genos 1st audio post. The One I Love. (crossover)

Geno · 08-18-2013, 05:20 PM

http://soundcloud.com/urbangenocide/the-one-i-love

Lemme know if it works/what y'all think. Holla

Geno · 08-18-2013, 05:22 PM

Lol. Some of the intro got cut out. Fuckem

Diode · 08-18-2013, 05:58 PM

Lol "crossover"

Geno · 08-18-2013, 06:04 PM

Precisely
@God Of War
Sup nikka

PancakeBrah · 08-18-2013, 06:23 PM

Listening. The vocal mix is off, should be higher. I know you're just starting out so that'll come with time. Some choppiness/skipped beats. Same thing.

Lyrics were cool. The end of the second verse was kind of hard to understand/ran together. Third verse was the best, although I thought 'poisonous germs' was kind of forced. Not sure about the gruff delivery for a track like this.

Overall a good start.

Urban Dialect · 08-18-2013, 06:32 PM

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Originally Posted by PancakeBrah

Listening. The vocal mix is off, should be higher. I know you're just starting out so that'll come with time. Some choppiness/skipped beats. Same thing.

Lyrics were cool. The end of the second verse was kind of hard to understand/ran together. Third verse was the best, although I thought 'poisonous germs' was kind of forced. Not sure about the gruff delivery for a track like this.

Overall a good start.

pretty much agree w/him

DLB · 08-18-2013, 06:36 PM

mixing yo, get that

and if u produce beats, u could definitely sample the song and add drums, etc to it after your first verse tbh

Geno · 08-18-2013, 06:40 PM

It recorded shitty. Its already been mixed. Doesn't have those skips and shit in the original recorrding

Ghost1 · 08-18-2013, 07:02 PM

U were cool.....wouldve rather heard u on sumthin rugged tho. Cool shit tho.

uh-oh · 08-18-2013, 07:15 PM

it sounds like you recorded, a recording, of a recording of the song you made lol.

NYCSPITZ · 08-18-2013, 07:18 PM

ur voice and delivery is cool i think your flow could be better mixing is awful but you have the potential to be very good if u practice the hook is fucking awful imo lol good shit for the first audio tho bro

Natural · 08-23-2013, 09:25 AM

Tbh.
Your voice reminds me of icp's sound.
I'm not a fan of icp at all...but I have heard them.

I hated the beat...I will wait for your second audio before passing judgment

Diode · 08-23-2013, 09:36 AM

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Originally Posted by Natural

Tbh.
Your voice reminds me of icp's sound.

omfg

08-18-2013, 05:20 PM	#1
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,325 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036758	genos 1st audio post. The One I Love. (crossover) http://soundcloud.com/urbangenocide/the-one-i-love Lemme know if it works/what y'all think. Holla __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

08-18-2013, 05:22 PM	#2
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,325 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036758	Lol. Some of the intro got cut out. Fuckem __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

08-18-2013, 06:04 PM	#4
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,325 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036758	Precisely @God Of War Sup nikka __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

08-18-2013, 06:23 PM	#5
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 13,052 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899406	Listening. The vocal mix is off, should be higher. I know you're just starting out so that'll come with time. Some choppiness/skipped beats. Same thing. Lyrics were cool. The end of the second verse was kind of hard to understand/ran together. Third verse was the best, although I thought 'poisonous germs' was kind of forced. Not sure about the gruff delivery for a track like this. Overall a good start. __________________ If I ventured in the slipstream Between the viaducts of your dreams Where immobil steel rims crack And the ditch in the back road stop Could you find me?

08-18-2013, 06:40 PM	#8
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,325 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036758	It recorded shitty. Its already been mixed. Doesn't have those skips and shit in the original recorrding __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

08-18-2013, 05:58 PM	#3
Diode PR's Finest Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 14,156 Battle Record: 12-7 Rep Power: 85899406	Lol "crossover"

08-18-2013, 06:36 PM	#7
DLB COLTS GANG Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 2,379 Battle Record: 5-6 Rep Power: 0	mixing yo, get that and if u produce beats, u could definitely sample the song and add drums, etc to it after your first verse tbh

08-18-2013, 07:15 PM	#10
uh-oh DA GOD Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Canton Ohio Posts: 12,362 Battle Record: 1-0 Champed - Beat Battle II - Beat Battle V - Beat Bags Rep Power: 84181417	it sounds like you recorded, a recording, of a recording of the song you made lol.

08-18-2013, 07:18 PM	#11
NYCSPITZ SYRACUSE Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,033 Battle Record: 31-37 Champed - Write Night II - Alias Topical Tournament Rep Power: 4743544	ur voice and delivery is cool i think your flow could be better mixing is awful but you have the potential to be very good if u practice the hook is fucking awful imo lol good shit for the first audio tho bro

08-23-2013, 09:25 AM	#12
Natural Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 691 Rep Power: 0	Tbh. Your voice reminds me of icp's sound. I'm not a fan of icp at all...but I have heard them. I hated the beat...I will wait for your second audio before passing judgment