08-28-2018, 09:13 PM | #1 |
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Flow (0-0) vs Big Bolo(0-1) - Flow wins
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09-02-2018, 08:31 AM | #4 | |
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09-02-2018, 10:10 AM | #5 | ||
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Ext? Ok well Was 14, its 20 now....hope you feel better....NOT!
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Havin trouble dude? go have a couple brews with u know who Be sure u have him map out da night, but word is diablo already draws up bars for u! This mfer signed outta 1-2 after losin to Mr. Blue eyes with the picket fence Went back in a week later and to nobodies surprise...haven't won a battle ever since Round after round gettin fucked like Flo REAL....hardly! I see it like dis...he was fed up & decided vs cash to have his own comin out party Name chosen startin with F? Nah homie listen bolo was born a G Cuz when I slide by every alpha with the finger movin I aint txtn on my HTC I'm like quick draw mcgraw its over ur gone! u'aint seen what I'm bustin Ya fam beggin the news to blast ur face over the TV like a new Marvel production He don't make any money workin those long hours, don't front ur awfully fable When he really on all fours & take shit all day, profile occupation: The coffee table Figure out wat he dreamin of, gut ur fav place like I'm remodeling a kitchen sick? Riiight its that time of the month so his head isn't the only place'll be leakin crimson Working all night? were not sure what you do give a fuck tho, I'll blast this fool Got a straight shot to his dome but I aint holdin down Alt with the lasso tool Flow isn't one of the greats on board that flight has been in flight Ur moves all yesterdays news like current posts when clock strikes midnight U a bitch I can see it from a far, flow couldn't even get past par I'm an eagle to this wolF dropped in at the last minute like its a Cashius bar Last edited by Big Bolo; 09-02-2018 at 10:41 AM. |
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09-03-2018, 09:16 AM | #6 |
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Fuck a drive by I'll invade your entire neighborhood when I spray
Glocks from every direction like the whole street against you, Denzil in Training Day Your no Keyser Soze, no upset win for the retard pretending he's more Cus if we see a Big twist at the end its after ive smashed his fuckin mug to the floor Got more in store for you then what you failed to beat so far, bolognaise n bland bars Shit you struggled with the source so much Prego wanna use your face to brand jars N this clown mask robberies wit the swayze pulls, shits so shoddy Cus this Keanu faggot only trys to shoot after hes fallen an caught a body Jobless geek, hes playing D an D while im fuckin chicks n sipping henny I make a Big Bang for my buck, you can't even watch the show without thinkin how you'd do anything for a penny Yankee gun bars stunned by a European villain with C4 at the thumb Yet soon as i unstrap the peice it will be your body falling from the top like him in die hard 1 Son the limes got speed signs saying youll never reach my level, not even near I had Clocked your Number on the Board before I even stepped up a Gear Chase you around the house with the chopper, bullets for days bitch my Hammer shooting through every wall like Thors did in Dr Stranges N no one seen schad for ages cus my personal game insane To you id do the same, but your such a nobody even after this body I wont remember your name N adding 6 lines shows you shook kid, need ya sheep to vote or I've took this strolling An if Lil Bo Peep again I'll give him a bigger Hook then the one shes known for holding There's ya 20 faggot
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09-03-2018, 01:04 PM | #7 |
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Havin trouble dude? go have a couple brews with u know who
Be sure u have him map out da night, but word is diablo already draws up bars for u! decent This mfer signed outta 1-2 after losin to Mr. Blue eyes with the picket fence Went back in a week later and to nobodies surprise...haven't won a battle ever since lmal @ blue eyes with the picket fence. This is pretty solid as a personal Round after round gettin fucked like Flo REAL....hardly! I see it like dis...he was fed up & decided vs cash to have his own comin out party good personal Name chosen startin with F? Nah homie listen bolo was born a G Cuz when I slide by every alpha with the finger movin I aint txtn on my HTC i have an iPhone, I don’t get this I'm like quick draw mcgraw its over ur gone! u'aint seen what I'm bustin Ya fam beggin the news to blast ur face over the TV like a new Marvel production this is OK He don't make any money workin those long hours, don't front ur awfully fable When he really on all fours & take shit all day, profile occupation: The coffee table lol nah Figure out wat he dreamin of, gut ur fav place like I'm remodeling a kitchen sick? Riiight its that time of the month so his head isn't the only place'll be leakin crimson decent Working all night? were not sure what