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Old 01-28-2018, 11:49 PM   #1
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Old 01-29-2018, 07:23 AM   #2
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Old 01-30-2018, 09:37 PM   #3
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here go something quick, aint been having time for this shit lately to be battling everyday, seeing how yall lifelong text battlers heard every single bar that can b done already lol
but here goes a quick 8
so i guess since im dropping mine first, then my opponent has to do the same ammount of bars im doing
ok coo

-----------------------------------vs ENDER---

i got more Reel Firelines than Berkleys fishing rods,
pistols giv flesh wounds, these Sticks Point thru his meat worse than Shishkabobs.

all my nameflips been done,all u guys' methods are the same,
cosmic shit, so u better Study 13, or dimension in my name.

i got gun bars, but i dont even need to spark the lead,
ima Shark facing a caged scuba diver.. fin to rip his bars to shreds.

trust me yall, in all aspects.. aint shit he can do wit me,
knuckle game tight, get Lit Up with the Hands like im using Chi.
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Old 01-31-2018, 06:31 AM   #4
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I come correct, every line dropped with heat
And you come plain, appropriate since that's what you do after every defeat
You always drop bullshit, lose then get bitter
I got the goods on you, best you can claim is that he follows you on twitter
I'm in peak battling form, I'll school you son
We don't know where your form at, or why you can't write in a correct one
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I can't be bothered to finish this bar properly, but really now, like it matters
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Old 01-31-2018, 08:18 AM   #5
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i got more Reel Firelines than Berkleys fishing rods,
pistols giv flesh wounds, these Sticks Point thru his meat worse than Shishkabobs.
ok
all my nameflips been done,all u guys' methods are the same,
cosmic shit, so u better Study 13, or dimension in my name.
not feelin it
i got gun bars, but i dont even need to spark the lead,
ima Shark facing a caged scuba diver.. fin to rip his bars to shreds.
i get it fin/finna as in going to rip his bar to shreds but I don't think this is clever or hard hitting.
trust me yall, in all aspects.. aint shit he can do wit me,
knuckle game tight, get Lit Up with the Hands like im using Chi.
this was ok

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I come correct, every line dropped with heat
And you come plain, appropriate since that's what you do after every defeat
good. seen it a few times but personal/clean wording helped here
You always drop bullshit, lose then get bitter
I got the goods on you, best you can claim is that he follows you on twitter
lol aight
I'm in peak battling form, I'll school you son
We don't know where your form at, or why you can't write in a correct one
simple but it hit
If you had a rep, I'd be leaving it in tatters
I can't be bothered to finish this bar properly, but really now, like it matters
throw away

Krucial hsa the idea of it but needs better concepts and needs to work on his wording.

I dunno if ender is an alias but he has nice wording which helps when using simple or previously seen concepts.

I've got it 3-2 here for ender and enders were harder hitting too.

v/ender
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Old 01-31-2018, 11:33 AM   #6
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i got more Reel Firelines than Berkleys fishing rods,
pistols giv flesh wounds, these Sticks Point thru his meat worse than Shishkabobs.

This was ok!

all my nameflips been done,all u guys' methods are the same,
cosmic shit, so u better Study 13, or dimension in my name.

Nice

i got gun bars, but i dont even need to spark the lead,
ima Shark facing a caged scuba diver.. fin to rip his bars to shreds.

This was ight!

trust me yall, in all aspects.. aint shit he can do wit me,
knuckle game tight, get Lit Up with the Hands like im using Chi.

Decent

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I come correct, every line dropped with heat
And you come plain, appropriate since that's what you do after every defeat

Lol Nice

You always drop bullshit, lose then get bitter
I got the goods on you, best you can claim is that he follows you on twitter

Nice!


I'm in peak battling form, I'll school you son
We don't know where your form at, or why you can't write in a correct one

ight...


If you had a rep, I'd be leaving it in tatters
I can't be bothered to finish this bar properly, but really now, like it matters

ok!


I had to read this battle like 3 times, Ender had more personals then punches, simple structure, krucial had some ok lines but they were some what hitting harder to me.

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Old 01-31-2018, 03:53 PM   #7
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i got more Reel Firelines than Berkleys fishing rods,
pistols giv flesh wounds, these Sticks Point thru his meat worse than Shishkabobs.
I like the setup but i felt the finisher even tho it was good didnt really correlate together shoudve tied ur finisher into a fishing reference

all my nameflips been done,all u guys' methods are the same,
cosmic shit, so u better Study 13, or dimension in my name.
Cool not a harsh hit though

i got gun bars, but i dont even need to spark the lead,
ima Shark facing a caged scuba diver.. fin to rip his bars to shreds.
Dope flip here

trust me yall, in all aspects.. aint shit he can do wit me,
knuckle game tight, get Lit Up with the Hands like im using Chi.
Tai chi never heard anyone call it Chi lol anyways this was just ok lit up.with the hands was too simple

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I come correct, every line dropped with heat
And you come plain, appropriate since that's what you do after every defeat
Lol simple but good humor factor

You always drop bullshit, lose then get bitter
I got the goods on you, best you can claim is that he follows you on twitter
Lol this a personal flip her im assuming @Ender get at me in chat to confirm

I'm in peak battling form, I'll school you son
We don't know where your form at, or why you can't write in a correct onefat wife
Simple but cool flip good execution

If you had a rep, I'd be leaving it in tatters
I can't be bothered to finish this bar properly, but really now, like it matters
Cocky lol

Well Krucial focused on being over fancy with wps alot of heads quoted his opener but ur finisher always has to correlate with ur setup your talking about how ur lines are reel fire then u switch it to a gun bar that had nothing to do with the opener as a whole. The shark reference was dope. The tai chi line i felt u couldve had something more creative in the reference. Ender like i said simple lines but he executed on them better and added a little hunor factor.

