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08-25-2014, 05:02 PM | #2 |
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I could use your style to score, then use it to win a trial or court
yours cant convince a little, Broke… that’s why u barely see him & your ex collects child support see, I also know that little fat slob loves eating chilly, no greens Broke likes to play detective… but has no clue Mrs. Lesnar is used to spilling the beans cherish every day cuz it may be the last time u use personals again, clown Great memories last a lifetime… yours is of your 2 week old son who is around ten now we gotta stop this nonsense; this the kinda shit we cannot fathom, fam your verses don’t just tank… this square has protesters lined up from here to Tiananmen u trained lots for this lame drop but it’s in the mechanics of the rhymes u wrote u tried delivering a powerful message… but it’s like the chain popped on the huffy bike u drove Metaphorically speaking; your punches are a joke, why train? Lesnar never learned how to throw them… while mine are dope like Cain So u gonna brawl with who? u punch like a girl, so u may wanna call a truce & if u get caught up in the crossfire… I bet Joan of Arc would show more balls than u I got great charm; I get pussy plus a place to crash after a night at the late bar & if it comes to worst your mom’s my insurance… while u drunk dial Jake from State Farm I titty-fuck bitches unlike u who gets slapped & meddled Let’s be honest, if u crushed any cans… it’s only to sell as scrap & metal people expected better comp in a finals, instead it’s slaughter, geek This sonning is such a slap to your face… it left a burning sensation on your father’s cheek & Yea, u got the freedom to look-up whomever u want but ya prying is weak got congress questioning the patriot act… ever since you started using Belichick’s spy gate technique Searching threads to post statement lines isn’t impressive; u kidding B? ya style doesn’t need a touch-up… it’s begging to be molested by someone with creativity u stumbled your way here; so thinkin u can win doesn’t make honest sense either you’re punch drunk… or the Mayor of Whatever USA approved your confidence thought u were gonna get lucky in the tag tourney; u the worst, clown u drug meth down… & apparently he was still under the influence when yall got raped in the first round I beat u at ya own game, Mr inspector so lame; aint it funny son? Your verses show signs of poor taste… mine are standing over Broke doing the Manziel money one
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ur Elements loss to Pancake had me in a laughing fit words can't depict the outcome, but James Foley did a great job dramatically reenacting it ever Oneduh why "nik" np's get u pissed? no trollin son he cooked u to perfection wit them 8 yrs ago...n' even then they were considered overdone i'll disgrace ur name with a haymaker or basic age flip n' they'll call this the biggest upset since......the other day when big baby made u rage quit BL = UPN troll, there's ur advantage now admire mine check the bracket seeding, Andres..I replaced Beyond n' still had ur number the entire time there's no doubt ur filthy rich, wallets all fat n' swollen u must be used to them wads of cash.....seein how salty u got after his swag and flow win behind those attention whore pics and every quoted bar ur just a sad 37 yr old poser who takes somali n' acts more childish than their soldiers are ur BMI's pushing 40 too, BBQ got u dodgin them stairs feel free to crunch the numbers.............but after 1 u'll be laid up wit mad abdominal tears ur out of shape so in all or nothing battles u never sweat cuz ur known to hand out walking papers..n' thats as close to being athletic as u'll ever get seen ur pic and brought some last minute surprises u want to pink slip, kid?..u look like u pink slipped Kid Capri for his swag, image n' likeness u said backpackers are geeks but I question ur scope if Rhymesayers n' Living Legends is nerd rap..why u stay tellin us ur the best of them both? I can tweet u @ASanchez305, right? nik goat as can be n' I know @AesopRockWins on Twitter......cuz he has 81.9k followers n' u have a total of 3 u tag with younger up-and-comers to cramp their spot when kung left u lost ur grip..so now ur nervous n' holdin Bags tighter than a ransom drop remember that mystery spic Bags admitted he tapped? well tag partners should be giving each other advice, nik....not gonorrhea, trich, or the clap u got zero charisma, no flair n' u struggle to flip tropes I was set to use a 'fucked ur wife' bar..but ur a dull faggot n' suck the fun out of dick jokes ur precious rep gets no love, this mooch'll bluff n' lose n' his wife only be laudanum..cuz she tired of coughin up money for his stupid fuckin shoes |
