Barcotic vs Evolve - OPEN FOR VOTES

Ghost1 · 05-25-2016, 09:01 PM

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Barcotic · 05-25-2016, 10:05 PM

12-16 @Evolve ?

Evolve · 05-26-2016, 03:06 AM

14 is good

Evolve · 05-30-2016, 10:15 PM

"Barcotic A.K.A Cronus"

I'm dope w/ text causin' Anarchy.. u'll get replaced so check the facts, fella
nobody sayin "I want you" like Uncle SAMCRO, so I'll be takin' ur patch i'm Jax Teller
my niggas aint messin', multiple choice how u die..by the glock or the fifth
u playin? catch a couple straps round ur head or box'ed in the face like an Oculus Rift
pushing weight? nah. claimin' tht'll get u G checked if I notice
get close-up to tht stash then I'm letting off more shots than Hush's selfie process
& u lost to a guy thrice ur age, went in like u wern't gonna' play
ironic u used half of ur verse to diss his crep collection then literally got shoo'd away
I'm doin' freaky shit w/ ya broad; bare-back, missonary up to the mouth part
brooooo best believe I got the Head in Too.. bitch was like a Canadian in South Park
but to tell the truth she's vile dog. only u could land that beast
cuz she's such a Solid 2, Metal Gear'll see less profit on their next release
so u need lord & saviour.. got guns? well I got an arsenal so the blood stains ya'
both arms out will have urs tucked... shit lookin' like we dancing the Macarena
Getting hate on EVERY site he visits, NC & RB stay killin' his pride,
so ur whole forum existance is a Wrestling Entrance.. getting flamed from both sides

16.

Barcotic · 05-31-2016, 06:46 PM

Evolve's love life?

it's dudes w/ peters n useless beaters, cuz he's a loser
aka apocalypse.. take someone w/ every mutant feature & evil doer
aim over me yo, then take a blade when u go to reload
I'll put it to ur ear n twist 10 times.. that's a rotary phone
pound mike? I got sound rights of death in store
f'I deck em, eavesdropping to the ground like the 2nd floor
me? I get ripped n tan, stay fit w/ damn scary lats
U? u get elliptical whenever u lick ur man's hairy ass
u oughta know u gtg if my choppa's blowin, poser
the hammer will leave volvo pinned up like an automotive poster
chicks? please. even on the trick scene, queer folds
it's not jumping the gun to say girls u consider grade AR-15 years old
ur goofy n misinformed, where as I'm proving I'm sick w/ more flair
e ain't spittin anything outta the normandy been doing it since the war there
I'm that dude who delivers, mid 20s n I'll always do what a winner should
beat me to a pulp? fiction. that's just a movie when u were considered good
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=7379

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Schadenfreude · 05-31-2016, 11:53 PM

Overall u both lost to bad wording, NO ONE talks like u fucking ppl..smh. Anyway Evolve, both your delivery & concepts were really convoluted, polish up & get straight to the harsher, more impactful point of your punches. As for CroBar, u have that same odd way of presenting your bars, I'm starting to think u actually speak in that manner..lol. Despite the wording, your concepts were far superior, except for 'rotary phone' which is older than Des & Nik combined & the link at the end was unnecessary, still it's VOTE BARCOTIC.

Kenny the OG · 06-01-2016, 05:43 PM

Evolve had the oculus rift, solid 2, and closer which were all good to me. Not wild fire but solid punches. The head in too joint was nice but the wording took away from it alittle for me. Coulda been mean.

Maaaan barcotic u my guy an all, u know I fuck wit u..pause.
But you coulda did WAY better. The way u were phrasing ur shit sounded so weird to me no bs. I'm not even trying to be funny, I think it's an American/Canadian thing. Different lingo. I think that plays a bigger role in text than people realize. Especially since we got guys from all types of different countries here. I really still don't know what dudes with peters is supposed to mean. And on top of the wording I just wasn't feeling the concepts. The ar-15 wp was good and the normandy was ok but I wasnt feeling anything else. I deadass didn't expect to read that.

