Schadenfreude vs Alvin Karpis - SCHAD WINS

[Orc]

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@Alvin Karpis @Schadenfreude

[Schadenfreude]

12.

[Alvin Karpis]

sounds good

[Alvin Karpis]

Obscure spanish shit in ya sig like you gonna hit a lick
Watch you disspear without a Tres, shout out to Vic and Nik
I hate your style, this pretentious fake should get endless hate
For tryin come a Cross hard with words that don’t make sense like Lenox face
You aint gangsta so don’t act like you beat the odds
The feds aint building a case against you, it’s just your nephew and lincoln logs
Who the fuck let you champ the Nbl?? that’s something I wouldn’t let slide
You keep Running back to the NBL, you’ll do anything Fournette...pride
I see you beggin in the chat, my shit is balanced, I’m kickin talent
You’re the guy always up Burds ass, no wonder you love chicken salads
Unplugged, let’s be real deep down your fav rapper is Young thug
I’ll chop your hands and feet off then make you buy me tickets to the superbowl on Stub Hub

[Schadenfreude]

Look fool..

Signed in like u’ra legend or whatever lie u telling yourself
an’ I may have seen..had u not Ghost & returned a Shell of yourself.
He used to have an intimidating style that could bury shit,
ain’t scaring this, cuz if I quickly ISIS ass, how is Al K da terrorist?
Compared to my stature of Bully tactics, u a midget, nigga
my favorite Sig’ll lift ya, 3 rounds put u in rotation, you a fidget spinner.
Amazing, went from Navajo to average hoe, ya hun brazen
now GoFundMe, cuz when that bitch gets ya dick up, it’s fundraising.
Sick of seeing yo simplistic, boring take that ain’t different
so change angles or get put square in ya place like sharp shifting.
Either it's suicide or homicide..dgaf it's the same incentive,
keep buggin & the picks’ll drop u off the map - the game is glitching.

..BODY.

[Hawk]

Originally Posted by Alvin Karpis

Obscure spanish shit in ya sig like you gonna hit a lick
Watch you disspear without a Tres, shout out to Vic and Nik

^^^ Nice opener. Simple and effective.

I hate your style, this pretentious fake should get endless hate
For tryin come a Cross hard with words that don’t make sense like Lenox face

^^^ Knew that kid's face tats would be the topic of bars this week, didn't know there would be so many. This is a pretty dope execution on it.

You aint gangsta so don’t act like you beat the odds
The feds aint building a case against you, it’s just your nephew and lincoln logs

^^^ This was solid.

Who the fuck let you champ the Nbl?? that’s something I wouldn’t let slide
You keep Running back to the NBL, you’ll do anything Fournette...pride

^^^ Mmmm fire. Fournette is nasty.

I see you beggin in the chat, my shit is balanced, I’m kickin talent
You’re the guy always up Burds ass, no wonder you love chicken salads

^^^ This made me "lol". Good shit

Unplugged, let’s be real deep down your fav rapper is Young thug
I’ll chop your hands and feet off then make you buy me tickets to the superbowl on Stub Hub

^^^ The set-up bodied me. I don't know why just saying "your fav rapper is Young Thug" seemed so harsh to me. I get the punch but it was a little sloppy imo

I liked your verse a lot. It sounded like you genuinely didn't like this guy haha. That adds a lot to a verse and makes it sound meaner. Dope shit.

Originally Posted by Schadenfreude

Look fool..

Signed in like u’ra legend or whatever lie u telling yourself
an’ I may have seen..had u not Ghost & returned a Shell of yourself.

^^^ This could have been sick but ending both lines with yourself ruined the bar.

He used to have an intimidating style that could bury shit,
ain’t scaring this, cuz if I quickly ISIS ass, how is Al K da terrorist?

^^^ ISIS/Ice His Al K da/Al-Qaeda this was pretty fire.

Compared to my stature of Bully tactics, u a midget, nigga
my favorite Sig’ll lift ya, 3 rounds put u in rotation, you a fidget spinner.

^^^ Mmmmm dope

Amazing, went from Navajo to average hoe, ya hun brazen
now GoFundMe, cuz when that bitch gets ya dick up, it’s fundraising.

^^^ Meh. Not bad.

Sick of seeing yo simplistic, boring take that ain’t different
so change angles or get put square in ya place like sharp shifting.

^^^ ok

Either it's suicide or homicide..dgaf it's the same incentive,
keep buggin & the picks’ll drop u off the map - the game is glitching.

^^^ I fucked with this as a closer. bug/pixel/glitch Solid shit

..BODY.

I was skeptical going in. He had a bar about you champing and your opener rhymed the same word twice so I was confused. But you turned it around quickly and had some fire.