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nik-A went the fuck in with those opening bars I could use your style to score, then use it to win a trial or court yours cant convince a little, Broke… that’s why u barely see him & your ex collects child support cherish every day cuz it may be the last time u use personals again, clown Great memories last a lifetime… yours is of your 2 week old son who is around ten now literally roflzzz @ that last shit i think a few went over my head with the american references, i'd no idea what they meant, so sorry about that. tank in tinnamen square shit was nice. sonning slap shit was cool too Broke i didnt get your opening line, you picked it up after that though, i thought this shit towards the end was mean: u said backpackers are geeks but I question ur scope if Rhymesayers n' Living Legends is nerd rap..why u stay tellin us ur the best of them both? I can tweet u @ASanchez305, right? nik goat as can be n' I know @AesopRockWins on Twitter......cuz he has 81.9k followers n' u have a total of 3 LOL back to back zingers from both honestly could see it going either way, couple seemed to miss but maybe that because i'm a britfag and they went over my head either way, you're both cool with me, dope finals i'd edge it to nik-A if i had to because that shit about Lendo's kid was fucking savage as fuckkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk ahahahahaha RTF: http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=90266
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I could use your style to score, then use it to win a trial or court
yours cant convince a little, Broke… that’s why u barely see him & your ex collects child support we gotta stop this nonsense; this the kinda shit we cannot fathom, fam your verses don’t just tank… this square has protesters lined up from here to Tiananmen u trained lots for this lame drop but it’s in the mechanics of the rhymes u wrote u tried delivering a powerful message… but it’s like the chain popped on the huffy bike u drove i got great charm; I get pussy plus a place to crash after a night at the late bar & if it comes to worst your mom’s my insurance… while u drunk dial Jake from State Farm I titty-fuck bitches unlike u who gets slapped & meddled Let’s be honest, if u crushed any cans… it’s only to sell as scrap & metal Vs ur out of shape so in all or nothing battles u never sweat cuz ur known to hand out walking papers..n' thats as close to being athletic as u'll ever get u said backpackers are geeks but I question ur scope if Rhymesayers n' Living Legends is nerd rap..why u stay tellin us ur the best of them both? I can tweet u @ASanchez305, right? nik goat as can be n' I know @AesopRockWins on Twitter......cuz he has 81.9k followers n' u have a total of 3 u tag with younger up-and-comers to cramp their spot when kung left u lost ur grip..so now ur nervous n' holdin Bags tighter than a ransom drop V/Nik, yo dope ass battle foreal both had some fire, les ransom drop was fuckin sick an lotb tbh, but i felt nik had one more quote an his non quotes were still a lil better than brokes but still close as fuck had to read it acouple times to decide, it could go either way. but i say nik took it, but good finals.
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ill nik-A: Those first six lines in which you flipped BROKE LESNAR's tactics on him were really strong. The opener was the line of the battle and one of the best of the tournament. Then you got a little generic for a bit, with the exception of a weak Brock Lesnar line. None of the generic lines were particularly hard, but I chuckled at the Jake from State Farm line. The personals about Spygate and the lack of creativity hit pretty well, but I thought the Meth line flopped. Then the closer was set up very well but didn't seem clever enough in connecting sign in two forms. Sometimes your wording let you down ("scrap and metal" and "bike you drove" were awkard). But more often in this case, you didn't go harsh enough. The best lines mostly were the personal ones. If you carved the 10-16 worst lines out of this verse to make it a more standard length, it'd have been fierce. That's understandable in a 30-line battle.