you do give a fuck tho, I'll blast this fool Got a straight shot to his dome but I aint holdin down Alt with the lasso tool i don’t get it Flow isn't one of the greats on board that flight has been in flight Ur moves all yesterdays news like current posts when clock strikes midnight lol nah this is a no U a bitch I can see it from a far, flow couldn't even get past par I'm an eagle to this wolF dropped in at the last minute like its a Cashius bar the concept had potential but fell flat here 2 good 1 ok 2 Decent 5 misses Vs Fuck a drive by I'll invade your entire neighborhood when I spray Glocks from every direction like the whole street against you, Denzil in Training Day alright Your no Keyser Soze, no upset win for the retard pretending he's more Cus if we see a Big twist at the end its after ive smashed his fuckin mug to the floor whats keyser soze? Decent here I think Got more in store for you then what you failed to beat so far, bolognaise n bland bars Shit you struggled with the source so much Prego wanna use your face to brand jars im not seeing the connection here N this clown mask robberies wit the swayze pulls, shits so shoddy Cus this Keanu faggot only trys to shoot after hes fallen an caught a body key on ouuuu? Sigh, you already know what I’m gonna say here Jobless geek, hes playing D an D while im fuckin chicks n sipping henny I make a Big Bang for my buck, you can't even watch the show without thinkin how you'd do anything for a penny super stretched line here bro Yankee gun bars stunned by a European villain with C4 at the thumb Yet soon as i unstrap the peice it will be your body falling from the top like him in die hard 1 decent Son the limes got speed signs saying youll never reach my level, not even near I had Clocked your Number on the Board before I even stepped up a Gear nah Chase you around the house with the chopper, bullets for days bitch my Hammer shooting through every wall like Thors did in Dr Stranges more avengers lines. But nah this one was cool & swaggy. Good stuff N no one seen schad for ages cus my personal game insane To you id do the same, but your such a nobody even after this body I wont remember your name nah N adding 6 lines shows you shook kid, need ya sheep to vote or I've took this strolling An if Lil Bo Peep again I'll give him a bigger Hook then the one shes known for holding alright pretty cool here 2 good 1 ok 2 Decent 5 misses Pshhh literally identical in verse quality here, can go either way but oddly enough I think bolos good lines were better than flows on a personal level. Vote Big Bolo PS: NEVER GO 20 LINES AGAIN IF YOU EXPECT THE BATTLE TO GET VOTES |
09-03-2018, 01:39 PM | #8 | ||
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Going w/ Bolo here You both had some misses but his didn't miss as hard as Flow's. Some of Flow was a little too stretched and he could have done more w/ the concepts if he delivered them better. Bolo had funnier lines imo even tho all of them weren't big hitters |
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09-04-2018, 01:03 PM | #9 |
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Havin trouble dude? go have a couple brews with u know who
Be sure u have him map out da night, but word is diablo already draws up bars for u! creative but also kind of stupid. maybe where you're from the gang gets together and plots their night of graphing paper with mechanical pencils but where i'm from we don't This mfer signed outta 1-2 after losin to Mr. Blue eyes with the picket fence Went back in a week later and to nobodies surprise...haven't won a battle ever since too simple Round after round gettin fucked like Flo REAL....hardly! I see it like dis...he was fed up & decided vs cash to have his own comin out party dont get it Name chosen startin with F? Nah homie listen bolo was born a G Cuz when I slide by every alpha with the finger movin I aint txtn on my HTC cool idea but worded poorly I'm like quick draw mcgraw its over ur gone! u'aint seen what I'm bustin Ya fam beggin the news to blast ur face over the TV like a new Marvel production nah He don't make any money workin those long hours, don't front ur awfully fable When he really on all fours & take shit all day, profile occupation: The coffee table you didn't use fable in a way that is accurate to the english language. do you shit on your coffee table? man this was all over the place. all fours and coffee table could have had an ill connection. @Hush maybe this could be a bar you take and reword and rework for that segment you were talking about. Figure out wat he dreamin of, gut ur fav place like I'm remodeling a kitchen sick? Riiight its that time of the month so his head isn't the only place'll be leakin crimson period/leaking blood is very played Working all night? were not sure what you do give a fuck tho, I'll blast this fool Got a straight shot to his dome but I aint holdin down Alt with the lasso tool cool Flow isn't one of the greats on board that flight has been in flight Ur moves all yesterdays news like current posts when clock strikes midnight no. simple as fuck man. U a bitch I can see it from a far, flow couldn't even get past