Vote- evolve

sral · 06-02-2016, 08:04 AM

my niggas aint messin', multiple choice how u die..by the glock or the fifth
u playin? catch a couple straps round ur head or box'ed in the face like an Oculus Rift
I'm doin' freaky shit w/ ya broad; bare-back, missonary up to the mouth part
brooooo best believe I got the Head in Too.. bitch was like a Canadian in South Park
Getting hate on EVERY site he visits, NC & RB stay killin' his pride,
so ur whole forum existance is a Wrestling Entrance.. getting flamed from both sides

LOL oculus rift was cool and i liked the closer tbh

vs

it's dudes w/ peters n useless beaters, cuz he's a loser
aka apocalypse.. take someone w/ every mutant feature & evil doer
pound mike? I got sound rights of death in store
f'I deck em, eavesdropping to the ground like the 2nd floor
ur goofy n misinformed, where as I'm proving I'm sick w/ more flair
e ain't spittin anything outta the normandy been doing it since the war there

i dunno man, shits close for me

tied in shit i liked

im just feeling like barc had his concise and on point where evolve took time to get to the punch out

barc was cleaner, i came away feeling his shit more tbh

i got barcotic

Useless · 06-03-2016, 01:03 AM

I'm dope w/ text causin' Anarchy.. u'll get replaced so check the facts, fella
nobody sayin "I want you" like Uncle SAMCRO, so I'll be takin' ur patch i'm Jax Teller
--- this was dope up until taking ur patch lol.......
my niggas aint messin', multiple choice how u die..by the glock or the fifth
u playin? catch a couple straps round ur head or box'ed in the face like an Oculus Rift
--- aite........
pushing weight? nah. claimin' tht'll get u G checked if I notice
get close-up to tht stash then I'm letting off more shots than Hush's selfie process
--- been done.........
& u lost to a guy thrice ur age, went in like u wern't gonna' play
ironic u used half of ur verse to diss his crep collection then literally got shoo'd away
--- simple but I like it........
I'm doin' freaky shit w/ ya broad; bare-back, missonary up to the mouth part
brooooo best believe I got the Head in Too.. bitch was like a Canadian in South Park
--- lol aite......
but to tell the truth she's vile dog. only u could land that beast
cuz she's such a Solid 2, Metal Gear'll see less profit on their next release
--- fire.......
so u need lord & saviour.. got guns? well I got an arsenal so the blood stains ya'
both arms out will have urs tucked... shit lookin' like we dancing the Macarena
--- corny...........
Getting hate on EVERY site he visits, NC & RB stay killin' his pride,
so ur whole forum existance is a Wrestling Entrance.. getting flamed from both sides
--- decent..........

Vs

it's dudes w/ peters n useless beaters, cuz he's a loser
aka apocalypse.. take someone w/ every mutant feature & evil doer
--- what.......
aim over me yo, then take a blade when u go to reload
I'll put it to ur ear n twist 10 times.. that's a rotary phone
--- super played........
pound mike? I got sound rights of death in store
f'I deck em, eavesdropping to the ground like the 2nd floor
--- cool..........
me? I get ripped n tan, stay fit w/ damn scary lats
U? u get elliptical whenever u lick ur man's hairy ass
--- no.........
u oughta know u gtg if my choppa's blowin, poser
the hammer will leave volvo pinned up like an automotive poster
--- what is Volve's O? I'm not getting what his O is. He isn't undefeated. This missed me........
chicks? please. even on the trick scene, queer folds
it's not jumping the gun to say girls u consider grade AR-15 years old
--- cool..........
ur goofy n misinformed, where as I'm proving I'm sick w/ more flair
e ain't spittin anything outta the normandy been doing it since the war there
--- nice.........
I'm that dude who delivers, mid 20s n I'll always do what a winner should
beat me to a pulp? fiction. that's just a movie when u were considered good
--- aite.........