BROKE LESNAR: You opened up kind of awkwardly and seemed to be cyphering through a set of personals early in your verse rather than attacking aggressively. The first six lines felt like that, at least. The Beyond line was a clever use of seeding, but you didn't really impress me until the Somalian line. That's when you started hitting him with personals that were more than past message-board threads. I think because of the length of the battle you kept using multiple concepts on the same topic a bit too much, which made some things redundant. The best example was the consecutive nerd-rap lines. I thought the Twitter one was much better than the Living Legends one. With the two Bags punches, I liked the kungfugrip one. With the two fat punches, I liked the crunches one. In a way, the extra lines blunt the impact of the good ones, like you were hedging your bets on each one so you used two per personal. The ending didn't really feel like the last line of a verse, either, and I don't think you incorporated laudanum well enough into the structure of the line. Your best lines were the kungfugrip and Somalian ones, but there were quite a few that, while not negatives exactly, didn't land. I think ill nik-A wins this because of a creativity edge. Vote: ill nik-A
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Thing is this, this was extremely generic and predictable on many halves from both sides. The opener of nik-a seemed pretty forced and was mainly buttoned on humor and some sort of personal umph. It didn't really have any creative class to it, other than the fact that was it some sort of personal, I assume. Spilling the beans, was ok I guess but seem rather forced. I just can't bring myself to think that's actually some sort of crazy line. It isn't. It's just seamingly stretched but put together well structurally -thats it. Tienanmen was weak to me cause my compatriots have used that line a few in their OM's. I didn't find it enlightening, or fresh.
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Never really understood fake battle internet rap or the method its written but lol. Broke wasn't that much greater, but he did have humor and the research thing where nik-a said it backfired - it didn't. I don't even see where nik-a researched anything, other than the first opening lines, so that, on behalf of nik was also a miss in my eyes. Or if it landed it wasnt significant enough to make any real damage. Always nice to see my name dropped in lines here and there. That upset was purely simple, but the humor - which ive' mentioned is key is cool. I liked it. That was a pretty good meltdown. Wads of cash was cool, simple, but funny. I don't see much of a difference in these lines and the other ones people write, lol. Baffling. Funny to me. on both ends, I'm just re-reading. Nik's set ups also pale just a bit in comparison to broke. That's where I think he's a bit more polished. Nik has this knack for just doing enough with the set-ups. IT always connects and transitions well, but it's never really funny or atleast a bit witty in wording. Brokes aren't either, but they have a bit more sting to them. Though I saw many instances in which his became lazy i.e "never sweat" lol. Some lines were full of humor, the twitter one was less likened by humor and had a more aggressive tact. One thing that bothered me was the eery fucking length of each bar was exactly the same and followed the same protocol. So it sounds hypocritical of me when I accuse nik of being repetitive. Wow. It's like a fucking binary coding. It's all the same length. Nothing made longer or shorter to fit anything. It's formulaic - my problem with internet battling. Lame. It follows a code. It makes me fall asleep, almost. Go crazy, do whatever you want. Just rhyme. Go at their necks. Make fun of them. Fuck generics. Just kill them. The wording here wascool. It seemed you stepped off the gas in the finals. I liked your other verses more, broke. Nik-a seemed up to par to his usual standard. Nothing was mismatched here in terms of skill. Both seemed pretty even. It's more of a likeness to who appealed to you more. Both had their fair share of misses imo, but I'd definitely give it to broke by a hair. Re-read both a few times, and if I had to read either, one more time because I had too, because I liked it? I'd have to give it to broke. |
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I could use your style to score, then use it to win a trial or court
