Creeps 1-0 vs kwal!ty 7-5 - Kwal!ty wins

[Allen Knight]

NBL Season 7
Week 15

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@Creeps @kwality

[KwaL!ty]

10 lines
Don't no show please.

[Creeps]

I'm going 16. You want 10 you better drop first kiddo

[Creeps]

quick 12

I took one look at your record, and knew why it's the source for numerous ***kles
you've got a natural quality for making a name for yourself while losing your battles
heard that your slut's a slut, and she'd suck the devils dick for crack rock
it aint a mystery why that brown bitch's snatch is more sought out than that Malaysian planes black box
speaking of which, all that <---------- shit in your lines is fucking wack and you know it
you should take directions on landing a punch, when you're not too busy being an air traffic controller
I'm a stud muffin, me and your mom have sex marathons with SVU on the tube
while you're outside gettin her lawn in order and doing the Breakin scene with your broom
she came an hour ago, now she's lookin in my eyes like my that was a mistake
cuz I won't nut till the end of the ep, and when I walk out the room I'll scream" congrats on the rape"
you aint winning the Lotto this match, I'm fleeing with the purse
the ukraine/ \russian line shoulda been dumped in the Crimea River, cuz that's what I did after reading your verse

[KwaL!ty]

Fuck nameplays ... BARS!

my punches will feed a whole team! yours just a salad bar
Creeps punches arent dope,his Lines are known to Ware Off like a Dallas Star
your thoughts arent sharp even with a narrow head
& your sexuality, is known for seeking more Closure then an Aero thread
your girl likes that im a RudeBoy & Bender back
this Knight wont Drift in your favor if you voted on the conteder match
il take ur bitch, im a threat you should worry
cuz il leave your girl panting, you just make her get dressed in hurry
your known to AirLines, im known for rage & violence
mine connect, while yours are more off course then Malaysian Pilots
think youl win? you got a better chance in a Greed bout
since Pots a gateway drug, youd be a dope head after the lines you weed out

[Allen Knight]

Upping for votes

[Sharp]

I took one look at your record, and knew why it's the source for numerous ***kles
you've got a natural quality for making a name for yourself while losing your battles
played
heard that your slut's a slut, and she'd suck the devils dick for crack rock
it aint a mystery why that brown bitch's snatch is more sought out than that Malaysian planes black box
ok but kinda awkward
speaking of which, all that <---------- shit in your lines is fucking wack and you know it
you should take directions on landing a punch, when you're not too busy being an air traffic controller
lol coulda hit harder
I'm a stud muffin, me and your mom have sex marathons with SVU on the tube
while you're outside gettin her lawn in order and doing the Breakin scene with your broom
eh
she came an hour ago, now she's lookin in my eyes like my that was a mistake
cuz I won't nut till the end of the ep, and when I walk out the room I'll scream" congrats on the rape"
wut
you aint winning the Lotto this match, I'm fleeing with the purse
the ukraine/ \russian line shoulda been dumped in the Crimea River, cuz that's what I did after reading your verse
been waiting for a Crimea river line.... not very good tbh



my punches will feed a whole team! yours just a salad bar
Creeps punches arent dope,his Lines are known to Ware Off like a Dallas Star
ok, coulda hit harder
your thoughts arent sharp even with a narrow head
& your sexuality, is known for seeking more Closure then an Aero thread
like the flip a lot but coulda been done more
your girl likes that im a RudeBoy & Bender back
this Knight wont Drift in your favor if you voted on the conteder match
ok
il take ur bitch, im a threat you should worry
cuz il leave your girl panting, you just make her get dressed in hurry
eh
your known to AirLines, im known for rage & violence
mine connect, while yours are more off course then Malaysian Pilots
okish
think youl win? you got a better chance in a Greed bout
since Pots a gateway drug, youd be a dope head after the lines you weed out
played to hell


creeps prolly couldve won if his punches were harder hitting. I thought his style was better but the punches themselves didnt do that much like the air traffic line. kwal was ok, the first two bars were cool flips that coulda done a lot more but i felt those more than any other lines. close call but i give kwal the edge, but stick around creeps you did pretty good

v/kwal!ty

[Clash]

Nothing

Vs.

this Knight wont Drift in your favor if you voted on the conteder match
il take ur bitch, im a threat you should worry
cuz il leave your girl panting, you just make her get dressed in hurry
your known to AirLines, im known for rage & violence
mine connect, while yours are more off course then Malaysian Pilots
think youl win? you got a better chance in a Greed bout
since Pots a gateway drug, youd be a dope head after the lines you weed out



KwAl get my vote, creep them lines so damn long I lost interest, trim that unnecessary wording my nigga

[Destroyer]

creep had some loooooong lines
The Malaysian one almost worked, but u gotta crisp up ur wording
kwality had his Malaysian line, the contender match was ok, aero thread was an almost
he just had much more to work with

v/kwality

[Tic]

Not much

Vs.

your thoughts arent sharp even with a narrow head
& your sexuality, is known for seeking more Closure then an Aero thread
il take ur bitch, im a threat you should worry
cuz il leave your girl panting, you just make her get dressed in hurry
your known to AirLines, im known for rage & violence
mine connect, while yours are more off course then Malaysian Pilots

Lol'd @ Panting. I feel like it's been done before but the execution was cool so I like it. Creep you have some ideas you just have to word them effectively. Cut down on your wording and get more direct.

V/Kwal

[Allen Knight]

Blackbox

Vs

Drift, gateway drug



v/kwality, creeps verse last week war better tbh this week way to wordy
Lacked impact had acouple almost hitting lines...kwal had a solid verse
Couple cool bars he was more consistent here he gets my vote.

[Greed]

Breakin, crimea

Vs.

Aero, panting, contender

Was being generous with the contender line but overall better misses

V kwality

[Tettris]

you aint winning the Lotto this match, I'm fleeing with the purse
the ukraine/ \russian line shoulda been dumped in the Crimea River, cuz that's what I did after reading your verse

vs

your thoughts arent sharp even with a narrow head
& your sexuality, is known for seeking more Closure then an Aero thread
think youl win? you got a better chance in a Greed bout
since Pots a gateway drug, youd be a dope head after the lines you weed out

decent battle here...didn't like Creeps longer bars...Kwal had better flow on continuity...

v/Kwali

[RudeBoy]

Nothing

Vs.

Drift, gateway

Creep was real wordy so nothing real connected imo, kw had drift n gateway which coo n won it

V/kw

[KwaL!ty]

8-zero

[Bender]

Creep I liked the blackbox line but feel like it coulda been executed a lot better like you could said "her black box was more sought out than blah blah blah" we know a box is a snatch so it would been more effective.

Kwal I like the contender match line that was dope maybe because I you flipped everyones names like that. I also liked the airline punch, it was more effective even though it was kind of simple, it stayed true to current events.

Creep has potential but not effective with hits.

Vote-Kwality