I'm going with evolve here. Bar just had some shit that was wayyy off. Close battle but bars misses lost it for him.

V. Evolve

Ghost1 · 06-04-2016, 06:45 PM

2-2

Allen Knight · 06-05-2016, 02:27 PM

I'm dope w/ text causin' Anarchy.. u'll get replaced so check the facts, fella
nobody sayin "I want you" like Uncle SAMCRO, so I'll be takin' ur patch i'm Jax Teller
^^^dope concept wording hurt this tho
my niggas aint messin', multiple choice how u die..by the glock or the fifth
u playin? catch a couple straps round ur head or box'ed in the face like an Oculus Rift
^^^dope
pushing weight? nah. claimin' tht'll get u G checked if I notice
get close-up to tht stash then I'm letting off more shots than Hush's selfie process
^^^nah bruh
& u lost to a guy thrice ur age, went in like u wern't gonna' play
ironic u used half of ur verse to diss his crep collection then literally got shoo'd away
^^^nicee
I'm doin' freaky shit w/ ya broad; bare-back, missonary up to the mouth part
brooooo best believe I got the Head in Too.. bitch was like a Canadian in South Park
^^^nah not feeling
but to tell the truth she's vile dog. only u could land that beast
cuz she's such a Solid 2, Metal Gear'll see less profit on their next release
^^^doopee af lotb
so u need lord & saviour.. got guns? well I got an arsenal so the blood stains ya'
both arms out will have urs tucked... shit lookin' like we dancing the Macarena
^^^nah corny
Getting hate on EVERY site he visits, NC & RB stay killin' his pride,
so ur whole forum existance is a Wrestling Entrance.. getting flamed from both sides
^^^ok closer

Vs

it's dudes w/ peters n useless beaters, cuz he's a loser
aka apocalypse.. take someone w/ every mutant feature & evil doer
^^^nice opener
aim over me yo, then take a blade when u go to reload
I'll put it to ur ear n twist 10 times.. that's a rotary phone
^^^nah wack
pound mike? I got sound rights of death in store
f'I deck em, eavesdropping to the ground like the 2nd floor
^^^nah
me? I get ripped n tan, stay fit w/ damn scary lats
U? u get elliptical whenever u lick ur man's hairy ass
^^^wat LOL no
u oughta know u gtg if my choppa's blowin, poser
the hammer will leave volvo pinned up like an automotive poster
^^^nah
chicks? please. even on the trick scene, queer folds
it's not jumping the gun to say girls u consider grade AR-15 years old
^^^fire
ur goofy n misinformed, where as I'm proving I'm sick w/ more flair
e ain't spittin anything outta the normandy been doing it since the war there
^^^dope
I'm that dude who delivers, mid 20s n I'll always do what a winner should
beat me to a pulp? fiction. that's just a movie when u were considered good
^^^ok closer nothin crazy

V/evolve, this was close but bar coulda took this if he sscratched out the middle of his verse,
idk wat he was thinking but he heated up at the end but not enough
to take this evolve verse was pretty consistent overall. he gets the dub here.

Ghost1 · 06-06-2016, 06:26 AM

@Allen Knight send this one over too lol

05-26-2016, 03:06 AM	#3
Evolve Planet of the Rapes. Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 258 Battle Record: 1-3 Rep Power: 3110870	14 is good __________________ I'm Super Soap. You're Super Not.

