ELITE 8: Flow vs BodySnatcher BODY WINS

[bleak]

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@Flow @BodySnatcher

[BodySnatcher]

What you wanna do Flow yo?

[Flow]

Originally Posted by BodySnatcher

How many we going in BAL? 14-20?

pussy please.. had a lucky streak when u started but I’m out ur fuckin league
ur like the BAL.. way you started off incredible, now ur futures looking bleak
Homies a clown, I have fire battles and stay holding it down
Summer Classic even, while you stay losing in its opening round
Consistency the key to greatness N flow faced everyone on the market
While this fast food faggots win/loss graph lookin like McDonald's arches
Cus u been forming so many gun bars that now it’s like ur always on empty..
cuz ur line limits like Hush’s side bitches.. you always pump for 14-20s
Bars I got plenty..ill put Body in Bags an leave him in Ghost mode
N continue to shoot the cunt til bullet holes surround him like snap chats qr code
Goodfellas make pizza, but gangster moves.. you just a geek witta toy
Ill roll up n have you waking up to a horses head bigger than the Greeks did at Troy
Fuckin pizza pushin faggot.. stfu up, we all know ya gun bars are phoney
Couldn't be more different homie.. just look how I'm serving up 50 Calzone

[BodySnatcher]

No Quotes. This is Light Work.

Ur a fake & a fraud, I'd never spare a snake from the rod
This holy smoke will leave ur angel dust b4 he can take u to God
W/o personals ur WACK, my shoulder's strap cuz my stock long
All he'll see is sticks banging in the air like the beginning of a rock song
For the fast dough, I’ll let the strap blow, like where the stash bro?
Mo’Money Mo’Problems but the issue is...u don’t have any cash Flow
Slick Rick, MF Doom & sraL...I'm betting this list can’t stop me
Cuz I’m not guessing this Brit’s fav rappers when I give his Top 3
If I’m in range of ur wig...I’ll remove the brain from ur lid
I bet if I pull out the Pound this Euro breakdown like change for a quid
I’ma pistol whip 'em w/a Tech Ni9e then toss this vandal
He left blood on my gun, now I'm trying to get this Flow off the handle
I’ll squeeze this natural fruit...fuck letting the deuce blow
All it takes is me twisting his lid...to make Welsh’s creative juice Flow

[Twodrop]

pussy please.. had a lucky streak when u started but I’m out ur fuckin league
ur like the BAL.. way you started off incredible, now ur futures looking bleak
simple, effective.
Homies a clown, I have fire battles and stay holding it down
Summer Classic even, while you stay losing in its opening round
light
Consistency the key to greatness N flow faced everyone on the market
While this fast food faggots win/loss graph lookin like McDonald's arches
good
Cus u been forming so many gun bars that now it’s like ur always on empty..
cuz ur line limits like Hush’s side bitches.. you always pump for 14-20s
lmao, this was cool. Wasn't familiar Hush was a pedo, but ok
Bars I got plenty..ill put Body in Bags an leave him in Ghost mode
N continue to shoot the cunt til bullet holes surround him like snap chats qr code
dope
Goodfellas make pizza, but gangster moves.. you just a geek witta toy
Ill roll up n have you waking up to a horses head bigger than the Greeks did at Troy
sheeesh....fire
Fuckin pizza pushin faggot.. stfu up, we all know ya gun bars are phoney
Couldn't be more different homie.. just look how I'm serving up 50 Calzone
LMAO... do brits really say CAL-ZONEY? hahaha.... and stfu UP made me laugh, this is a miss for me

Ur a fake & a fraud, I'd never spare a snake from the rod
This holy smoke will leave ur angel dust b4 he can take u to God
ok
W/o personals ur WACK, my shoulder's strap cuz my stock long
All he'll see is sticks banging in the air like the beginning of a rock song
light
For the fast dough, I’ll let the strap blow, like where the stash bro?
Mo’Money Mo’Problems but the issue is...u don’t have any cash Flow
coo
Slick Rick, MF Doom & sraL...I'm betting this list can’t stop me
Cuz I’m not guessing this Brit’s fav rappers when I give his Top 3
not enuf here
If I’m in range of ur wig...I’ll remove the brain from ur lid
I bet if I pull out the Pound this Euro breakdown like change for a quid
dope
I’ma pistol whip 'em w/a Tech Ni9e then toss this vandal
He left blood on my gun, now I'm trying to get this Flow off the handle
again, liked this
I’ll squeeze this natural fruit...fuck letting the deuce blow
All it takes is me twisting his lid...to make Welsh’s creative juice Flow
cool closer

