Week 2: JEM VS BodySnatcher - BS wins open 4 feed

Flow · 03-25-2019, 02:52 PM

Week Two

You all know the rules, but if you need reminding go look at the thread.

DUE THURSDAY

@JEM
@BodySnatcher

*The 1-2 league and it's mini LR league are one bar Vs one bar.*

BodySnatcher · 03-28-2019, 10:42 PM

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The crowd might buy ur shit but I leave them amaze,
Blade in hand...& after they see the 'quality of the cut'...nobody will give Jem appraise

Blas · 03-29-2019, 07:01 AM

this was cool

Dominate · 03-29-2019, 07:10 AM

Pretty cool. I like the 'quality of the cut' concept a lot but would change the execution slightly bc 'give JEM a praise' is a little awkward... 'nobody gon appraise gem/nobody gonna praise JEM' would be a little cleaner. Still an enjoyable bar though, good job.

03-28-2019, 10:42 PM	#2
BodySnatcher Hail Mary Haymakers Join Date: Mar 2018 Location: You know where I be at Posts: 1,785 Battle Record: 17-7 Champed - BAL Roast - Battle Arena League - BAL Season Champ Rep Power: 3840895	. The crowd might buy ur shit but I leave them amaze, Blade in hand...& after they see the 'quality of the cut'...nobody will give Jem appraise __________________ Bang Bang. Don Demarco. It's shit like that.... Last edited by BodySnatcher; 03-28-2019 at 11:20 PM.

03-29-2019, 07:10 AM	#4
Dominate Tread Lightly. Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 2,309 Battle Record: 26-9 Champed - Netcees Battle League - Battle Arena - Tag Team Tournament III - Tag Tournament: "Omicron Variant" Rep Power: 18197456	Pretty cool. I like the 'quality of the cut' concept a lot but would change the execution slightly bc 'give JEM a praise' is a little awkward... 'nobody gon appraise gem/nobody gonna praise JEM' would be a little cleaner. Still an enjoyable bar though, good job. __________________ The Bad Guys