05-30-2016, 10:15 PM	#4
Evolve Planet of the Rapes. Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 258 Battle Record: 1-3 Rep Power: 3110870	"Barcotic A.K.A Cronus" I'm dope w/ text causin' Anarchy.. u'll get replaced so check the facts, fella nobody sayin "I want you" like Uncle SAMCRO, so I'll be takin' ur patch i'm Jax Teller my niggas aint messin', multiple choice how u die..by the glock or the fifth u playin? catch a couple straps round ur head or box'ed in the face like an Oculus Rift pushing weight? nah. claimin' tht'll get u G checked if I notice get close-up to tht stash then I'm letting off more shots than Hush's selfie process & u lost to a guy thrice ur age, went in like u wern't gonna' play ironic u used half of ur verse to diss his crep collection then literally got shoo'd away I'm doin' freaky shit w/ ya broad; bare-back, missonary up to the mouth part brooooo best believe I got the Head in Too.. bitch was like a Canadian in South Park but to tell the truth she's vile dog. only u could land that beast cuz she's such a Solid 2, Metal Gear'll see less profit on their next release so u need lord & saviour.. got guns? well I got an arsenal so the blood stains ya' both arms out will have urs tucked... shit lookin' like we dancing the Macarena Getting hate on EVERY site he visits, NC & RB stay killin' his pride, so ur whole forum existance is a Wrestling Entrance.. getting flamed from both sides 16. __________________ I'm Super Soap. You're Super Not.

05-31-2016, 06:46 PM	#5
Barcotic Needs no introduction Join Date: Mar 2016 Location: Toronto Posts: 4,493 Battle Record: 29-31 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Survivor Tournament - Pros vs. Joes - Key Grand Prix - Fight Night XX - NBL Tag Team - NBL Picture League - Battle Arena - Battle Arena Pics - BA Tag Team (2x) - 1-2 Punch League (2x) - BAL Battle Royale - NPL Roast Rep Power: 3061965	Evolve's love life? it's dudes w/ peters n useless beaters, cuz he's a loser aka apocalypse.. take someone w/ every mutant feature & evil doer aim over me yo, then take a blade when u go to reload I'll put it to ur ear n twist 10 times.. that's a rotary phone pound mike? I got sound rights of death in store f'I deck em, eavesdropping to the ground like the 2nd floor me? I get ripped n tan, stay fit w/ damn scary lats U? u get elliptical whenever u lick ur man's hairy ass u oughta know u gtg if my choppa's blowin, poser the hammer will leave volvo pinned up like an automotive poster chicks? please. even on the trick scene, queer folds it's not jumping the gun to say girls u consider grade AR-15 years old ur goofy n misinformed, where as I'm proving I'm sick w/ more flair e ain't spittin anything outta the normandy been doing it since the war there I'm that dude who delivers, mid 20s n I'll always do what a winner should beat me to a pulp? fiction. that's just a movie when u were considered good http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=7379 16 Last edited by Barcotic; 05-31-2016 at 11:17 PM.

05-31-2016, 11:53 PM	#6
Schadenfreude Dynomite.. DYNOMITE!! Join Date: Sep 2015 Posts: 1,408 Battle Record: 42-22 Champed - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Tag Team Titles - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 21049081	Overall u both lost to bad wording, NO ONE talks like u fucking ppl..smh. Anyway Evolve, both your delivery & concepts were really convoluted, polish up & get straight to the harsher, more impactful point of your punches. As for CroBar, u have that same odd way of presenting your bars, I'm starting to think u actually speak in that manner..lol. Despite the wording, your concepts were far superior, except for 'rotary phone' which is older than Des & Nik combined & the link at the end was unnecessary, still it's VOTE BARCOTIC. __________________ Aali hupatikana kwa ghali.

06-01-2016, 05:43 PM	#7
Kenny the OG tutankhamen Join Date: Mar 2016 Posts: 363 Battle Record: 6-5 Rep Power: 16107555	Evolve had the oculus rift, solid 2, and closer which were all good to me. Not wild fire but solid punches. The head in too joint was nice but the wording took away from it alittle for me. Coulda been mean. Maaaan barcotic u my guy an all, u know I fuck wit u..pause. But you coulda did WAY better. The way u were phrasing ur shit sounded so weird to me no bs. I'm not even trying to be funny, I think it's an American/Canadian thing. Different lingo. I think that plays a bigger role in text than people realize. Especially since we got guys from all types of different countries here. I really still don't know what dudes with peters is supposed to mean. And on top of the wording I just wasn't feeling the concepts. The ar-15 wp was good and the normandy was ok but I wasnt feeling anything else. I deadass didn't expect to read that. Vote- evolve __________________ Wordplay? My words ain't meant to be played with.

