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Can we see gay jizz for reference?
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spotlight me v lip @Sharp
gun bar themed, no wordplay, no excuses
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bags ur fkn trash
before this place got crazy biased n thought the word stick or cans belongs in every verse, u had zero chance vs me sleep on it
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Text is a joke. It is politics.
The irony is that things he is good but he is not, but can still be considered a victim of politics. Cronus takes this all too serious. It is all a nonsensical farce. Just donyou playa. Don’t worry about any of this.
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Bag beat barcotic In the summer classic soooo wtf
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I should not have been disqualified and flow should have.
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03-05-2019, 02:31 PM | #51 |
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LOL, what I find more entertaining is the fact, Bags goes MIA for daysssss... The minute Barcotic shows face again, Bags like the candy man hahahaha...
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Lol, Gay Jizz - jesus christ, guys lol...
Was it supposed to be a WP for Gauge is, Gauges or...... Was it some intricate metaphorical 5 words in a single word play type of deal? |
03-05-2019, 02:43 PM | #53 |
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i laugh at ya quotes. always “blastin the toast w/ a mack n’ a scope” yaaa you know all about Gay-Jizz.. Dyna leaves his in the back of your throat
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lmao that battle wasn’t even worthy of votes
nothing of value was lost move on
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Gay jizz pretty bad but honestly nothing will ever be worse than that ovarian ocean or fallopian puddle or whatever tf incant remember
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03-05-2019, 03:26 PM | #57 |
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lmao I remember something about ‘Flow pee in tubes’ being used now you mention it
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My problem with that gay-jizz line, apart from the obvious, is that he gives away the end of the line by spelling it out as Gay-Jizz. As a reader, you can pretty much switch off from reading at that point because you already know exactly where it’s going. There’s no bait and switch. The misdirection has gone. He’s already shown his hand, the rest is just a formality writing itself to me. There’s no more to be done. I think, personally, it would have worked better if he left it as gauges. That way it still has some kind of pay off to the latter half of the line, something to leave the reader with a penny to drop and realise what he’s doing. The way it’s set out takes away from the reveal. I don’t like that.
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