Jeeez....Great battle. Both verses had some standouts, I got Flow having LOTB w/ that Troy shit. Overall I have them with 1 miss each, but Flow's hits were just a little heavier this week. Props to both competitors, GL in future rounds.

v/ Flow

[For Battling]

pussy please.. had a lucky streak when u started but I’m out ur fuckin league
ur like the BAL.. way you started off incredible, now ur futures looking bleak
good flip here
Homies a clown, I have fire battles and stay holding it down
Summer Classic even, while you stay losing in its opening round
kinda weak
Consistency the key to greatness N flow faced everyone on the market
While this fast food faggots win/loss graph lookin like McDonald's arches
lmao nah
Cus u been forming so many gun bars that now it’s like ur always on empty..
cuz ur line limits like Hush’s side bitches.. you always pump for 14-20s
mmm Idk not really diggin his line limits as a diss
Bars I got plenty..ill put Body in Bags an leave him in Ghost mode
N continue to shoot the cunt til bullet holes surround him like snap chats qr code
creative, alright
Goodfellas make pizza, but gangster moves.. you just a geek witta toy
Ill roll up n have you waking up to a horses head bigger than the Greeks did at Troy
.....come again?
Fuckin pizza pushin faggot.. stfu up, we all know ya gun bars are phoney
Couldn't be more different homie.. just look how I'm serving up 50 Calzone
stfu up? And phony rhymes with calzone? In America we pronounce it as “cal-zone” not like a retarded Luigi in paper Mario talmbout some “cal-zone-eeee” ugh


Vs


Ur a fake & a fraud, I'd never spare a snake from the rod
This holy smoke will leave ur angel dust b4 he can take u to God
this is OK
W/o personals ur WACK, my shoulder's strap cuz my stock long
All he'll see is sticks banging in the air like the beginning of a rock song
fire all around
For the fast dough, I’ll let the strap blow, like where the stash bro?
Mo’Money Mo’Problems but the issue is...u don’t have any cash Flow
good again, great wording and flow
Slick Rick, MF Doom & sraL...I'm betting this list can’t stop me
Cuz I’m not guessing this Brit’s fav rappers when I give his Top 3
mmm nah not feelin
If I’m in range of ur wig...I’ll remove the brain from ur lid
I bet if I pull out the Pound this Euro breakdown like change for a quid
i liked this, nice
I’ma pistol whip 'em w/a Tech Ni9e then toss this vandal
He left blood on my gun, now I'm trying to get this Flow off the handle
decent here
I’ll squeeze this natural fruit...fuck letting the deuce blow
All it takes is me twisting his lid...to make Welsh’s creative juice Flow
nah lol


Damn after reading the fire from Flow in the Ryno bsttle I feel like this was a step down. Some cool ideas but overall I feel it was a bit rushed and that hurt. Body had a lot of creative stuff here and some good shit in it.


Vote BodySnatcher

[Jabari Black]

pussy please.. had a lucky streak when u started but I’m out ur fuckin league
ur like the BAL.. way you started off incredible, now ur futures looking bleak

(This is a pretty good opener. This is a good personal angle. You coulda cleaned up the wording of ‘futures looking bleak’ to make the double meaning a bit cleaner but I still I think you had enough going on for this to be good)

Homies a clown, I have fire battles and stay holding it down
Summer Classic even, while you stay losing in its opening round

(This is just okay. Good angle but this was statementish. Needed a punch to end this to really make it land hard)

Consistency the key to greatness N flow faced everyone on the market
While this fast food faggots win/loss graph lookin like McDonald's arches

