WK 6: Champion: DynamiCz 3-2 vs. Jabari Black 3-2 - Jabari Black WINS!!

[Incredible]

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due FRIDAY JUNE 1st! and will be open until Sunday.
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• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 12, maximum of 20
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.

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• 1st Person can edit until his opponent drops
• 2nd Person can edit until the first vote is posted

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@DynamiCz @Jabari Black

[Jabari Black]

Check. 16-20?

[DynamiCz]

16 is cooley….

[Jabari Black]

Ext

[DynamiCz]

All G

[DynamiCz]

Catch him at the studio! I got plans to have you permanently snoozing
Fresh pack, I keep a coo stick! Shots spread Black across the wall like soundproofing
You hallucinate! Make ya character see illusions where death send ya
Fire at his face! In disorder I can fuck up his speech & thinking-schizophrenia
Think its a game? I'm zombie walking through the house w/ this heavy K
Let off shots! Then watch heart plague fall out a dead guy..thats State Of Decay
The gun transform! I'll have it standing on wheels when i aim the shot
When 4 arms on the machine waving at the flesh, it ain't a Da Vinci Robot
Thought you could eat in public! Fuck the chicken plate when the eagle on ya
Birds flying until the wings spread out on ya shirt-Hollister California
You in a bender, guns on each side i can slide the clip like it's Tinder
Red beams left to right on his outfit-resemble buttons on chucky suspenders
They predicted me a slim chance, disrespected me like your gun bars to advance
In Atl you a buckhead resident! The closest JB will get to Shoot-is a Blocboy dance
Glock beside me modified, you let them amp you up! Now you in the way of harm
The metal gauntlets flash on the side of his temple like Thanos Arm

[Jabari Black]

My nigga....

This’ll be Frieza vs Goku...when Frieza tried to win by blowing the planet up/
Translation: Win or lose, this battle will fuck Namek up/
You road kill. Drive by in the old DeVille. I’m in the fo’ door letting the fo’ peel/
If this hoe live? Come right back n ‘get another shot at the champ’...Flo Real/
The ‘desert flipping shit’ like a tumble weed when I burst eagles/
Or I’ll lift the Smith...and have it ‘pointed at ya roof’ like a church steeple/
The shit I’m blaming leaving heavy damage. Ya whole chest open when I aim shells/
Bystanders’ll ‘C in the middle of DynamiCz’ like how ya dumbass name spelled/
This the End of the Road. I’m letting the four sing like Boys II Men/
Or a K to ya ribcage...‘I gotta stick by ya side’ like a loyal friend/
Catch you in traffic and slump ya quick. Leave ya head hanging from ya whip/
After the Mac spit - ya wig falling out the window on some Rapunzel shit/
Send shooter to ya crib. Snipers in the grass - fully prone to keep the scope stable/
My niggas laying on the ground with the arms waving...they making snow angels/
But we don’t really need slugs. Pull up with a bat and start smashing D’s mugs/
Now his cranium cracked with his eyes ‘hanging out the socket’ like a febreeze plug/

[GUDELJ]

Catch him at the studio! I got plans to have you permanently snoozing
Fresh pack, I keep a coo stick! Shots spread Black across the wall like soundproofing
OK here, could have been nice but I felt it was forced
You hallucinate! Make ya character see illusions where death send ya
Fire at his face! In disorder I can fuck up his speech & thinking-schizophrenia
i wanted to like this cause I get it but I wasn’t feein it bru, kinda forced here as well
Think its a game? I'm zombie walking through the house w/ this heavy K
Let off shots! Then watch heart plague fall out a dead guy..thats State Of Decay
i think the wording in the second line was off, if not I just didn’t get the bolded portion
The gun transform! I'll have it standing on wheels when i aim the shot
When 4 arms on the machine waving at the flesh, it ain't a Da Vinci Robot
alright this was cool, could have finished smoother but nonetheless I liked it
Thought you could eat in public! Fuck the chicken plate when the eagle on ya
Birds flying until the wings spread out on ya shirt-Hollister California
idk if it’s just my quality of imagination but if this is what I think it means....then this is bonkers....NICEE
You in a bender, guns on each side i can slide the clip like it's Tinder
Red beams left to right on his outfit-resemble buttons on chucky suspenders
nahhh
They predicted me a slim chance, disrespected me like your gun bars to advance
In Atl you a buckhead resident! The closest JB will get to Shoot-is a Blocboy dance
lol made me laugh. Decent here
Glock beside me modified, you let them amp you up! Now you in the way of harm
The metal gauntlets flash on the side of his temple like Thanos Arm
alright

