a DUI but feedback from the cops who didnt try to resist him

Fagture let's be clear we was never "friends" lmao


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my man, only way to settle this is 16 bars
I rock presteen on the beat, I'm the bigger the splendor..
You drop 16 with no heat like a cigarette vendor
Fracture, racist cracker reins as forgetful flabby and fray...
An Alcoholic n' 6 Dick's in the ass, as he wakes..
tripple double no. shots to remind him that he's actually gay
His first words "of daddy love me!" belligerent...
But no man could love he, son is ugly, donning buck teeth, not even jay z could give a 50 cent
To the sky with ya kid, ima king don't make me taunt ya
Only time you catching a body, is when u try swings with ya baby daughter
I got nothing to lose, it's a badge no high skill can jab me
But you rocking HOEtel a manager, like your face fits the title EXACTLY
Plus your raps were always lumped as crazy soft
I pull the sheet over my victims, you do it to beds with cum as a daily job
Only time I'd ever lie...there's no answering back
As only an oxymoron would say Fractures can't crack
I'll drop here, leave you lonely and ALL at a lonesome end
Especially he don't pepsi and we all know now Cokes his only friend
Wait that's Kung I'm not baggin on, he's the one with the jokes again
You're just the tag along except Aloes phorce not here to help you win
/\ you used to call that shit rap creativity
I call it basic but the only shit that ever matched ya credibility
Only on this site is you ever near a class killing me
Even then it's ya friends that it really be bringing heat
And even they silly weak like your titties and shitty speak with ya rejunivity…!?
Thinking you dope online!?
lulz yeah fracs that kid again on a rare pillow mission...
But you spent ya life on the web longer than a dead widow victim
Fuck ya lttle bitchin, you were just an Epi likened Aloe clone..
But with more holes and no shows than new splicing at home zones
Saving this no hope, Not even sharp E Ts and are asking u to go hoe
Put a boxcutter snigger to this bum wigga across ya face
U living in a box as a winner, cuz simply any bigger youd get lost in space
Always online so guess u rationed the world
So I guess your polished, just as NCs are sand blasting ya girl
Im serving up home sups, from raw to pure skill...
If you oaks your home bru? let me feed ya an English board to your grill !
Got a little personal, spitting it to check this hoe
Asked for a verse to settle it, but you gon need a lifetime prescription of omeprezol
So worn out...death is seen as a marriage your purpose pursues…
With a face sunning so much exposure Hiroshima charities are working for you
Until they seen it in person, then just decided on murdering drew
What a worthless pursuit, like any verse you refute...this my last post to give words to the truth...
Ur nothing but ugly lightwork, here's how to answer it best...
I never "switched up" on you, that just what ya girl does when you ask her for sex…
I mean both are off! whether it's at the wall or the task she invests...
Unstable as ever, so let me kick this joke stand
Only time you've really "held it together" is a Kung and zuch dick in both hands
An ur petty pathetic, Ur shit at any stunt he passes
I've never needed to step it up, like u when you quit your Zumba classes..
As ur real life record reflects when he jumps he fractures...

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Old 10-13-2021, 10:38 AM   #2
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Lirerally makes me uneasy having barons pic there plus can't stoop as low as he is right now. Lmao
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Old 10-13-2021, 12:35 PM   #3
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Ur lines always been stagnant & poor
Fracs a legend, you've always just been a punching bag on the boards
U fucking suck. I'm a veteran dude
Bobby A, Bobby B, Bobby C, &Bobby E could probably do it better than you
Reading that verse was a ridiculous chore
Sounded like you were complimenting me with insults as British as yours
Ayo Prince Charles. Diminish your lips
Then maybe Baron Mynd could probably give u some tips
You're a fag in a box.
I saw 'rejuvinity' and 'sniggered' and knew this shit was a lock
I know ur determined. I totally know
You've got drive, too bad its on the wrong side of the road
The Bobbies are cops, thats totally true
But even those faggots pack more firepower than you
Hey wanna hear a Bobby line? If you really do
Jimeny jillikers chim chimery friggedy froo
Cool insults bro. I'm worthy tonight
You haven't been past the first round of a tourney in life
Dont even talk knowledge to me
Coming from a country where chimney sweeping is a college degree
U just need to stop then
I will when someone names Bobby D in their top 10



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Old 10-13-2021, 03:39 PM   #4
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Lol@ you in my DMs apologizing like a little girl then trying to act tough on the boards. Bobby ur a fag oh and that verse was fucking terrible
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Old 10-15-2021, 05:24 AM   #5
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Fractures can’t crack isn’t an oxymoron, btw
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Old 09-06-2022, 05:29 PM   #6
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Why isn’t anyone voting on this?
Let’s move on people.