This was super close. I think Schade had a couple harder hitting punches, but Al K was more consistent throughout the battle and his misses weren't as mad. Schade's opener did damage to the verse.


Really tight race but vote goes to Al K.

[Cool]

Originally Posted by Alvin Karpis

Obscure spanish shit in ya sig like you gonna hit a lick
Watch you disspear without a Tres, shout out to Vic and Nik

nah

I hate your style, this pretentious fake should get endless hate
For tryin come a Cross hard with words that don’t make sense like Lenox face

nah

You aint gangsta so don’t act like you beat the odds
The feds aint building a case against you, it’s just your nephew and lincoln logs

nah

Who the fuck let you champ the Nbl?? that’s something I wouldn’t let slide
You keep Running back to the NBL, you’ll do anything Fournette...pride

nah

I see you beggin in the chat, my shit is balanced, I’m kickin talent
You’re the guy always up Burds ass, no wonder you love chicken salads

nah

Unplugged, let’s be real deep down your fav rapper is Young thug
I’ll chop your hands and feet off then make you buy me tickets to the superbowl on Stub Hub

nah

Originally Posted by Schadenfreude

Look fool..

Signed in like u’ra legend or whatever lie u telling yourself
an’ I may have seen..had u not Ghost & returned a Shell of yourself.

nah

He used to have an intimidating style that could bury shit,
ain’t scaring this, cuz if I quickly ISIS ass, how is Al K da terrorist?

nice

Compared to my stature of Bully tactics, u a midget, nigga
my favorite Sig’ll lift ya, 3 rounds put u in rotation, you a fidget spinner.

played

Amazing, went from Navajo to average hoe, ya hun brazen
now GoFundMe, cuz when that bitch gets ya dick up, it’s fundraising.

nah

Sick of seeing yo simplistic, boring take that ain’t different
so change angles or get put square in ya place like sharp shifting.

nah

Either it's suicide or homicide..dgaf it's the same incentive,
keep buggin & the picks’ll drop u off the map - the game is glitching.

dope

..BODY.

alvin karpis was terrible

nowhere near where he used to be

don't think rust is the problem

dude just isn't nice anymore

schad was decent

won this easily

v-schad

[Saint]

Originally Posted by Alvin Karpis

Obscure spanish shit in ya sig like you gonna hit a lick
Watch you disspear without a Tres, shout out to Vic and Nik
- k, not hard hitting
I hate your style, this pretentious fake should get endless hate
For tryin come a Cross hard with words that don’t make sense like Lenox face
-^^seen lots of these, cool twist w across hard
You aint gangsta so don’t act like you beat the odds
The feds aint building a case against you, it’s just your nephew and lincoln logs
-nah
Who the fuck let you champ the Nbl?? that’s something I wouldn’t let slide
You keep Running back to the NBL, you’ll do anything Fournette...pride
-for net? eh its decent w/p. its cool.
I see you beggin in the chat, my shit is balanced, I’m kickin talent
You’re the guy always up Burds ass, no wonder you love chicken salads
-liked the wording. don't see it as a personal
Unplugged, let’s be real deep down your fav rapper is Young thug
I’ll chop your hands and feet off then make you buy me tickets to the superbowl on Stub Hub
-kinda corny

Look fool..

Signed in like u’ra legend or whatever lie u telling yourself
an’ I may have seen..had u not Ghost & returned a Shell of yourself.
-decent personal....ok line.
He used to have an intimidating style that could bury shit,
ain’t scaring this, cuz if I quickly ISIS ass, how is Al K da terrorist?
- dope
Compared to my stature of Bully tactics, u a midget, nigga
my favorite Sig’ll lift ya, 3 rounds put u in rotation, you a fidget spinner.
-ok, concept familiar
Amazing, went from Navajo to average hoe, ya hun brazen
now GoFundMe, cuz when that bitch gets ya dick up, it’s fundraising.
-nah
Sick of seeing yo simplistic, boring take that ain’t different
so change angles or get put square in ya place like sharp shifting.
Ok, but eh
Either it's suicide or homicide..dgaf it's the same incentive,
keep buggin & the picks’ll drop u off the map - the game is glitching.
-pixel made it better, its an ok concept

I like karps unique style and straight forwardness at times, other times it feels too light
I thought shad edged it, cool battle

vote shad

[Barcotic]

pretty disappointing, thought this was gonna be dope

I got

karp's opener
vs
isis al k
game is glitching

fournette was a dope concept but the execution was ugly af

v/schaden

[Lenox]

Karp: nothing. Chicken salad was prolly the worst bar I’ve read in awhile

Vs

Shad: closer was ill/creative.. everything else barely missed


Overall: dissapointing. Especially reading schads verse, cuz this shoulda been a body from the jump.

