04-18-2019, 12:38 PM | #1 |
Everything's Connected
Join Date: Nov 2017
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Erosion
"We are like children building a sand castle. We embellish it with beautiful shells, bits of driftwood, and pieces of colored glass. The castle is ours, off limits to others. We’re willing to attack if others threaten to hurt it. Yet despite all our attachment, we know that the tide will inevitably come in and sweep the sand castle away." - Pema Chodron
...... I earned that ask don't tell rep, if there's a map you've found X You're the loll in the action like a laugh out loud text Passed all field tests, my ass trapped in steel mesh Like lab rats that feel threats you just lack mice kill set My skill set; I rhyme in sterile environments I admit I'm high as shit so every stair I'll climb is slick Feel the climate shift, I'm an astrologer on a diet bitch Y'all spoiled beef so I'm avoiding the meteor side of this... Move the needle like lie detectors, y'all repeat the process So If I'm being honest it seems I'm not seeing progress I mean you dropped this foreign concept I just couldn't honor So don't speak in Arabic like lighters up at concerts Don't speak n' air-a-bic? lighter? Whatever kid I'd rather be a has-been (laden?) than a never is If y'all the shit then I'm the hunger in your stomach, listen... Cuz if you winnin' a tournament it's only because I wasn't in it Everyone's a critic, but only a few reply If I blew your mind I've proven why your stupid guys A new hybrid computer virus couldn't reboot my drive Nukes collide, bet it's roaches and netcees who survive... The truest lie states a guy in the sky can save us But this wreck-creation like an undeniable science equation Before I-sonned you came a heightened sense of danger Strange ice won't ever age ya like a cryogenic chamber To stay in form I brainstorm but I'm payin' for it Cuz when it rains it's porn, that's why I stay indoors Nah, when it rains it pores that's why my face is sore Shit, I'm agent orange inside the rainforest I'm staining doors, painting floors, renovate my droors Watch apocalypse now eighty four times just to say "the whore" Like a dirty bathroom door, I get ya "flew" off the handle... But you too numb to channel emotion so you shut the panel I'll jump you randoms, causing heart attacks like inducting Anvil Then kill everything you held dear like a hunter's mantle Come with meta-force, you're just another dumb white soldier Luke warm like Skywalker on some island boulder I use my art-to-detour, students fill some blind quota... But if you my final pupil then I don't care one iota (One eye Yoda) I'm dying to show the hole I cleared Still appears I can't kill your whole career? Hold my beer It's cold in here, as if I found cracked lips abound Massive word of mouth wouldn't make ya chaps stick around Must be dreamin' pal, cuz everything I'm reading now... Got me catching Z's like zombies left to feed when bound Take the scenic route, a recent drought left sleep in doubt So I seek rest out like Ryan when he leaves his house No easy passage, harder on myself then a teen's Cialis I'll take a leave of absence when I take Aleve with absinthe Throw T3's in the mattress, teeth freeze then extract it Plus Ativan (add-a-van) to complete my kid nap kit Nothing's sacred it's tragic, they even remaking Aladdin Put all my eggs in one basket like when a pregnant slut cashed in You ain't dump that bitch bro, yes men are the last to know... You lads just go pen and tell her like a magic show How apropos, an app proposed I interact with hoes... Then ads just opened that were shown too fast to close (shit) Most have a little spat hence, their spit is past tense Grass is greener on the other side but who positioned that fence? I'm skippin' ahead, I won't once try to run Night has come, mourning ya death like a vampires son So if I'm stuck up like biters trying to hide the gum... It's cuz the guys who bit me are the guys you biting from (boom) Brides adore rich grooms but time divorces too So why abort her womb, I can't afford to lose She wore my heart on her sleeve so I'm guarding her needs I hope she lets me go steady like Charlie Murphy Pardon me, run it back, I think they hardly heard me I said I hope she lets me ghost-eddie like Charlie Murphy Plus ya girl seems turnt like those white drunk teen nerds But hey, I hershey squirts so I'm undie-turd... I meant I heard she squirts so I'm undeterred But not having to sugar coat words is much preferred I'm army reserves, went to Paris to cope with a death Of a sub-marine, and that doesn't mean at periscope depth With labored breath, takin' bets a baby's in the future It's like a real estate listing viewer the way I give it to her Give a tour; I stalk your art though The still at large clone of Paul Bernardo in the malls of Scarborough Follow bar codes: keep short and sweet or it all seems rote Might not be over until you hear a swan song's key note But I'll Be Gone In The Dark watching most a y'all erode Like Michelle McNamara's novel... so that's all she wrote. |
05-18-2019, 02:19 AM | #2 | |
The Clown Prince
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once that time has passed I will return with serious pander about this piece
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05-18-2019, 03:58 AM | #3 |
Badgerdick
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Dope.
Enjoyed meteor side of this, when it rains it’s porn, and Aleve with absinthe |
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