05-18-2016, 12:27 AM | #1 |
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Reza vs. OG Smokinstein - OG Smoke Wins
You know the rules by now.
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05-18-2016, 06:12 AM | #2 |
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Im here. Going 12 i guess
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05-19-2016, 01:36 PM | #3 |
The Marathon
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05-19-2016, 02:52 PM | #4 |
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O-2?? Sheez...
I guess I'm rusty griswold. But you'll take a permanent vacation, son. I got roguish skills; even with this death star plans you still wouldn't destroy me dun He loved gun talk till we surrounded this lowlife Everywhere you go you'll seahawks, rookie like cj prosise Pop up while ur getting dressed and gun you down When the cannon sounds, it'll have black running barefoot like an extra on underground Idiot thought going downtown meant his girl was hitting the bank Nah she was going downtown to withdraw my jizz after i was i done hitting the skank I'm universally loved like snoopy. You lacked mass appeal, tex Until the machete turned his melon into a mass appealed flesh So go ahead w/ ya cowardly lion. we all know you lack the heart, b... Ima still leave ya top twisted @ the end like a pack of smarties Bitch... |
05-20-2016, 08:56 PM | #5 |
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Ill put the D.E to reza cause for me, gun violence is the Norm.
That dessert blow in his face, that's a nomad caught in a sand storm. The headshot,put his identiy in crisis, like stolen credit. Get rid of all his features, like Jcole last album final edit. Nigga u not built like that, you don't got the heart to bust no shots. Gunbars got u getting out of character,like a laid off mascot. Reza can play odometer, just to see how far I will go. Homie.. I'm a killa behind the bars, welcome to deathrow. Catch you while partying,but I aint playing no games after the club.. word to palxico. Ill put this clown, in the middle of the barrel to show him this not my frist rodeo. Shots will dissect this cat in front of everbody immediately. Ill open up this pussy fast like I jus gotta degree in gynecology |
05-21-2016, 03:06 PM | #6 |
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I guess I'm rusty griswold. But you'll take a permanent vacation, son.
I got roguish skills; even with this death star plans you still wouldn't destroy me dun Nah He loved gun talk till we surrounded this lowlife Everywhere you go you'll seahawks, rookie like cj prosise See hawks concepts are nothing new but this aight Pop up while ur getting dressed and gun you down When the cannon sounds, it'll have black running barefoot like an extra on underground ehhh Idiot thought going downtown meant his girl was hitting the bank Nah she was going downtown to withdraw my jizz after i was i done hitting the skank Not feelin this I'm universally loved like snoopy. You lacked mass appeal, tex Until the machete turned his melon into a mass appealed flesh decent So go ahead w/ ya cowardly lion. we all know you lack the heart, b... Ima still leave ya top twisted @ the end like a pack of smarties Coulda been a solid finish but the punch didn't hit hard to me Ill put the D.E to reza cause for me, gun violence is the Norm. That dessert blow in his face, that's a nomad caught in a sand storm. lmaoooo. Why haven't I thought of this. Simple but effective The headshot,put his identiy in crisis, like stolen credit. Get rid of all his features, like Jcole last album final edit. Ehhh Nigga u not built like that, you don't got the heart to bust no shots. Gunbars got u getting out of character,like a laid off mascot. Decent Reza can play odometer, just to see how far I will go. Homie.. I'm a killa behind the bars, welcome to deathrow. Wackkk Catch you while partying,but I aint playing no games after the club.. word to palxico. Ill put this clown, in the middle of the barrel to show him this not my frist rodeo. Ok Shots will dissect this cat in front of everbody immediately. Ill open up this pussy fast like I jus gotta degree in gynecology Mad basic Og was inconsistent to me but he had more quotables and took this easily. I just wasntwasn't a fan of rezas concepts and the way they were landing. Idk he ain't bad but a few things are off. Vote- og
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05-23-2016, 08:22 AM | #7 |
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05-23-2016, 11:47 AM | #8 |
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I guess I'm rusty griswold. But you'll take a permanent vacation, son.