yours cant convince a little, Broke… that’s why u barely see him & your ex collects child support Ouch see, I also know that little fat slob loves eating chilly, no greens Broke likes to play detective… but has no clue Mrs. Lesnar is used to spilling the beans Ehh....detective...no clue...spilling the beans...an the tie in with cooking etc all clever....but what secret is she telling ? cherish every day cuz it may be the last time u use personals again, clown Great memories last a lifetime… yours is of your 2 week old son who is around ten now Jesus. we gotta stop this nonsense; this the kinda shit we cannot fathom, fam your verses don’t just tank… this square has protesters lined up from here to Tiananmen Dope u trained lots for this lame drop but it’s in the mechanics of the rhymes u wrote u tried delivering a powerful message… but it’s like the chain popped on the huffy bike u drove Not bad...not amazing Metaphorically speaking; your punches are a joke, why train? Lesnar never learned how to throw them… while mine are dope like Cain Im guessing cain is a ufc fighter....aside from the obv cain/dope..... this didnt hit hard imo So u gonna brawl with who? u punch like a girl, so u may wanna call a truce & if u get caught up in the crossfire… I bet Joan of Arc would show more balls than u Ok I got great charm; I get pussy plus a place to crash after a night at the late bar & if it comes to worst your mom’s my insurance… while u drunk dial Jake from State Farm Lol cool I titty-fuck bitches unlike u who gets slapped & meddled Let’s be honest, if u crushed any cans… it’s only to sell as scrap & metal Ok people expected better comp in a finals, instead it’s slaughter, geek This sonning is such a slap to your face… it left a burning sensation on your father’s cheek Eh & Yea, u got the freedom to look-up whomever u want but ya prying is weak got congress questioning the patriot act… ever since you started using Belichick’s spy gate technique Fire. Searching threads to post statement lines isn’t impressive; u kidding B? ya style doesn’t need a touch-up… it’s begging to be molested by someone with creativity Lol tbis was weird...but good u stumbled your way here; so thinkin u can win doesn’t make honest sense either you’re punch drunk… or the Mayor of Whatever USA approved your confidence Over my head i guess thought u were gonna get lucky in the tag tourney; u the worst, clown u drug meth down… & apparently he was still under the influence when yall got raped in the first round Ok I beat u at ya own game, Mr inspector so lame; aint it funny son? Your verses show signs of poor taste… mine are standing over Broke doing the Manziel money one Lmao [QUOTE=Paradigm;389355]Broke Lesnar: ur Elements loss to Pancake had me in a laughing fit words can't depict the outcome, but James Foley did a great job dramatically reenacting it Eh....ok....shouldve focused more on hurting him with the personal ever Oneduh why "nik" np's get u pissed? no trollin son he cooked u to perfection wit them 8 yrs ago...n' even then they were considered overdone Smart punch.....the personal aspect isnt harsh tho...again i'll disgrace ur name with a haymaker or basic age flip n' they'll call this the biggest upset since......the other day when big baby made u rage quit This is better BL = UPN troll, there's ur advantage now admire mine check the bracket seeding, Andres..I replaced Beyond n' still had ur number the entire time Clever...not harsh tho there's no doubt ur filthy rich, wallets all fat n' swollen u must be used to them wads of cash.....seein how salty u got after his swag and flow win Did cash beat him in a swag battle? This shit too old to be relevant.....asode from the fact no1 gave a fuck wen it happened likely....bad personal attempt here imho behind those attention whore pics and every quoted bar ur just a sad 37 yr old poser who takes somali n' acts more childish than their soldiers are This was crazy lol. ur BMI's pushing 40 too, BBQ got u dodgin them stairs feel free to crunch the numbers.............but after 1 u'll be laid up wit mad abdominal tears Light ur out of shape so in all or nothing battles u never sweat cuz ur known to hand out walking papers..n' thats as close to being athletic as u'll ever get Not bad seen ur pic and brought some last minute surprises u want to pink slip, kid?..u look like u pink slipped Kid Capri for his swag, image n' likeness Lmao. Its the one an only kiiiiiiiiid...... u said backpackers are geeks but I question ur scope if Rhymesayers