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Old 03-20-2019, 05:19 PM   #1
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Default Grudge Match: Lars vs Incredible - LARS WINS

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Impeach Lars.
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Lmao @sraL think you hurt someone's feelings brah
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lmao he's too scared to request me in SOL

i'd kill him
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Useless is trash too

but Incredible is worse

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Text’s literal madman in any sense you could want. He’ll drop 20 right now if he feels like it. Done just about everything you could imagine in the format and still has the drive. He’s a threat.


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Inc is for the culture for sure, but he hasn’t show too much as a battler after 25 years. You would think he's thinking about this shit.


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Old 03-20-2019, 05:19 PM   #2
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Swear you ever make a statement about your current stint in the A-W-O-L
I'll be callin BS on that 4th King saying you got 2?? that's cuz you Champed yourself
If I was local I'd make his blood flow, never make me your post ho
On NC he gets to disappear Flo Real, that why you both board on ghost mode?
Go post hole, fuck fences we'll never amend them, I'll merk this lame
Cause if I'm diggin out a straight line that's the spotter and me hit'em from 10 miles away
No talk'n when I see this bitch the intro to this head to head is the beam
Fuck x-mas time I'll hit up your crib like a Mon. night football synchronized light scene
My bitch bad she would never let you get a taste, I swear she fine
Tryin to imagine this scruffy mongrel spit game to a honey, bet theres no 'bear in mine'
Loser weirdo got different names all across the map, come on man spit facts
This bitch probably even created an account so he can champ Lenox' kik chat
Fuk you on all accounts, like the one when you replied 1st to a thread you created
Only topical head in the HOF is a dead man, I just made you that &&& cuz this...you still won't ever make it

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Yo whats good everyone, I'm sorry I left so abrutbly, I know that text battles can get personal but yeah I guess that shit hit home hardcore.

I've got a new construction job for $15/hr driving a skid steer, excavators, big ass roller to compact dirt, shit is so pimp, been working 12 hour days been saving my money, now I'm about to move into a new place, my ex wife is going crazy cause the boys are doing horrible in school, I'm pretty sure I've convinced her to let me have them back the majority of the time then they just visit her on weekends. Just need to get in my new place and then get it changed in court
nothin but straight real shit. pussy you’re lame
i don’t give a fuck bout those skid steers.. ill punch ur faggot son in his face
wifey suckin a strangers dick while u babysittin for all the family
ur such an obscene cuck u make Gordon Ramsey sound like he always happy
been Pornhub savvy since the smut has left ur place. she upped n went away
now u can’t stand the thought of yet another Motherless domain
ur kid gettin dumber by the day and ur fat ass defends it
can’t make degrade in remarks but wife had plenty on why ur married ended
this fag neglected the negative impact and its affect on his girl
mine bust a garden ornament but our broken gnome ain’t the end of the world
lets get incredibly personal.. one ignores his kids n the baby moms a whore
u an Durex split to leave ‘em w/ a complete scumbag once she condom all
got divorced n kicked out by that bitch cause she hates you
ain’t know what living apartment til u found urself w/ a bed kitchen n sink in the same room

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Old 03-22-2019, 11:21 AM   #3
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V- LARS

Not gonna breakdown.. Lars had good angles, better wording
INC had some ok lines wording killed their potential though....
I liked the digging straight line here.. that was nice imo

