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Vicious vocabulary I'm known to frighten with words, scopes fully calibrated to straight snipe at you nerds, your life is absurd you peaked in 99, the happy days, when people were still impressed with text rhyming accolades, now your name doesn’t carry weight , nobody cares, Lars searching for his voting ring but.... nobodies there, he’s all alone and he’s scared, on his own unprepared, lost validation from the other trolls so now he's in a zone of despair, I'm known to be fair, so here , I’m someone you fools should avoid, You two thinking your above the rest has me both amused and annoyed, against us most battalions simply refuse to deploy, but MMLP came out of hiding just to be abused and destroyed, I'm used to the noise, of victims taking their last breath, after all these years I’m still here and haven’t been surpassed yet, in this style I can beat sral without any exertion, dudes uncle rico, jared from subway and p diddy all rolled into one person, we the most consistent, through every rhyme my camp stays the meanest, while that verse you posted had more ups and downs than a trampolinist, we are all in agreement this guy is disgusting and foreign, and in the discussion forum everything he discusses is boring, , don’t give this lame legal advice he'll go away if we all just ignore him, so seriously everyone just ignore him hey MMLPs played out concepts look fun maybe I’ll try ‘em , Baron you couldn’t get laid even if you were Hawaiian, ok enough of that trash, on a collab you're useless it's true, you know Lars was desperate when he had to resort to recruiting you, MMLP you fruity dude , fawning over another man isn’t natural, you so enamored with Marshall Mathers you call Stan a casual, going against me on this type of diss track is a mistake, everyone already thought you sucked how much more of this can you take, and Lars has never posted anything where I said this is sick I'm impressed , the best fiction he's ever written is when he rewrote the history of text, and made himself a main character thinking that gave him permission to flex, but feds coming to the crib soon he'll be sitting in prison perplexed , he could never envision this mess,now he perpetually lives in distress, his track record is to tantrum and become a bitch when he's pressed, this simp thinks he’s the best, it’s illogical right?, the only people that give him props are those that’ve never read a topical in their life, he’s the king of begging for votes, and swaying behind the scenes, this guy misses his online friends so much he wishes he had a time machine, the past is his everything he’ll do anything to make it last, he’s even willing to sneak a phone into jail up his ass, so he could log onto netcees and defend his online reputation, while slandering those that are a threat with malicious defamation, so the more you bash someone that more it proves you’re afraid, that’s why anytime my names brought up you choose to crusade, but I refuse to be slayed, we will not be dispersed, the reason I'm pissed is because I had to actually read an MMLP verse, nothing could be worse, srsly you guys should quit this as a hobby, my bad Genocide all I left for you was their dead bodies
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04-20-2024, 08:29 PM | #3 |
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Lol. This was fire tho. Mike still got that passion burning!
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04-24-2024, 11:00 AM | #4 |
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Haha. Yall real funny.
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08-12-2024, 03:24 PM | #7 |
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It's funny because you can envision all the history unraveling here.
One of the better disses I've seen on here, I'll follow up after I read the follow up.
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08-22-2024, 01:03 PM | #8 |
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This was really good. I've always been of the opinion that a diss verse should be clear and direct. I've read lots of so called diss verses that used clever wordplay and dope rhymes but failed to personally attack their target. That doesn't impress me.
A diss verse should be tailor made for the target. It should be personal and it should be as offensive as possible. This was all of those. You really went in here. I don't necessarily agree with everything you said but I loved your aggressive and direct approach. This is what a diss is supposed to be. If I were to nitpick, there were a few hiccups here and there with the flow but in general I thought this was really fucking good. I thought verses like this were a thing of the past on Netcees. Thank you. Now to read the reply.
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