n' Living Legends is nerd rap..why u stay tellin us ur the best of them both? Ok I can tweet u @ASanchez305, right? nik goat as can be n' I know @AesopRockWins on Twitter......cuz he has 81.9k followers n' u have a total of 3 Lmao....this is cool....but....i mean....obv aesop is famous....its not like ur really sayin much here u tag with younger up-and-comers to cramp their spot when kung left u lost ur grip..so now ur nervous n' holdin Bags tighter than a ransom drop Fire remember that mystery spic Bags admitted he tapped? well tag partners should be giving each other advice, nik....not gonorrhea, trich, or the clap Loooooooool. I have a clean bill of health now fyi. Nice punch. u got zero charisma, no flair n' u struggle to flip tropes I was set to use a 'fucked ur wife' bar..but ur a dull faggot n' suck the fun out of dick jokes Lmao@suck the fun out of dick jokes. That was cool. ur precious rep gets no love, this mooch'll bluff n' lose n' his wife only be laudanum..cuz she tired of coughin up money for his stupid fuckin shoes Idk what wordplay ur trynna do with laudanum....i had to actually google it to see its a painkiller...an dk the enunciation Loud an um Loadin em .... Idk. Miss. Ok...so....wouldnt say i loved this battle. Maybe 30lines had u guys w some throw away shit thats making me think lower of the verses then i should. Niks personals on broke was a perfect flip.......whats good for the goose i suppose. Broke had sum bangers ...somalian was crack ....broke took a whkle but started to heat up towards the end....wasted most kf his personak angles on nik by not executing them harshly....he seemed to focus more on being clever ....which has its place....but in the SC finals vs such a well known persona u gotta go personal and for the jugular. 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I could use your style to score, then use it to win a trial or court
yours cant convince a little, Broke… that’s why u barely see him & your ex collects child support i feel like the little broke play is awkward. see, I also know that little fat slob loves eating chilly, no greens Broke likes to play detective… but has no clue Mrs. Lesnar is used to spilling the beans the whole bar felt like a setup cherish every day cuz it may be the last time u use personals again, clown Great memories last a lifetime… yours is of your 2 week old son who is around ten now fire personal we gotta stop this nonsense; this the kinda shit we cannot fathom, fam your verses don’t just tank… this square has protesters lined up from here to Tiananmen dope u trained lots for this lame drop but it’s in the mechanics of the rhymes u wrote u tried delivering a powerful message… but it’s like the chain popped on the huffy bike u drove good jab Metaphorically speaking; your punches are a joke, why train? Lesnar never learned how to throw them… while mine are dope like Cain decent So u gonna brawl with who? u punch like a girl, so u may wanna call a truce & if u get caught up in the crossfire… I bet Joan of Arc would show more balls than u cool line I got great charm; I get pussy plus a place to crash after a night at the late bar & if it comes to worst your mom’s my insurance… while u drunk dial Jake from State Farm Lol.sick I titty-fuck bitches unlike u who gets slapped & meddled Let’s be honest, if u crushed any cans… it’s only to sell as scrap & metal cool.good wording. people expected better comp in a finals, instead it’s slaughter, geek This sonning is such a slap to your face… it left a burning sensation on your father’s cheek i like. & Yea, u got the freedom to look-up whomever u want but ya prying is weak got congress questioning the patriot act… ever since you started using Belichick’s spy gate technique dope Searching threads to post statement lines isn’t impressive; u kidding B? ya style doesn’t need a touch-up… it’s begging to be molested by someone with creativity fire. u stumbled your way here; so thinkin u can win doesn’t make honest sense either you’re punch drunk… or the Mayor of Whatever USA approved your confidence solid thought u were gonna get lucky in the tag tourney; u the worst, clown u drug meth down… & apparently he was still under the influence when yall got raped in the first round not feeling. I beat u at ya own game, Mr inspector so lame; aint it funny son? Your verses show signs of poor taste… mine are standing over Broke doing the Manziel money one solid Broke Lesnar: ur Elements loss to Pancake had me in a laughing fit words can't depict