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07-24-2014, 01:32 PM
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07-24-2014, 02:23 PM
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Your male maintenance is suspect… you either gay or borderline, dude…
But If you’re gonna come out the closet... could you at least close the door behind you… You can tell I git these grands… but for guys like you… I feel shitty man… When you have to cop your watch from the same machine that sells those sticky hands… I think the mall salesman… lied to you and played you, square… Because I’ve never seen one J. Crew where… they agree to sell beige wu wear… this Hollywood actor mash-up… needs a nickname that will ring true… Hey “Hamm-Hawkes”… give Jon his hair back… and Ethan back his chin pubes… You’re a coke addict… snow for the sniff … you stay blowin that shit… that’s why you can post thumbnails… but made sure they wouldn’t show in the pic… if you beat me, no sweat… I’m fuckin bitches while you struggle to… ya shirt can spell it out… stupid… U will still be single after this double-u… Last edited by illergicreaxion; 07-24-2014 at 02:51 PM. |
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07-24-2014, 03:50 PM
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I'm the bossss in a set, you just awkward at text Damn. You posted an ugly Black & White pic & I ain't even talking effects Dude ain't raising a weapon & got a basiccc impression Wow.. My man rocking a Cone Head that'd improve Road Safety in seconds Last night I got wasteeed in the club n let it fade to black Evidently you Satin ya house w/ two losers wearing shirts made from that I've smashed on Planes & neverrr met with resistance If you in the Mile High club too. it's cuz ya head stretches that Distance I ain't feeling the Bald swagger & I doubt u steal hoes Congrats. This looks like a Party celebrating ya first couple bouts of Chemo Standing with 2 white black dudes & stunting like u rolling w/ legends Dog. Those eyes got a Glazed look that'd getcha Glass Jaw broken in seconds |
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07-24-2014, 04:56 PM
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Thread cleaned. Get links up asap please.
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07-24-2014, 05:27 PM
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Your male maintenance is suspect… you either gay or borderline, dude…
But If you’re gonna come out the closet... could you at least close the door behind you… Played concept, but your best bar, IMO. You had A LOT of wording and execution issues, bro. vs Dude ain't raising a weapon & got a basiccc impression Wow.. My man rocking a Cone Head that'd improve Road Safety in seconds I've smashed on Planes & neverrr met with resistance If you in the Mile High club too. it's cuz ya head stretches that Distance I ain't feeling the Bald swagger & I doubt u steal hoes Congrats. This looks like a Party celebrating ya first couple bouts of Chemo Fuckin dope!! In bold are FIRE and also nearly killed me w/ laughter LMFAO, props son. This was pretty one sided. Quotes in BOLD from Orc alone took this battle, IMO LMFAO. Ill had a lot of wording an execution issues and even tho the concept/bar I quoted from him was/is played, it was pretty relevant he used the picture well to reference that, lol. v/Orc |
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07-24-2014, 05:36 PM
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Your male maintenance is suspect… you either gay or borderline, dude… But If you’re gonna come out the closet... could you at least close the door behind you… Decent You can tell I git these grands… but for guys like you… I feel shitty man… When you have to cop your watch from the same machine that sells those sticky hands… heh I think the mall salesman… lied to you and played you, square… Because I’ve never seen one J. Crew where… they agree to sell beige wu wear… lmao this Hollywood actor mash-up… needs a nickname that will ring true… Hey “Hamm-Hawkes”… give Jon his hair back… and Ethan back his chin pubes… ehh You’re a coke addict… snow for the sniff … you stay blowin that shit… that’s why you can post thumbnails… but made sure they wouldn’t show in the pic… Nice if you beat me, no sweat… I’m fuckin bitches while you struggle to… ya shirt can spell it out… stupid… U will still be single after this double-u… Nah Orc I'm the bossss in a set, you just awkward at text Damn. You posted an ugly Black & White pic & I ain't even talking effects Ehh, no hit Dude ain't raising a weapon & got a basiccc impression Wow.. My man rocking a Cone Head that'd improve Road Safety in seconds Cool Last night I got wasteeed in the club n let it fade to black Evidently you Satin ya house w/ two losers wearing shirts made from that Basic-ish I've smashed on Planes & neverrr met with resistance If you in the Mile High club too. it's cuz ya head stretches that Distance lol I ain't feeling the Bald swagger & I doubt u steal hoes Congrats. This looks like a Party celebrating ya first couple bouts of Chemo ehh Standing with 2 white black dudes & stunting like u rolling w/ legends Dog. Those eyes got a Glazed look that'd getcha Glass Jaw broken in seconds lol I have illergic winning here, I thought it was funnier. |
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07-25-2014, 05:49 PM
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Thought was a great battle. Thought ill was dope n had me thinkn he could pull an upset for a second but orc murked.
The chemo. Conehead. N mile hih bars were death. Ill had a cool verse but enough. V orc |
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07-25-2014, 06:58 PM
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Nice battle. Both had some strong bars.
Ill Your male maintenance is suspect… you either gay or borderline, dude… But If you’re gonna come out the closet... could you at least close the door behind you… Lmao dope opener man if you beat me, no sweat… I’m fuckin bitches while you struggle to… ya shirt can spell it out… stupid… U will still be single after this double-u… Nice closer. These were my two favorite bars you had. Orc. I'm the bossss in a set, you just awkward at text Damn. You posted an ugly Black & White pic & I ain't even talking effects Lmao, this was real sick man. Good shit. Last night I got wasteeed in the club n let it fade to black Evidently you Satin ya house w/ two losers wearing shirts made from that Basic although straight to the point. Like this alot. Standing with 2 white black dudes & stunting like u rolling w/ legends Dog. Those eyes got a Glazed look that'd getcha Glass Jaw broken in seconds Wow. Ill as fuck. Vote - Orc More consistent. Nice battle
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07-26-2014, 11:42 AM
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Aye i got orc taking this as well thot illergic kind of fell off half way thro and orcs shit read a lot easier. Illergic had trouble complethng his thouhts which made it harder to read so for those reasons im giving it to orc
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07-26-2014, 09:37 PM
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Nice battle.
Both verses were funny. Both attack the pics. The difference maker was orc creativity in his lines. Minus his last 2 bars I felt his verse was pretty fire. Ill verse was good. Especially for a pic battle, but it was basic like good. The creativity gave orc verse the boost it needed which is why he gmv V. Burd |
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07-27-2014, 06:46 PM
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Orc wins 5-1.
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