Vote: schadenfreude

[Profit]

Obscure spanish shit in ya sig like you gonna hit a lick
Watch you disspear without a Tres, shout out to Vic and Nik

Cool

I hate your style, this pretentious fake should get endless hate
For tryin come a Cross hard with words that don’t make sense like Lenox face

Ok


You aint gangsta so don’t act like you beat the odds
The feds aint building a case against you, it’s just your nephew and lincoln logs

Ooooook

Who the fuck let you champ the Nbl?? that’s something I wouldn’t let slide
You keep Running back to the NBL, you’ll do anything Fournette...pride

Cool


I see you beggin in the chat, my shit is balanced, I’m kickin talent
You’re the guy always up Burds ass, no wonder you love chicken salads

Ehh

Unplugged, let’s be real deep down your fav rapper is Young thug
I’ll chop your hands and feet off then make you buy me tickets to the superbowl on Stub Hub

Ehh



Look fool..

Signed in like u’ra legend or whatever lie u telling yourself
an’ I may have seen..had u not Ghost & returned a Shell of yourself.

Ehh


He used to have an intimidating style that could bury shit,
ain’t scaring this, cuz if I quickly ISIS ass, how is Al K da terrorist?

Wow! Nice

Compared to my stature of Bully tactics, u a midget, nigga
my favorite Sig’ll lift ya, 3 rounds put u in rotation, you a fidget spinner.

Dope

Amazing, went from Navajo to average hoe, ya hun brazen
now GoFundMe, cuz when that bitch gets ya dick up, it’s fundraising.

Ooook

Sick of seeing yo simplistic, boring take that ain’t different
so change angles or get put square in ya place like sharp shifting.

Ooook

Either it's suicide or homicide..dgaf it's the same incentive,
keep buggin & the picks’ll drop u off the map - the game is glitching.

Cool


I feel karp was ok with a couple nice punches but shade landed more plus his dope hits were extremely solid so I have him taking this. Vote shade

[Amen]

Originally Posted by Alvin Karpis

Obscure spanish shit in ya sig like you gonna hit a lick
Watch you disspear without a Tres, shout out to Vic and Nik
Light.
I hate your style, this pretentious fake should get endless hate
For tryin come a Cross hard with words that don’t make sense like Lenox face
Saw this coming, lol... Light tho.
You aint gangsta so don’t act like you beat the odds
The feds aint building a case against you, it’s just your nephew and lincoln logs
Light.
Who the fuck let you champ the Nbl?? that’s something I wouldn’t let slide
You keep Running back to the NBL, you’ll do anything Fournette...pride
Don't like this.
I see you beggin in the chat, my shit is balanced, I’m kickin talent
You’re the guy always up Burds ass, no wonder you love chicken salads
Lol, ok...
Unplugged, let’s be real deep down your fav rapper is Young thug
I’ll chop your hands and feet off then make you buy me tickets to the superbowl on Stub Hub
This was creative in a corny way with a mild execution.

Originally Posted by Schadenfreude

Look fool..

Signed in like u’ra legend or whatever lie u telling yourself
an’ I may have seen..had u not Ghost & returned a Shell of yourself.
Light.
He used to have an intimidating style that could bury shit,
ain’t scaring this, cuz if I quickly ISIS ass, how is Al K da terrorist?
That fact this was executed in the form of a question killed it for me.
Compared to my stature of Bully tactics, u a midget, nigga
my favorite Sig’ll lift ya, 3 rounds put u in rotation, you a fidget spinner.
Eh, light.
Amazing, went from Navajo to average hoe, ya hun brazen
now GoFundMe, cuz when that bitch gets ya dick up, it’s fundraising.
Nah.
Sick of seeing yo simplistic, boring take that ain’t different
so change angles or get put square in ya place like sharp shifting.
Light.
Either it's suicide or homicide..dgaf it's the same incentive,
keep buggin & the picks’ll drop u off the map - the game is glitching.
Picks'll/pixel mehhhh... I don't like this much but it's probably your best bar IMO...

..BODY.

This was pretty even, IMO. Al's wording is clean because his concepts are so basic. I think if he would have harshly executed his concepts like he did in his last verse he would have taken this battle easily. I'm not a fan of SHADE's style by any means. I mean, don't get me wrong - dude always has a nice flow to his verses but his concepts and executions are just wack or corny to me... This one is a tough one to call so I'll go off the punches I thought were the best. Karp had the burds ass/chicken salad vs the picks'll/glitching by Shade... To me, the Burds ass was just executed better, however the final execution was kind of light/mild and needed more of a harsher execution IMO where Shade had that URL structure to his bar where they always "THATS A INSERT PUN" shit which I'm not very fond of.