Vs



This’ll be Frieza vs Goku...when Frieza tried to win by blowing the planet up/
Translation: Win or lose, this battle will fuck Namek up/
lol damn this was creative af, good nameplay. I liked this bar a lot
You road kill. Drive by in the old DeVille. I’m in the fo’ door letting the fo’ peel/
If this hoe live? Come right back n ‘get another shot at the champ’...Flo Real/
this would have been good in a SnF verse but it’s exacrly that, loses impact. Decent here
The ‘desert flipping shit’ like a tumble weed when I burst eagles/
Or I’ll lift the Smith...and have it ‘pointed at ya roof’ like a church steeple/
alright
The shit I’m blaming leaving heavy damage. Ya whole chest open when I aim shells/
Bystanders’ll ‘C in the middle of DynamiCz’ like how ya dumbass name spelled/
nah wasn’t feelin this
This the End of the Road. I’m letting the four sing like Boys II Men/
Or a K to ya ribcage...‘I gotta stick by ya side’ like a loyal friend/
yoooooooooooo this was fucking crazy. DOPE & sigged
Catch you in traffic and slump ya quick. Leave ya head hanging from ya whip/
After the Mac spit - ya wig falling out the window on some Rapunzel shit/
mmm decent, had potential for more if you had done it a bit differently
Send shooter to ya crib. Snipers in the grass - fully prone to keep the scope stable/
My niggas laying on the ground with the arms waving...they making snow angels/
this line looks familiar but I can’t put a finger on it. Aside from that this was nice
But we don’t really need slugs. Pull up with a bat and start smashing D’s mugs/
Now his cranium cracked with his eyes ‘hanging out the socket’ like a febreeze plug/
fabreese plug has eyes? I don’t get this lol


Pretty good battle guys. I’m impressed with a lot of these lines and concepts. You both are dope and creative and it’s only up from here. Both had quality lines and misses as wel. I have Jabari with the better lines though, stick by ya side like a loyal friend was so fuckin fire like damn smh. This could be close but.


Vote Jabari Black

[BodySnatcher]

Catch him at the studio! I got plans to have you permanently snoozing
Fresh pack, I keep a coo stick! Shots spread Black across the wall like soundproofing
lol coo opener
You hallucinate! Make ya character see illusions where death send ya
Fire at his face! In disorder I can fuck up his speech & thinking-schizophrenia
a lot going on here bud
Think its a game? I'm zombie walking through the house w/ this heavy K
Let off shots! Then watch heart plague fall out a dead guy..thats State Of Decay
ehh
The gun transform! I'll have it standing on wheels when i aim the shot
When 4 arms on the machine waving at the flesh, it ain't a Da Vinci Robot
ok ok
Thought you could eat in public! Fuck the chicken plate when the eagle on ya
Birds flying until the wings spread out on ya shirt-Hollister California
dope
You in a bender, guns on each side i can slide the clip like it's Tinder
Red beams left to right on his outfit-resemble buttons on chucky suspenders
stretch...st8 tho
They predicted me a slim chance, disrespected me like your gun bars to advance
In Atl you a buckhead resident! The closest JB will get to Shoot-is a Blocboy dance
lol dope
Glock beside me modified, you let them amp you up! Now you in the way of harm
The metal gauntlets flash on the side of his temple like Thanos Arm
st8 closer

2 uppercuts, 4 jabs, 2 body shots


This’ll be Frieza vs Goku...when Frieza tried to win by blowing the planet up/
Translation: Win or lose, this battle will fuck Namek up/
damn, dope n/p
You road kill. Drive by in the old DeVille. I’m in the fo’ door letting the fo’ peel/
If this hoe live? Come right back n ‘get another shot at the champ’...Flo Real/
i fuck with this
The ‘desert flipping shit’ like a tumble weed when I burst eagles/
Or I’ll lift the Smith...and have it ‘pointed at ya roof’ like a church steeple/
st8
The shit I’m blaming leaving heavy damage. Ya whole chest open when I aim shells/
Bystanders’ll ‘C in the middle of DynamiCz’ like how ya dumbass name spelled/
eh
This the End of the Road. I’m letting the four sing like Boys II Men/
Or a K to ya ribcage...‘I gotta stick by ya side’ like a loyal friend/
LOTB
Catch you in traffic and slump ya quick. Leave ya head hanging from ya whip/
After the Mac spit - ya wig falling out the window on some Rapunzel shit/
fuck with this
Send shooter to ya crib. Snipers in the grass - fully prone to keep the scope stable/
My niggas laying on the ground with the arms waving...they making snow angels/
ehhh
But we don’t really need slugs. Pull up with a bat and start smashing D’s mugs/
Now his cranium cracked with his eyes ‘hanging out the socket’ like a febreeze plug/
I like this

2 uppercuts, 4 jabs, 2 body shots

I got this even but I got Jabari with the LOTB and the win. Dope battle fellas and a close one to call. Good Championship match.