par I'm an eagle to this wolF dropped in at the last minute like its a Cashius bar nah 4 vs Fuck a drive by I'll invade your entire neighborhood when I spray Glocks from every direction like the whole street against you, Denzil in Training Day ok Your no Keyser Soze, no upset win for the retard pretending he's more Cus if we see a Big twist at the end its after ive smashed his fuckin mug to the floor dope Got more in store for you then what you failed to beat so far, bolognaise n bland bars Shit you struggled with the source so much Prego wanna use your face to brand jars nah N this clown mask robberies wit the swayze pulls, shits so shoddy Cus this Keanu faggot only trys to shoot after hes fallen an caught a body nah Jobless geek, hes playing D an D while im fuckin chicks n sipping henny I make a Big Bang for my buck, you can't even watch the show without thinkin how you'd do anything for a penny ehh Yankee gun bars stunned by a European villain with C4 at the thumb Yet soon as i unstrap the peice it will be your body falling from the top like him in die hard 1 ok, lots of movie bars in this verse lol Son the limes got speed signs saying youll never reach my level, not even near I had Clocked your Number on the Board before I even stepped up a Gear nah Chase you around the house with the chopper, bullets for days bitch my Hammer shooting through every wall like Thors did in Dr Stranges cool N no one seen schad for ages cus my personal game insane To you id do the same, but your such a nobody even after this body I wont remember your name swag poopy N adding 6 lines shows you shook kid, need ya sheep to vote or I've took this strolling An if Lil Bo Peep again I'll give him a bigger Hook then the one shes known for holding ok 6 had LOTB with the mug on the floor v/flow both need to work on wording, bolos is too simple and he forces words that don't work in actual sentences and uses connections that are either bland or over thought. flow bars seem kind of long winded and some stuff just needs more structure |
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09-04-2018, 08:22 PM | #11 |
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Havin trouble dude? go have a couple brews with u know who
Be sure u have him map out da night, but word is diablo already draws up bars for u! Ok...not bad This mfer signed outta 1-2 after losin to Mr. Blue eyes with the picket fence Went back in a week later and to nobodies surprise...haven't won a battle ever since Nah Round after round gettin fucked like Flo REAL....hardly! I see it like dis...he was fed up & decided vs cash to have his own comin out party You could have done way more with this...fell a bit flat Name chosen startin with F? Nah homie listen bolo was born a G Cuz when I slide by every alpha with the finger movin I aint txtn on my HTC Not really a diss? I'm like quick draw mcgraw its over ur gone! u'aint seen what I'm bustin Ya fam beggin the news to blast ur face over the TV like a new Marvel production No He don't make any money workin those long hours, don't front ur awfully fable When he really on all fours & take shit all day, profile occupation: The coffee table Awfully fable? What does that mean? I don't get it...didn't like this Figure out wat he dreamin of, gut ur fav place like I'm remodeling a kitchen sick? Riiight its that time of the month so his head isn't the only place'll be leakin crimson Nah wasn't feeling it...too wordy Working all night? were not sure what you do give a fuck tho, I'll blast this fool Got a straight shot to his dome but I aint holdin down Alt with the lasso tool Not bad Flow isn't one of the greats on board that flight has been in flight Ur moves all yesterdays news like current posts when clock strikes midnight Nah very very basic U a bitch I can see it from a far, flow couldn't even get past par I'm an eagle to this wolF dropped in at the last minute like its a Cashius bar Nah vs. Fuck a drive by I'll invade your entire neighborhood when I spray Glocks from every direction like the whole street against you, Denzil in Training Day ok Your no Keyser Soze, no upset win for the retard pretending he's more Cus if we see a Big twist at the end its after ive smashed his fuckin mug to the floor I like this a lot Got more in store for you then what you failed to beat so far, bolognaise n bland bars Shit you struggled with the source so much Prego wanna use your face to brand jars Nah N this clown mask robberies wit the swayze pulls, shits so shoddy Cus this Keanu faggot only trys to shoot after hes fallen an caught a body I don't know what you were going for here? Jobless geek, hes playing D an D while im fuckin chicks n sipping henny I make a Big Bang for my buck, you can't even watch the show without thinkin how you'd do anything for a penny ok-ish....wordy Yankee gun bars stunned by a European villain with C4 at the thumb Yet soon as i unstrap the peice it will be your body falling from the top like him in die hard 1 nah Son the limes got speed signs saying youll never reach my level, not even near I had Clocked your Number on the Board before I even stepped up a Gear nah Chase you around the house with the chopper, bullets for days bitch my Hammer shooting through every wall like Thors did in Dr Stranges Ok N no one seen schad for ages cus my personal game insane To you id do the same, but your such a nobody even after this body I wont remember your name not really feeling tbh N adding 6 lines shows you shook kid, need ya sheep to vote or I've took this strolling An if Lil Bo Peep again I'll give him a bigger Hook then the one shes known for holding Cool Flow got it quite easily tbh...but both can do better. Vote - Flow