05-25-2016, 10:05 PM	#2
Barcotic Needs no introduction Join Date: Mar 2016 Location: Toronto Posts: 4,493 Battle Record: 29-31 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Survivor Tournament - Pros vs. Joes - Key Grand Prix - Fight Night XX - NBL Tag Team - NBL Picture League - Battle Arena - Battle Arena Pics - BA Tag Team (2x) - 1-2 Punch League (2x) - BAL Battle Royale - NPL Roast Rep Power: 3061965	12-16 @Evolve ?

06-02-2016, 08:04 AM	#8
sral Shrewd as evearthed Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: Wolverhampton, England Posts: 8,255 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899391	my niggas aint messin', multiple choice how u die..by the glock or the fifth u playin? catch a couple straps round ur head or box'ed in the face like an Oculus Rift I'm doin' freaky shit w/ ya broad; bare-back, missonary up to the mouth part brooooo best believe I got the Head in Too.. bitch was like a Canadian in South Park Getting hate on EVERY site he visits, NC & RB stay killin' his pride, so ur whole forum existance is a Wrestling Entrance.. getting flamed from both sides LOL oculus rift was cool and i liked the closer tbh vs it's dudes w/ peters n useless beaters, cuz he's a loser aka apocalypse.. take someone w/ every mutant feature & evil doer pound mike? I got sound rights of death in store f'I deck em, eavesdropping to the ground like the 2nd floor ur goofy n misinformed, where as I'm proving I'm sick w/ more flair e ain't spittin anything outta the normandy been doing it since the war there i dunno man, shits close for me tied in shit i liked im just feeling like barc had his concise and on point where evolve took time to get to the punch out barc was cleaner, i came away feeling his shit more tbh i got barcotic __________________ - Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season)

06-03-2016, 01:03 AM	#9
Useless 100% Join Date: Jul 2015 Posts: 1,803 Battle Record: 9-12 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 0	I'm dope w/ text causin' Anarchy.. u'll get replaced so check the facts, fella nobody sayin "I want you" like Uncle SAMCRO, so I'll be takin' ur patch i'm Jax Teller --- this was dope up until taking ur patch lol....... my niggas aint messin', multiple choice how u die..by the glock or the fifth u playin? catch a couple straps round ur head or box'ed in the face like an Oculus Rift --- aite........ pushing weight? nah. claimin' tht'll get u G checked if I notice get close-up to tht stash then I'm letting off more shots than Hush's selfie process --- been done......... & u lost to a guy thrice ur age, went in like u wern't gonna' play ironic u used half of ur verse to diss his crep collection then literally got shoo'd away --- simple but I like it........ I'm doin' freaky shit w/ ya broad; bare-back, missonary up to the mouth part brooooo best believe I got the Head in Too.. bitch was like a Canadian in South Park --- lol aite...... but to tell the truth she's vile dog. only u could land that beast cuz she's such a Solid 2, Metal Gear'll see less profit on their next release --- fire....... so u need lord & saviour.. got guns? well I got an arsenal so the blood stains ya' both arms out will have urs tucked... shit lookin' like we dancing the Macarena --- corny........... Getting hate on EVERY site he visits, NC & RB stay killin' his pride, so ur whole forum existance is a Wrestling Entrance.. getting flamed from both sides --- decent.......... Vs it's dudes w/ peters n useless beaters, cuz he's a loser aka apocalypse.. take someone w/ every mutant feature & evil doer --- what....... aim over me yo, then take a blade when u go to reload I'll put it to ur ear n twist 10 times.. that's a rotary phone --- super played........ pound mike? I got sound rights of death in store f'I deck em, eavesdropping to the ground like the 2nd floor --- cool.......... me? I get ripped n tan, stay fit w/ damn scary lats U? u get elliptical whenever u lick ur man's hairy ass --- no......... u oughta know u gtg if my choppa's blowin, poser the hammer will leave volvo pinned up like an automotive poster --- what is Volve's O? I'm not getting what his O is. He isn't undefeated. This missed me........ chicks? please. even on the trick scene, queer folds it's not jumping the gun to say girls u consider grade AR-15 years old --- cool.......... ur goofy n misinformed, where as I'm proving I'm sick w/ more flair e ain't spittin anything outta the normandy been doing it since the war there --- nice......... I'm that dude who delivers, mid 20s n I'll always do what a winner should beat me to a pulp? fiction. that's just a movie when u were considered good --- aite......... I'm going with evolve here. Bar just had some shit that was wayyy off. Close battle but bars misses lost it for him. V. Evolve