[2tripple0]

Yeah jabari got this....

[Twodrop]

Originally Posted by DynamiCz

Catch him at the studio! I got plans to have you permanently snoozing
Fresh pack, I keep a coo stick! Shots spread Black across the wall like soundproofing
yah, this was nice
You hallucinate! Make ya character see illusions where death send ya
Fire at his face! In disorder I can fuck up his speech & thinking-schizophrenia
had potential to be dope, wording made it awkward for me
Think its a game? I'm zombie walking through the house w/ this heavy K
Let off shots! Then watch heart plague fall out a dead guy..thats State Of Decay
ya, similar to what Zelph said, watch heart plague fall out a dead guy threw me off, this is eh
The gun transform! I'll have it standing on wheels when i aim the shot
When 4 arms on the machine waving at the flesh, it ain't a Da Vinci Robot
ok, this is coo
Thought you could eat in public! Fuck the chicken plate when the eagle on ya
Birds flying until the wings spread out on ya shirt-Hollister California
lol, i fuck w/ this heavy haha
You in a bender, guns on each side i can slide the clip like it's Tinder
Red beams left to right on his outfit-resemble buttons on chucky suspenders
ok
They predicted me a slim chance, disrespected me like your gun bars to advance
In Atl you a buckhead resident! The closest JB will get to Shoot-is a Blocboy dance
lmao! this that ish muff posted? ha... Had to look it up, but this is funny
Glock beside me modified, you let them amp you up! Now you in the way of harm
The metal gauntlets flash on the side of his temple like Thanos Arm
just ok to me

Originally Posted by Jabari Black

My nigga....

This’ll be Frieza vs Goku...when Frieza tried to win by blowing the planet up/
Translation: Win or lose, this battle will fuck Namek up/
creative, dope opener
You road kill. Drive by in the old DeVille. I’m in the fo’ door letting the fo’ peel/
If this hoe live? Come right back n ‘get another shot at the champ’...Flo Real/
wasn't feeling this
The ‘desert flipping shit’ like a tumble weed when I burst eagles/
Or I’ll lift the Smith...and have it ‘pointed at ya roof’ like a church steeple/
coo
The shit I’m blaming leaving heavy damage. Ya whole chest open when I aim shells/
Bystanders’ll ‘C in the middle of DynamiCz’ like how ya dumbass name spelled/
umm... ehhhh to me
This the End of the Road. I’m letting the four sing like Boys II Men/
Or a K to ya ribcage...‘I gotta stick by ya side’ like a loyal friend/
yah this is fire, agree LOTB
Catch you in traffic and slump ya quick. Leave ya head hanging from ya whip/
After the Mac spit - ya wig falling out the window on some Rapunzel shit/
ok
Send shooter to ya crib. Snipers in the grass - fully prone to keep the scope stable/
My niggas laying on the ground with the arms waving...they making snow angels/
lol this was dope
But we don’t really need slugs. Pull up with a bat and start smashing D’s mugs/
Now his cranium cracked with his eyes ‘hanging out the socket’ like a febreeze plug/
fucks w/ this, cool closer

I can see this going either way but Jabari had the KO punch w/ that loyal friend line and seemed to be a bit more consistent throughout his verse. I really enjoy both of your styles, props for showing and giving us a champ match this week.

v/ Jabari Black

[Flow]

D had the opener which was fire, schitz wotding was poor in execution, state of decay wording let it down but liked the idea, i get da vinci but didnt like it, cali t was cool, red beams wording was perfect but as a concept i found it lacked sting but it did work so not a niss, blocboy ok, thanos stuff always seems played to mr at the moment.

Vs

Opener was cool, flo real sounds great, its not super creative or conplex as a concept though, smith ok, nice attempt eith bystanders but it didnt work, loyal friend was clever liked it, rapunzel works, snow angels was lotb for me, febrrrze cool.

Black went quite gun bar heavy would be my only issue with his verse. Not sure if you agreed to make this a gun bar battle too lazy to look up now. Either way black had the better stuff here. D brought usual style but his wording lacked sting in some bars.

V Black

[Cereal]

Dy:
soundproofing nice/
thats State Of Decay nice as well
you let them amp you up!
tight..

Black:
Bystanders’ll ‘C in the middle of DynamiCz’ like how ya dumbass name spelled/..
like it..
some Rapunzel shit/
nice..
with the arms waving...they making snow angels/
nice..

vote = jabari black

all in all good verse just more my style punches..