V/Ender
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Old 01-31-2018, 09:48 PM   #8
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here go something quick, aint been having time for this shit lately to be battling everyday, seeing how yall lifelong text battlers heard every single bar that can b done already lol
but here goes a quick 8
so i guess since im dropping mine first, then my opponent has to do the same ammount of bars im doing
ok coo

Bro they love saying played on nameplays, regardless if you are new or not. They think it makes them sound like know it alls but all it means is they've been bartling the same mfs for years and years and can never accept a new flip on an angle.
Anyways..
-----------------------------------vs ENDER---

i got more Reel Firelines than Berkleys fishing rods,
pistols giv flesh wounds, these Sticks Point thru his meat worse than Shishkabobs.

Reach but i'll allow it.

all my nameflips been done,all u guys' methods are the same,
cosmic shit, so u better Study 13, or dimension in my name.

Cool wordplay

i got gun bars, but i dont even need to spark the lead,
ima Shark facing a caged scuba diver.. fin to rip his bars to shreds.

Thus is a reach i cant accept

trust me yall, in all aspects.. aint shit he can do wit me,
knuckle game tight, get Lit Up with the Hands like im using Chi.

Yeah i like this one



I come correct, every line dropped with heat
And you come plain, appropriate since that's what you do after every defeat

Niiiiice

You always drop bullshit, lose then get bitter
I got the goods on you, best you can claim is that he follows you on twitter

Killer

I'm in peak battling form, I'll school you son
We don't know where your form at, or why you can't write in a correct onefat wife

Alright bro leave him alone hes done

If you had a rep, I'd be leaving it in tatters
I can't be bothered to finish this bar properly, but really now, like it matters

Ahhh you broke the fourth wall didnt like that.


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Old 01-31-2018, 10:24 PM   #9
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Had to go with Krucial on this one because of his punches being more complex and thought out and he was also better in terms of his rhyming, using multis effectively throughout his verse. Ender was too simplistic for my liking in almost all facets, which led to his verse not having the same impact his opponent's did.

MVGT : Krucial.
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Old 02-02-2018, 01:12 PM   #10
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Krucial came with some pretty fierce wp. Major improvement from previous week(s). That everyone hates me attitude is getting old tho. Your content spoke for itself this week. I don't like 'stick' lines but delivery on shish kebob was cool. Dimension is creative. Shark cage is cool. Not a huge fan of the closer.

Ender -- Come plain is cool opener. Simple and effective. Goodz is a cool personal, but not a super harsh diss. Form bar was cool as shit -- much like the opener. Closer is shit.

Ender had two decent lines, understated and not super harsh so I was almost tempted to give it to Krucial tbh. Both closers were shit. Subtract that and it comes down to originality. Ender had some funny personals, opener probably swayed it cuz it cut right to the heart of the matter. Closer than it looks tho.

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i got more Reel Firelines than Berkleys fishing rods,
pistols giv flesh wounds, these Sticks Point thru his meat worse than Shish-kabobs.
cool
all my nameflips been done,all u guys' methods are the same,
cosmic shit, so u better Study 13, or dimension in my name.
ok
i got gun bars, but i dont even need to spark the lead,
ima Shark facing a caged scuba diver.. fin to rip his bars to shreds.
bit of a reach here
trust me yall, in all aspects.. aint shit he can do wit me,
knuckle game tight, get Lit Up with the Hands like im using Chi.
this is an old concept but the flip is decent


Idk why you wanna leave bro, everyone hates on everyone. Stop being emotional about it and just keep progressing as you’ve been doing. Each week I see improvement from you, and it’s only UP from here. G tho kick the “everyone hates me” persona and just battle.

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I come correct, every line dropped with heat
And you come plain, appropriate since that's what you do after every defeat
simple but effective
You always drop bullshit, lose then get bitter
I got the goods on you, best you can claim is that he follows you on twitter
gone lol
I'm in peak battling form, I'll school you son
We don't know where your form at, or why you can't write in a correct one
alright
If you had a rep, I'd be leaving it in tatters
I can't be bothered to finish this bar properly, but really now, like it matters
the fuck


Really close battle here, 2 different styles battling each other but I think ender edges it with wording that was impeccable this week. Concepts a bit simple but the delivery was great, good job to both.

Vote Ender
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Ender was better. Jesus at Krucial wtf is that. Ur first two concepts had potential but u killed them

The twitter line won it alone

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Kruc
opener was dece
dimension in my name was dope

other 2 missed

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Ender
format joint was dope, n personal

opener way.too played to me & the other 2 were too simple

v/krucial
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ENDER

13 you had potential heat w/ 'shish kabob' & 'dimensions', but you the execution lacking.
Ender 'complain & format were simple, but effective & 'twitter' killed it, great personal.
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