I got roguish skills; even with this death star plans you still wouldn't destroy me dun Lol wordings off Griswolds could've been cool He loved gun talk till we surrounded this lowlife Everywhere you go you'll seahawks, rookie like cj prosise Played Pop up while ur getting dressed and gun you down When the cannon sounds, it'll have black running barefoot like an extra on underground Light Idiot thought going downtown meant his girl was hitting the bank Nah she was going downtown to withdraw my jizz after i was i done hitting the skank Nope I'm universally loved like snoopy. You lacked mass appeal, tex Until the machete turned his melon into a mass appealed flesh Don't love the wording but this was still hot. Ur best so far. So go ahead w/ ya cowardly lion. we all know you lack the heart, b... Ima still leave ya top twisted @ the end like a pack of smarties Started w a played wizard of oz setup then veered completely away from it to this smarties bit....which was ok. Set up should be setting up ur punch tho....u did a poor job kf that here Ill put the D.E to reza cause for me, gun violence is the Norm. That dessert blow in his face, that's a nomad caught in a sand storm. Cool The headshot,put his identiy in crisis, like stolen credit. Get rid of all his features, like Jcole last album final edit. Ok Nigga u not built like that, you don't got the heart to bust no shots. Gunbars got u getting out of character,like a laid off mascot. Lol fuck w this Reza can play odometer, just to see how far I will go. Homie.. I'm a killa behind the bars, welcome to deathrow. This may have been the first text bar ever written. Lol. Catch you while partying,but I aint playing no games after the club.. word to palxico. Ill put this clown, in the middle of the barrel to show him this not my frist rodeo. This is wild good Shots will dissect this cat in front of everbody immediately. Ill open up this pussy fast like I jus gotta degree in gynecology Played shit again Reza still Trynna get a feel for his style it would seem. He had alotve misses this week. OG suffered from the general rmbva played shit syndrome but...in true rmbva form had sum crazy gun bars that floored me. Vote- og |
05-23-2016, 08:03 PM | #9 |
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OG SMOKINSTEIN won, Reza just didn't have anything, played or uninspired concepts w/ unpolished wording. Smoke has that simple yet highly effective RMBVA style, that wordked well for him this week.
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05-23-2016, 10:50 PM | #10 |
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Mass appealed
Desert blow, clown rodeo Reza had a lot of somewhat ok concepts. alot to work on, streamlining setups, execution. Smoke had 2 lines I liked but kick that played behind bars shit...lol Vote OGsmoke |
05-24-2016, 01:04 AM | #11 |
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these was the best from both sides
He loved gun talk till we surrounded this lowlife Everywhere you go you'll seahawks, rookie like cj prosise Pop up while ur getting dressed and gun you down When the cannon sounds, it'll have black running barefoot like an extra on underground I'm universally loved like snoopy. You lacked mass appeal, tex Until the machete turned his melon into a mass appealed flesh So go ahead w/ ya cowardly lion. we all know you lack the heart, b... Ima still leave ya top twisted @ the end like a pack of smarties vs. Ill put the D.E to reza cause for me, gun violence is the Norm. That dessert blow in his face, that's a nomad caught in a sand storm. The headshot,put his identiy in crisis, like stolen credit. Get rid of all his features, like Jcole last album final edit. Nigga u not built like that, you don't got the heart to bust no shots. Gunbars got u getting out of character,like a laid off mascot. Catch you while partying,but I aint playing no games after the club.. word to palxico. Ill put this clown, in the middle of the barrel to show him this not my frist rodeo. close battle... I thought reza had some decent bars in there mass appealed flesh was pretty good. couple bad misses but not a bad verse... first rodeo from smoke coulda been fire... tough to overlook the plaxico rodeo rhyme tho sand storm was original though & hit, mascot kinda funny smoke was tighter on his wording and a little more consistent here overall v/ og smokin |
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