(Hmmm so once again, not a bad angle. You’re doing good job of back to back really breaking down Body. The fact that he had a better record took away slightly, but really held this back was the actual punch. The McDonald’s arch/win-loss graph concept doesn’t really give a clear visual. I think the issue might be we don’t really use win-loss graphs. This was decent)

Cus u been forming so many gun bars that now it’s like ur always on empty..
cuz ur line limits like Hush’s side bitches.. you always pump for 14-20s

(Lmao I had no idea where you were going with this when you used that quote. I’m not a huge fan of you using this angle but this was funny. Also “pump for” is weird wording. Im assume no that’s just a phrase y’all use over there. Overall I had this landing though. Funny)

Bars I got plenty..ill put Body in Bags an leave him in Ghost mode
N continue to shoot the cunt til bullet holes surround him like snap chats qr code

(This is pretty tough. I coulda did without the bags/ghost flip but I give leeway on the setups. The punch was nice though. I like the reference. ‘Surround him’ might not have been the best wording but it was fine. Good punch)

Goodfellas make pizza, but gangster moves.. you just a geek witta toy
Ill roll up n have you waking up to a horses head bigger than the Greeks did at Troy

(Damn I’m pretty sure the reference may be going over my head but I’m missing the connection. I’m assuming this is a godfather reference but the goodfella reference is throwing me off. I’m missing what a big horse head would insinuate but tbh idk what the horse head signified in the movie. Ima have to go with I didn’t get this one)

Fuckin pizza pushin faggot.. stfu up, we all know ya gun bars are phoney
Couldn't be more different homie.. just look how I'm serving up 50 Calzone

(Lol I’m a googler and Wikipedia says this is pronounced calzoney in the UK so you get a pass lmaoooooo. But in all seriousness the concept was good but the execution wasn’t quite there. The wording didn’t really work)

Ur a fake & a fraud, I'd never spare a snake from the rod
This holy smoke will leave ur angel dust b4 he can take u to God

(I’m actually a fan of eclectic attack lines like this one but this was just okay at best. The ‘angel dust’ flip was cool, but ‘holy smoke’ wasn’t a good tie in imo and you had nothing else to tie into it)

W/o personals ur WACK, my shoulder's strap cuz my stock long
All he'll see is sticks banging in the air like the beginning of a rock song

(Ha! This is dope to me. Stick bars are on the hot seat right now cus niggas like me lol but I liked this one. Simple but heavy)

For the fast dough, I’ll let the strap blow, like where the stash bro?
Mo’Money Mo’Problems but the issue is...u don’t have any cash Flow

(This was just okay to me. The punch worked but it was a bit to elementary. You woulda needed some stronger tie ins to make this one work)

Slick Rick, MF Doom & sraL...I'm betting this list can’t stop me
Cuz I’m not guessing this Brit’s fav rappers when I give his Top 3

(Yep, I like this one. Pretty creative punch here. My only critique is punches about shooting someone a certain number of times sometimes feel like a cop out because you can essentially use any number lol. Overall, good line though)

If I’m in range of ur wig...I’ll remove the brain from ur lid
I bet if I pull out the Pound this Euro breakdown like change for a quid

(This is fire. Dope concept - good execution)

I’ma pistol whip 'em w/a Tech Ni9e then toss this vandal
He left blood on my gun, now I'm trying to get this Flow off the handle

(I really wanted to like this punch but the connection wasn’t strong enough. From my knowledge, tech doesn’t have a song called off the handle so I don’t think a general statement about his flow is a strong enough connection. This wasn’t bad though. Kind of a creative attack angle. Okay)

I’ll squeeze this natural fruit...fuck letting the deuce blow
All it takes is me twisting his lid...to make Welsh’s creative juice Flow

(Pretty good. Tie ins were good. Creative seems kinda just thrown in there but overall solid closer)


This was a good battle imo. I personally thought this would be BOTW and I wasn’t disappointed. Flow, with your verses, I think the verse as a whole is greater than the sum of each line. Every punch might not be a haymaker but you really get to be essence of battle rap and just break down your opponent line by line.

Good showing, but I will say that out of your three battles this week, this was your third best showing. Not a bad showing at all but just didn’t have the huge punches, angles, and haymakers in this one.

