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Old 01-02-2023, 10:00 PM   #21
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Old 01-03-2023, 09:43 AM   #24
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Old 01-03-2023, 04:31 PM   #25
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Old 01-04-2023, 01:11 PM   #27
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Hint #2:

Everything that was held inside was bared true for the rest to see
This pathetic freak was always full of shit, opening him up proves the recipe
Who are THEY to edit ME? StilI I got them pegged it seems
It's not a human being that was killed... It was a legacy...
Fireworks outside all turn to steam, the high water churns beneath
The first thing to stir the scene is baby Ben crying in the nursery
'Better you than me', the killer thought fleeing from the messy wound
These people in the room, Friends included, all needed to get a Clue
'Thanks for the rendezvous...' A Darkened Form raced through halls on ALL FOURS
Mr. Blank was dead on the marble floor, jaw agape like a carnivore
The numbers 8-9-1-9-4-5 were painted up on all doors
A subtle memoir of a catastrophic date that had come before...

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Everything that was held inside was bared true for the rest to see
This pathetic freak was always full of shit, opening him up proves the recipe
Who are THEY to edit ME? StilI I got them pegged it seems
It's not a human being that was killed... It was a legacy...
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'Better you than me', the killer thought fleeing from the messy wound
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'Thanks for the rendezvous...' A Darkened Form raced through halls on ALL FOURS
Mr. Blank was dead on the marble floor, jaw agape like a carnivore
The numbers 8-9-1-9-4-5 were painted up on all doors
A subtle memoir of a catastrophic date that had come before...

Whodunit?

um omg// killed a legacy
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Old 01-05-2023, 02:35 PM   #34
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yeah that line was my fave too

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Fact #1: The Killer

Anonymity is a consecration, yet it's difficult to make a statement as
I was the one emboldened party at the party that didn't have a name attached
My name WAS Richard Doennehy, but I changed my name on a legal pad
So that it seemed to match my appearance since that's all they ever see you as
8/9/1945 - The day nukes blew up Nagasaki, Japan
The bomb was known as a Mark III... but they called it a 'Fat Man'...
On TV... They who hold camcorders are defined as phantoms
I guess the man behind the camera is always sanctified at random
Mr. Tee"bomb" set me off to where normally fears were stored
Fireworks outside the window reminded me of the blast 14 years before
He asked, "Can you record a Shot in the Dark if battery life goes down?"
I said, "Amongst this minor crowd, no one will see a thing when the lights go out"
I signed the dotted line of the contract, not something done on a whim
But the money can support my drug habit AND my youngest son Jonathan
He's only Seven years old... The conduit of my hopes and my dreams
As focused as me, I can't wait to see who he'll grow up to be...

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"She laughed, handed me back my phone and said, "If this dude's topic was you every week he'd never lose..." then left the room."

Disappointed with you, Lars...
I'll be honest and somewhat self-deprecating, but it may be true. If I had half the talent or 1/50th!! the "drive" of you or Lars as a writer, I'd craft something with you as the topic, prolly go 48 at the risk of being corny. With multis or something. And try to have a good story or viewpoint/critique/outlook... But I don't have that ability. (In THAT respect you may be right). And, if not inspired, I wait until the last moment. These are problems.

It literally takes a special motivation to write for me these days. I'm old now, and when I was 25-early 30s nothing would stop me. Not an excuse, just telling you it's part of it. Fact is, not many are built for the weekly rigors of a league...But people sign you in, you get intrigued, you drop a few votes or comments, hard to sign out as battles are set and tagged, etc.

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