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Old 07-22-2018, 07:46 PM   #1
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The Summer Classic ‘18
The Premier Text Battling Tournament

@Witty @brokenhal0

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Due Dates:
  • Verses are due Thursday,
    July 26th, 2018 @ 11:59 PM PST.
  • Check Ins are due Tuesday, July 24th, 2013 @ 11:59 PM PST
  • Voting ends Saturday, July 28th, 11:59 PM PST.
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  • The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both. If no line agreement is made you CANNOT go above 16 lines

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Old 07-23-2018, 12:12 PM   #2
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Hi.

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Old 07-24-2018, 12:02 AM   #3
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Old 07-25-2018, 02:24 AM   #4
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how can I take this serious and fucking battle you
you're the type of rapper dude
who calls the cops when someone harasses you
your gimmick? I see right through it
another sly fox living the lime life
head so far up his own ass darkness becomes hindsight
im wise right?! witty in my own way.?!
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skitzo vision break in your house piss in your kitchen
this tradition you lack the inner vision ill slap you out this dimension

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Old 07-26-2018, 08:19 AM   #5
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Yo I'll fight you wherever, whenever...

One blow to the temple, you'll buckle, get bent with the knuckles
Cuz I'm always down to swing like adventurous couples
U fell off...now ur wording sucks and schemes are choppy rookie
Should be friends with Muff cuz u getting sloppy, pussy
this pistol a launchpad...lemme explain to u battle queers
Cuz I'll put it under ur chin, count to 10...and send ur brains to the stratosphere
Nah fuck guns...I use tools, don't get as much as a kick off of a Glock
So if I'm Raizen that hammer, u getting smashed whether ur kids watching or not
Quick key, typed this shit straight out...I got one more thing to say now, then I'm gone
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Old 07-26-2018, 12:41 PM   #6
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Broken I like that you had an unconventional rhyme scheme.

Witty the launch bar was nice. Rest was standard and did just enough for win.


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Old 07-26-2018, 01:11 PM   #7
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LOL Brokenhal0 far out his comfort zone here but I did kinda like darkness as hindsight for some reason

Witty got him though with a medley of current event and board relevant bars

Way too creative for young BH here
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Old 07-26-2018, 01:40 PM   #8
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Witty had some good stuff in here, well enough to take the W. I want to help BH and feed his verse but i know it's just a troll so w/e. Darkness become hindsight was funny

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Old 07-26-2018, 03:35 PM   #9
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another sly fox living the lime life
head so far up his own ass darkness becomes hindsight

^lol that's actually pretty decent imo

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U fell off...now ur wording sucks and schemes are choppy rookie
Should be friends with Muff cuz u getting sloppy, pussy
Nah fuck guns...I use tools, don't get as much as a kick off of a Glock
So if I'm Raizen that hammer, u getting smashed whether ur kids watching or not

cool verse... opener flip was chuckle worthy as well but still a bit of an older/overdone concept...


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Old 07-26-2018, 04:25 PM   #10
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Yeah that Hindsite line made me chuckle a bit, it was good lol
Other than that halo didn’t have anything else. Felt more like a
swag and flow piece really, no pressure niches at all tbh, witty
Seemed to mimic halos approach but he sprinkled in a few nice
Jabs to take this easily

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Old 07-26-2018, 04:49 PM   #11
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Hindsight was nice to me, only bar that stood out like that, verse flowed cool just really no direct jabs or punches towards your partner


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One blow to the temple, you'll buckle, get bent with the knuckles
Cuz I'm always down to swing like adventurous couples

Swing concept been done a lot, cool tho

U fell off...now ur wording sucks and schemes are choppy rookie
Should be friends with Muff cuz u getting sloppy, pussy

Lmao funny as hell

this pistol a launchpad...lemme explain to u battle queers
Cuz I'll put it under ur chin, count to 10...and send ur brains to the stratosphere

Light, wording a bit stretched on the second bar, overall miss me for me

Nah fuck guns...I use tools, don't get as much as a kick off of a Glock
So if I'm Raizen that hammer, u getting smashed whether ur kids watching or not

Coo here again

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Ehh closer, decent at best

Witty brought just enough to this battle to take the win. Props to both here!

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Old 07-26-2018, 05:28 PM   #12
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how can I take this serious and fucking battle you
you're the type of rapper dude
who calls the cops when someone harasses you
no, bland
your gimmick? I see right through it
another sly fox living the lime life
head so far up his own ass darkness becomes hindsight
good
im wise right?! witty in my own way.?!
your girls tittys squirt OJ when I lick them
uhh
skitzo vision break in your house piss in your kitchen
this tradition you lack the inner vision ill slap you out this dimension
no

1 gd punch
0 jabs
3 misses
vs

Witty
One blow to the temple, you'll buckle, get bent with the knuckles
Cuz I'm always down to swing like adventurous couples
decent s&f
U fell off...now ur wording sucks and schemes are choppy rookie
Should be friends with Muff cuz u getting sloppy, pussy
lol
this pistol a launchpad...lemme explain to u battle queers
Cuz I'll put it under ur chin, count to 10...and send ur brains to the stratosphere
corny
Nah fuck guns...I use tools, don't get as much as a kick off of a Glock
So if I'm Raizen that hammer, u getting smashed whether ur kids watching or not
coo
Quick key, typed this shit straight out...I got one more thing to say now, then I'm gone
This diode's thread...one hit from a pipe to your throat'll leave you laid out on your lawn
nah, weak disc. punch

2 gd punches
1 jab
2 misses


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if the bar count even matches...
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