I got Karp, I guess.

[For Battling]

Obscure spanish shit in ya sig like you gonna hit a lick
Watch you disspear without a Tres, shout out to Vic and Nik
decent
I hate your style, this pretentious fake should get endless hate
For tryin come a Cross hard with words that don’t make sense like Lenox face
cool
You aint gangsta so don’t act like you beat the odds
The feds aint building a case against you, it’s just your nephew and lincoln logs
light lol sike STFU AMEN!!! Not bad here
Who the fuck let you champ the Nbl?? that’s something I wouldn’t let slide
You keep Running back to the NBL, you’ll do anything Fournette...pride
i liked this
I see you beggin in the chat, my shit is balanced, I’m kickin talent
You’re the guy always up Burds ass, no wonder you love chicken salads
lol no
Unplugged, let’s be real deep down your fav rapper is Young thug
I’ll chop your hands and feet off then make you buy me tickets to the superbowl on Stub Hub
nah

Vs


Signed in like u’ra legend or whatever lie u telling yourself
an’ I may have seen..had u not Ghost & returned a Shell of yourself.
dope
He used to have an intimidating style that could bury shit,
ain’t scaring this, cuz if I quickly ISIS ass, how is Al K da terrorist?
played
Compared to my stature of Bully tactics, u a midget, nigga
my favorite Sig’ll lift ya, 3 rounds put u in rotation, you a fidget spinner.
coulda swore I recently saw a fidget spinner line somewhere, good line tho
Amazing, went from Navajo to average hoe, ya hun brazen
now GoFundMe, cuz when that bitch gets ya dick up, it’s fundraising.
concept played, decent flip
Sick of seeing yo simplistic, boring take that ain’t different
so change angles or get put square in ya place like sharp shifting.
nah this line needs a srs looking at
Either it's suicide or homicide..dgaf it's the same incentive,
keep buggin & the picks’ll drop u off the map - the game is glitching.
alright


Karp

[Flow]

Vote schaden.

Liked the lenox cross line. Had a similar wrote for my battle, was dissapointed it lacked hard execution. Felt everything else was light if it hit. But judging harshly because i knoe you can bring better.

Schad was more consistent and did enough for the win. Id say first 3 bars being enough to win it alone.

[Plot]

Alvin Karpis
Obscure spanish shit in ya sig like you gonna hit a lick
Watch you disspear without a Tres, shout out to Vic and Nik
Didnt do anything for me
I hate your style, this pretentious fake should get endless hate
For tryin come a Cross hard with words that don’t make sense like Lenox face
its ok
You aint gangsta so don’t act like you beat the odds
The feds aint building a case against you, it’s just your nephew and lincoln logs
Nah
Who the fuck let you champ the Nbl?? that’s something I wouldn’t let slide
You keep Running back to the NBL, you’ll do anything Fournette...pride
Had to google, another american sport ref huh? its a nice wp
I see you beggin in the chat, my shit is balanced, I’m kickin talent
You’re the guy always up Burds ass, no wonder you love chicken salads
Thats bad
Unplugged, let’s be real deep down your fav rapper is Young thug
I’ll chop your hands and feet off then make you buy me tickets to the superbowl on Stub Hub
Bleh

Shad
Signed in like u’ra legend or whatever lie u telling yourself
an’ I may have seen..had u not Ghost & returned a Shell of yourself.
Like a Ghost in the Shell ref? word assoc? kinda like it but idk
He used to have an intimidating style that could bury shit,
ain’t scaring this, cuz if I quickly ISIS ass, how is Al K da terrorist?
Thats some cool wps! kinda wish I thought of that
Compared to my stature of Bully tactics, u a midget, nigga
my favorite Sig’ll lift ya, 3 rounds put u in rotation, you a fidget spinner.
alright..cool concept, might have gone over with it tho
Amazing, went from Navajo to average hoe, ya hun brazen
now GoFundMe, cuz when that bitch gets ya dick up, it’s fundraising.
Okay, like Im into the GofundMe concept, execution tho??
Sick of seeing yo simplistic, boring take that ain’t different
so change angles or get put square in ya place like sharp shifting.
Rhymes off here for me
Either it's suicide or homicide..dgaf it's the same incentive,
keep buggin & the picks’ll drop u off the map - the game is glitching.
Again rhymes off, might have been the intention of the last 2 but..
the word assoc. and nuances in the punch here are nice.

Yeah Shad got this

[Cred]

Alvin’s cross to Lenox face wasn’t bad.

Schad I liked that al k da line and that fidget spinner joint was dope.


Vote - Schad