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Old 05-17-2019, 06:59 PM   #1
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They got that elephant’s memory - yall are never forgetting me
so tell em to keep it moving, tap potential kinetically
you light in the field, diracs don’t come w/ negative energy
know how to get a reaction, that's just a question of chemistry
put everything on the table, tell em check it w/ mendeleev
the bulk of my jeans tighter, that means i'm better genetically
those before me passed on - gave me a sense of heredity
That’s why this gift ain’t a surprise - they had it set in the registry
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idk why u thought there'd be something at the end of the credits scene

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Old 05-17-2019, 09:24 PM   #2
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Multi scheme was fire

Liked henna sleeve and some other clever metas

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Old 09-15-2019, 12:47 AM   #4
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Old 09-15-2019, 10:00 AM   #5
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don't know why this didn't get more distinction.


a lot of quotables. some times i think it may have gotten tacky but then the next line would just be another smooth transition, with another clever little attachment. the thing here was consistency which is a huge flaw in a lot of writing. you'll see 2-3 good lines then the rest just stumble in, taking away from the luster of the first few. but this was pretty good throughout. i liked the correlation of slang/euphemisms constantly, and being used with words that fit the scheme -(thats the crux of what you did) the flex piece was very cool. some ones made me chuckle, and you actually got a few thoughts across - religion, and the tel aviv reference. antivax gas dentist put together was cool. you can see the flow of your thoughts and the knowledge of things going on in the world to connect it better. really good put together
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If mentioned in a discussion its who'd still use wordy lines and act all dope
Then again hes had this schtick so long he like bb da bb da bb thats all folks
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Old 09-15-2019, 03:30 PM   #6
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Hello, Answer.

Nice to see you in these neck of the woods; this was quite the impressive display of rhyming; your talent is nice; and I enjoy your writing. Good work on this piece. The punchlines are quite dope as-well. Good work, you're a good rhymer and writer. Nice work, Answer..
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Your first 4 lines are just chea, fuckin' awesome...
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Did you spit this? Practice at all back when you wrote it?

I haven't. YET

Syllables counts look OK at a glance tonight. You're a good writer so I'm making an assumption that it'd work. But even if it's good, I don't know how so many rhymes in a row would sound.

With this many end rhymes there's GOT to be some reaches in there, but, let's just say I'm upping again for the culture and will try it when I'm free Friday night.

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That is the long way of saying let's give it the old college try. Shit's dope. don't get me wrong with the "sizing up" above.

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Rhyme schemes crazy asf. Had me hooked from the beginning. This the typa shit i enjoy reading. I can pick up the flow in my head and this shit flows smoothly the whole way through. 50 bars same rhyme scheme? I aint never tried that we might have to make it a challenge. Punchlines was fire, rhyme scheme fire. This some top tier shit right here for a “bored just writing” typa post. You did this shit for real.
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Creative vs there
The flow so tight

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whole shit was fire
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Old 01-10-2023, 05:53 PM   #13
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