Fracture
More consistent, coherent,
rebuttal was funny and relatable after reading Bobby’s lines.
Less was more here.
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Old 09-09-2022, 05:22 AM   #7
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The standard amount of cigs in a pack is 20. Fracture’s virgin ass for some fuck all reason thinks there’s 16.

Automatic loss.

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Old 09-21-2022, 01:35 PM   #8
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@Frac I need confirmation that this indeed was your verse. If not, I will open this up for feed.
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Old 03-02-2023, 10:56 PM   #9
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Um. Despite total lack of context or history for this battle, I will drop a vote / little feedback here this weekend.
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***OKayy,,

ANd, I swear, this is NOT from rapping-fatigue, or "reading-eyeball" fatigue...well maybe a little... no more than 10%

But, I thought Bobby D's first (let's go down & check) ....


When did this drunk bum make a life of this living...
"Blows like piss" ... not just for a DUI but feedback from the cops who didnt try to resist him

Fagture let's be clear we was never "friends" lmao


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my man, only way to settle this is 16 bars

I rock presteen on the beat, I'm the bigger the splendor..
You drop 16 with no heat like a cigarette vendor
Fracture, racist cracker reins as forgetful flabby and fray...
An Alcoholic n' 6 Dick's in the ass, as he wakes..
tripple double no. shots to remind him that he's actually gay
His first words "of daddy love me!" belligerent...
But no man could love he, son is ugly, donning buck teeth, not even jay z could give a 50 cent
To the sky with ya kid, ima king don't make me taunt ya
Only time you catching a body, is when u try swings with ya baby daughter
I got nothing to lose, it's a badge no high skill can jab me
But you rocking HOEtel a manager, like your face fits the title EXACTLY
Plus your raps were always lumped as crazy soft
I pull the sheet over my victims, you do it to beds with cum as a daily job
Only time I'd ever lie...there's no answering back
As only an oxymoron would say Fractures can't crack
I'll drop here, leave you lonely and ALL at a lonesome end
Especially he don't pepsi and we all know now Cokes his only friend
Wait that's Kung I'm not baggin on, he's the one with the jokes again
You're just the tag along except Aloes phorce not here to help you win
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Think this part is fire... loved the swing wordplay.. @Bobby D it appears I "bit" a "capped" "Exactly.": in my most recent audio track... it MAY have been subconsciously (as I see this is '21...there is also a (bit smaller) chance it was coincidental...as it fit in properly with a string of 4-5 other rhymes I'd done for writing the line,, at the time...with the "soft a & hard e (y)" vowel sound 2syllables... right? Nice...
But, I don't wanna h8 or sound too harsh (or Maybe I do?)....after that I think the verse really falls off (not QUITE) off a cliff..but close...with some old/boring rhymes, hard/or bad/or lazy near rhymes, "freestylie" type execution and writing (unliiiike the above quoted section that I like.)...

Whereas your opponent @kungfugrip (and i don't know if he or @Fracture wrote it)...
HE DIDNT HAVE TO SAY IT THAT IT WAS A CHORE TO GET THRU BOBBY'S VERSE...
Despite the fire start, the middle and finale were rough FOR Bobby....and, he, kung or Frac, did end up saying it, and writing a verrry simple (but safe...and well executed (I thought FOR the most part....)verse ...he had (for the reader) even more "really do" "friggedy froo" "mockery" from fracOrkung here....which is one of my only knocks on an other wise safe/simple verse?

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It's opening fire... and then a chore.....vs... a safe but very respectabe/nice knock/clapback at the opponent.... (albeit a diff. length? by far)....

V Frac/kung by a hair... ONLY because
I'm judging whole verses!!!!!!!!

(IF I go by Italicized quoted section Bobby would take!)

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Old 04-06-2023, 08:53 PM   #11
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I mean, I did write this whole verse tho because I knew Fracture wouldn't show
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Fractures can’t crack isn’t an oxymoron, btw
A fracture by definition is a crack

Now let's all smoke it
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A fracture by definition is a crack

Now let's all smoke it
Do you have any personal opinions on why Bobby's opening bars were fire followed by freestyle "chore" filler?

I mean he won if we go by first openers - line length match


But YOU/ (not frac i guess?) just took the safer "close dub"

Did @Bobby D polish his opening and "key" the rest?
Or did he have a ghostwriter legend open for him as he dropped the rest of the "chore" Lol.

Just asking Kung in my Gay way = for your opinion,to keep this upped and maybe a vote or 2 more to close. ~
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I wrote the whole verse. Frac would have never wrote
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Also, I don't remember writing this at all
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It was pretty dope for a blackout verse tho
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@Frac I need confirmation that this indeed was your verse. If not, I will open this up for feed.
Yeah this is Frac and it's all good
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It really wasn’t.
I remember sweeping you with a blackout verse too lmao
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