Body good showing as well. You had 1 or 2 misses in there but you had some heat as well including LOTB with the “change for a quid” line. I would like to see you show off your intricate pen a bit more though. You sometimes go over heads with your style which is prob why you shied away from it in this round but I personally look forward to catching those subtle little tie ins.

Overall, this is an even matchup on paper, but I think this is a bit favorable for Body because he doesn’t have too many angles on him and he can land haymakers. Flows at his best when he’s going against vets with plenty of angles to exploit. Flow did an excellent job with the angles he had but I think he slightly got outpunched by Body in this one. Good battle but I gotta edge this to Body.

Mvgt Body

[Blue Bayou]

pussy please.. had a lucky streak when u started but I’m out ur fuckin league
ur like the BAL.. way you started off incredible, now ur futures looking bleak
not usually a fan of these list a name bars but damn, pretty nice here & very relevant with the personal tie in 8/10
Homies a clown, I have fire battles and stay holding it down
Summer Classic even, while you stay losing in its opening round
haha, summer wp has been done a lot but I enjoyed the flip here and the personal helped.. wording was really nice & to the point 8/10
Consistency the key to greatness N flow faced everyone on the market
While this fast food faggots win/loss graph lookin like McDonald's arches
ehhh, not feelin this one 5/10
Cus u been forming so many gun bars that now it’s like ur always on empty..
cuz ur line limits like Hush’s side bitches.. you always pump for 14-20s
more of a diss to hush lol, miss for me is I always like ppl going 16+ as opposed to 10 and shit, dece idea but not feeling the punch 4/10
Bars I got plenty..ill put Body in Bags an leave him in Ghost mode
N continue to shoot the cunt til bullet holes surround him like snap chats qr code
cool attack line, this was creative 8/10
Goodfellas make pizza, but gangster moves.. you just a geek witta toy
Ill roll up n have you waking up to a horses head bigger than the Greeks did at Troy
yup, seen a lot of horse/troy concepts but I like how you made an attack line out of it.. solid 7/10
Fuckin pizza pushin faggot.. stfu up, we all know ya gun bars are phoney
Couldn't be more different homie.. just look how I'm serving up 50 Calzone
ehhh, ill give you a pass due to the accent but this seems like a reach.. also, while the idea was there I don't like how yu went about the execution here 5/10

vs.


Ur a fake & a fraud, I'd never spare a snake from the rod
This holy smoke will leave ur angel dust b4 he can take u to God
ehh, get the idea but the punch is light 5/10
W/o personals ur WACK, my shoulder's strap cuz my stock long
All he'll see is sticks banging in the air like the beginning of a rock song
niiice, dope concept 8/10
For the fast dough, I’ll let the strap blow, like where the stash bro?
Mo’Money Mo’Problems but the issue is...u don’t have any cash Flow
cool nameplay, wording was great 7/10
Slick Rick, MF Doom & sraL...I'm betting this list can’t stop me
Cuz I’m not guessing this Brit’s fav rappers when I give his Top 3
ehh, pretty decent as an attack line, okay 6/10
If I’m in range of ur wig...I’ll remove the brain from ur lid
I bet if I pull out the Pound this Euro breakdown like change for a quid
niiice flip, seen a lot of pound/currency lines but this take was pretty dope tbh 8/10
I’ma pistol whip 'em w/a Tech Ni9e then toss this vandal
He left blood on my gun, now I'm trying to get this Flow off the handle
okay nameplay 6/10
I’ll squeeze this natural fruit...fuck letting the deuce blow
All it takes is me twisting his lid...to make Welsh’s creative juice Flow
lol, I think a reword would've helped but tbh I haven't seen this and think it's a cool Welsh's play 6/10



geeeze this is close... both had some dope bars but some mehh stuff as well to make this pretty even... will have to do a numerical breakdown and edit.. props to both

Flow - 44
BS - 46


nice battle guys,

Vote - BodySnatcher

[DMS]

U got Body, his lines hit harder and he had less misses.

V/Bdoy

[bleak]

Thx DMS Body wins