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09-05-2018, 12:18 PM | #13 |
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Havin trouble dude? go have a couple brews with u know who
Be sure u have him map out da night, but word is diablo already draws up bars for u! Stretched a bit, but I like the personal aspect of this here This mfer signed outta 1-2 after losin to Mr. Blue eyes with the picket fence Went back in a week later and to nobodies surprise...haven't won a battle ever since Lmaooo…I like this here as well. Funny jab for me Round after round gettin fucked like Flo REAL....hardly! I see it like dis...he was fed up & decided vs cash to have his own comin out party Ehh, decent....the execution is light here imo Name chosen startin with F? Nah homie listen bolo was born a G Cuz when I slide by every alpha with the finger movin I aint txtn on my HTC Hmmm...the concept is creative I guess....wording coo so I will let this slide I'm like quick draw mcgraw its over ur gone! u'aint seen what I'm bustin Ya fam beggin the news to blast ur face over the TV like a new Marvel production This could have been worded way better honestly...this was a miss for me He don't make any money workin those long hours, don't front ur awfully fable When he really on all fours & take shit all day, profile occupation: The coffee table This was light here, didn't like this one to much Figure out wat he dreamin of, gut ur fav place like I'm remodeling a kitchen sick? Riiight its that time of the month so his head isn't the only place'll be leakin crimson This is coo here, a little stretched in places also tho Working all night? were not sure what you do give a fuck tho, I'll blast this fool Got a straight shot to his dome but I aint holdin down Alt with the lasso tool Niceeee here Flow isn't one of the greats on board that flight has been in flight Ur moves all yesterdays news like current posts when clock strikes midnight This was coo here, light on the effective side, but still ok U a bitch I can see it from a far, flow couldn't even get past par I'm an eagle to this wolF dropped in at the last minute like its a Cashius bar Nice closer here --------------------- Fuck a drive by I'll invade your entire neighborhood when I spray Glocks from every direction like the whole street against you, Denzil in Training Day Stretched, but I like this opener here. Execution could have been better, but its all good Your no Keyser Soze, no upset win for the retard pretending he's more Cus if we see a Big twist at the end its after ive smashed his fuckin mug to the floor Didn't like this one here to much, miss for me here Got more in store for you then what you failed to beat so far, bolognaise n bland bars Shit you struggled with the source so much Prego wanna use your face to brand jars Lol, this was decent here N this clown mask robberies wit the swayze pulls, shits so shoddy Cus this Keanu faggot only trys to shoot after hes fallen an caught a body This is ok here, could have been worded way better tho….execution is so so Jobless geek, hes playing D an D while im fuckin chicks n sipping henny I make a Big Bang for my buck, you can't even watch the show without thinkin how you'd do anything for a penny Lol, nice jab here! Yankee gun bars stunned by a European villain with C4 at the thumb Yet soon as i unstrap the peice it will be your body falling from the top like him in die hard 1 I like how this was worded here, nice again imo Son the limes got speed signs saying youll never reach my level, not even near I had Clocked your Number on the Board before I even stepped up a Gear Ehh, decent, the execution is light kinda Chase you around the house with the chopper, bullets for days bitch my Hammer shooting through every wall like Thors did in Dr Stranges The Thor/hammer lines are misses for me, I see wayyyy to many. N no one seen schad for ages cus my personal game insane To you id do the same, but your such a nobody even after this body I wont remember your name Lmao, cool here N adding 6 lines shows you shook kid, need ya sheep to vote or I've took this strolling An if Lil Bo Peep again I'll give him a bigger Hook then the one shes known for holding Ight closer here.... This match was close as hell honestly, I both have you with 2 misses each.....Overall I have to lean it to FLOW. His bars were a little but more harsh on the execution side imo. Bolo is getting this down packed tho I can say that for sure. Kinda clean up the wording and execute ya punches more harsh with ya concepts. You will be good tho. Dope shit to both! V-Flow
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