06-05-2016, 02:27 PM	#11
Allen Knight The Bad Guys. Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 9,166 Battle Record: 106-34 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Key to Greatness I - BA Cypher Tournament - Tag Team Tournament I - Fight Night LXXVI - Time to Kill V - Fight Night LXXX - 1-2 Punch League - Fight Night Cypher II - Key Grand Prix IV - NBL Cypher (7x) - Throwdown Cypher - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Cypher III - Fight Night 1 - Tag Team Tournament V Rep Power: 85899398	I'm dope w/ text causin' Anarchy.. u'll get replaced so check the facts, fella nobody sayin "I want you" like Uncle SAMCRO, so I'll be takin' ur patch i'm Jax Teller ^^^dope concept wording hurt this tho my niggas aint messin', multiple choice how u die..by the glock or the fifth u playin? catch a couple straps round ur head or box'ed in the face like an Oculus Rift ^^^dope pushing weight? nah. claimin' tht'll get u G checked if I notice get close-up to tht stash then I'm letting off more shots than Hush's selfie process ^^^nah bruh & u lost to a guy thrice ur age, went in like u wern't gonna' play ironic u used half of ur verse to diss his crep collection then literally got shoo'd away ^^^nicee I'm doin' freaky shit w/ ya broad; bare-back, missonary up to the mouth part brooooo best believe I got the Head in Too.. bitch was like a Canadian in South Park ^^^nah not feeling but to tell the truth she's vile dog. only u could land that beast cuz she's such a Solid 2, Metal Gear'll see less profit on their next release ^^^doopee af lotb so u need lord & saviour.. got guns? well I got an arsenal so the blood stains ya' both arms out will have urs tucked... shit lookin' like we dancing the Macarena ^^^nah corny Getting hate on EVERY site he visits, NC & RB stay killin' his pride, so ur whole forum existance is a Wrestling Entrance.. getting flamed from both sides ^^^ok closer Vs it's dudes w/ peters n useless beaters, cuz he's a loser aka apocalypse.. take someone w/ every mutant feature & evil doer ^^^nice opener aim over me yo, then take a blade when u go to reload I'll put it to ur ear n twist 10 times.. that's a rotary phone ^^^nah wack pound mike? I got sound rights of death in store f'I deck em, eavesdropping to the ground like the 2nd floor ^^^nah me? I get ripped n tan, stay fit w/ damn scary lats U? u get elliptical whenever u lick ur man's hairy ass ^^^wat LOL no u oughta know u gtg if my choppa's blowin, poser the hammer will leave volvo pinned up like an automotive poster ^^^nah chicks? please. even on the trick scene, queer folds it's not jumping the gun to say girls u consider grade AR-15 years old ^^^fire ur goofy n misinformed, where as I'm proving I'm sick w/ more flair e ain't spittin anything outta the normandy been doing it since the war there ^^^dope I'm that dude who delivers, mid 20s n I'll always do what a winner should beat me to a pulp? fiction. that's just a movie when u were considered good ^^^ok closer nothin crazy V/evolve, this was close but bar coulda took this if he sscratched out the middle of his verse, idk wat he was thinking but he heated up at the end but not enough to take this evolve verse was pretty consistent overall. he gets the dub here.