living apart, degrade, domain were all solid actually

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Old 03-23-2019, 06:46 AM   #4
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Swear you ever make a statement about your current stint in the A-W-O-L
I'll be callin BS on that 4th King saying you got 2?? that's cuz you Champed yourself
this is worded awkwardly
If I was local I'd make his blood flow, never make me your post ho
On NC he gets to disappear Flo Real, that why you both board on ghost mode?
cool that you're taking aim at Flow in this match, that's some real battle style shit punch wasn't too crazy tho. Small thing to note: in the same sentence you refer to Lars as 'him' and 'you'. It's an awkward change of person that some people tend to notice
Go post hole, fuck fences we'll never amend them, I'll merk this lame
Cause if I'm diggin out a straight line that's the spotter and me hit'em from 10 miles away
this flows nice
No talk'n when I see this bitch the intro to this head to head is the beam
Fuck x-mas time I'll hit up your crib like a Mon. night football synchronized light scene
honestly, I like the xmas connection more for light up your crib. MNF does stadiums right? Haven't seen a light show as part of it.
My bitch bad she would never let you get a taste, I swear she fine
Tryin to imagine this scruffy mongrel spit game to a honey, bet theres no 'bear in mine'
this works with my accent, but this did here is 'you're not fucking my girl' which is light
Loser weirdo got different names all across the map, come on man spit facts
This bitch probably even created an account so he can champ Lenox' kik chat
dope concept. Personal, funny. Could probably have done more with it by way of wordplay or something
Fuk you on all accounts, like the one when you replied 1st to a thread you created
Only topical head in the HOF is a dead man, I just made you that &&& cuz this...you still won't ever make it
gotta a little convoluted here... Are you trying to say he's a dead man or he won't make it into the HOF? It's a decent concept
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nothin but straight real shit. pussy you’re lame
i don’t give a fuck bout those skid steers.. ill punch ur faggot son in his face
those skid steers/those kid's tears work for me. Nice
wifey suckin a strangers dick while u babysittin for all the family
ur such an obscene cuck u make Gordon Ramsey sound like he always happy
cuck/cook is a bit of a stretch but it's funny
been Pornhub savvy since the smut has left ur place. she upped n went away
now u can’t stand the thought of yet another Motherless domain
dope
ur kid gettin dumber by the day and ur fat ass defends it
can’t make degrade in remarks but wife had plenty on why ur married ended
the grade in remarks/degrading remarks is crazy. Good shit
this fag neglected the negative impact and its affect on his girl
mine bust a garden ornament but our broken gnome ain’t the end of the world
this one's just silly
lets get incredibly personal.. one ignores his kids n the baby moms a whore
u an Durex split to leave ‘em w/ a complete scumbag once she condom all
cool flips, I like it
got divorced n kicked out by that bitch cause she hates you
ain’t know what living apartment til u found urself w/ a bed kitchen n sink in the same room[/QUOTE]
solid


Inc had a few good punches but he's still figuring out wording/execution. His last four were alright but had a lot of potential. Lars was mad consistent and had some crazy wordplay, and really kept it personal which usually gives you an edge with me.

V/Diablo with a few more hits


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Old 03-25-2019, 01:39 AM   #5
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i dont get the opener
ghost mode was light, liked this concept tho
sniper shit.. i like it
too much going on with mnf, concept was there just needed better execution
wasn’t feelin bear
lenox had some humor but didnt hit for me
another solid concept, wording was stretched tho

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skid steers. insert sad face emoji lol
gordon is a miss
domain was okk
remarks is really good, there we go
ornament was ehhh
endure ex was aight
closer hit

man inc has pretty good concepts, too bad the wording was off.. cant remember when the last time i read a baron berse but dont remember it being this wo heavy, closer and remark was enough to take this tho

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Old 04-04-2019, 05:52 PM   #6
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Wasn’t feeling Incs wording on some of these bars. The 10 mile & Lenox lines were my fav
though. Those were pretty cool. Lars was pretty solid. A lot of wp. Gordon, domain (lotb),
& degrade stood out the most. Overall Lars was a lot more polished from start to finish &
he had lotb.

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Old 04-08-2019, 09:55 AM   #7
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Inc:
Sniper
Lenox Kik was decent

Tbh I wasn’t feeling much of your verse.. didn’t get some of your shot your tie ins were wordy some made no sense. And a honey/bear bar? Come on


Lars:
Opener cool wordplay but what does an actual skid steer gotta do with this punch.
Obscene chuck was funny bit of a stretch but with your accent I’m sure it works
Motherless was dope
Degrade remarks was nice
Closer was dope


Lars takes this easy... just had better concepts worded well. Personals and humor. Some harsh shit in there

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Old 04-08-2019, 11:30 AM   #8
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he says he got a construction job working a skid steer in that quote from him @Killing Spree
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