the outcome, but James Foley did a great job dramatically reenacting it solid ever Oneduh why "nik" np's get u pissed? no trollin son he cooked u to perfection wit them 8 yrs ago...n' even then they were considered overdone solid wording. Solid jab. i'll disgrace ur name with a haymaker or basic age flip n' they'll call this the biggest upset since......the other day when big baby made u rage quit good job hiding the punch lol BL = UPN troll, there's ur advantage now admire mine check the bracket seeding, Andres..I replaced Beyond n' still had ur number the entire time like. there's no doubt ur filthy rich, wallets all fat n' swollen u must be used to them wads of cash.....seein how salty u got after his swag and flow win lol lotb behind those attention whore pics and every quoted bar ur just a sad 37 yr old poser who takes somali n' acts more childish than their soldiers are shit. This n last bar best1 2 of battle so far. ur BMI's pushing 40 too, BBQ got u dodgin them stairs feel free to crunch the numbers.............but after 1 u'll be laid up wit mad abdominal tears lol. Ok ur out of shape so in all or nothing battles u never sweat cuz ur known to hand out walking papers..n' thats as close to being athletic as u'll ever get solid pink slip line. seen ur pic and brought some last minute surprises u want to pink slip, kid?..u look like u pink slipped Kid Capri for his swag, image n' likeness lol.nikka does resemble Capri. u said backpackers are geeks but I question ur scope if Rhymesayers n' Living Legends is nerd rap..why u stay tellin us ur the best of them both? woah. Ok. I can tweet u @ASanchez305, right? nik goat as can be n' I know @AesopRockWins on Twitter......cuz he has 81.9k followers n' u have a total of 3 good personal. u tag with younger up-and-comers to cramp their spot when kung left u lost ur grip..so now ur nervous n' holdin Bags tighter than a ransom drop Lol remember that mystery spic Bags admitted he tapped? well tag partners should be giving each other advice, nik....not gonorrhea, trich, or the clap decent personal. u got zero charisma, no flair n' u struggle to flip tropes I was set to use a 'fucked ur wife' bar..but ur a dull faggot n' suck the fun out of dick jokes Lol. Good jab. ur precious rep gets no love, this mooch'll bluff n' lose n' his wife only be laudanum..cuz she tired of coughin up money for his stupid fuckin shoes aight. Decent. ___ Idk. I thought ill was good but nothing really had me like sheesh. Some bats were good personals worded awkwardly like the little broke line. I really liked the touch up line tho. But i felt like broke was much more clever and innovative with the wordplay. Somalian bar was bonkies. Wad of cash was classic lol z. Imo broke took this . V broke. ___________ Last edited by Blanco Bishop; 09-02-2014 at 09:27 AM. |
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& if it comes to worst your mom’s my insurance… while u drunk dial Jake from State Farm - even tho' I think "Mom" lines are corny as hell...the state farm shit was dope Let’s be honest, if u crushed any cans… it’s only to sell as scrap & metal -diggin' thiz This sonning is such a slap to your face… it left a burning sensation on your father’s cheek -daaaamn ya style doesn’t need a touch-up… it’s begging to be molested by someone with creativity -ok, ok u drug meth down… & apparently he was still under the influence when yall got raped in the first round -thiz was straight..coulda been a knock-out punch tho' verse was ok...thought it picked up some near the middle...I was expecting a lot more hard hitting punchlinez tho' Broke-- he cooked u to perfection wit them 8 yrs ago...n' even then they were considered overdone -ok n' they'll call this the biggest upset since......the other day when big baby made u rage quit - hahahahaha ur just a sad 37 yr old poser who takes somali n' acts more childish than their soldiers are -ughh ur out of shape so in all or nothing battles u never sweat cuz ur known to hand out walking papers..n' thats as close to being athletic as u'll ever get -Dayuuuum when kung left u lost ur grip..so now ur nervous n' holdin Bags tighter than a ransom drop -whoa u got zero charisma, no flair n' u struggle to flip tropes I was set to use a 'fucked ur wife' bar..but ur a dull faggot n' suck the fun out of dick jokes -Whoa, Whoa haha Broke- Solid verse...every now an then there was a bar that seemed to be a filler...but the majority was pretty Hard Hittin' Overall- dope battle...styles are somewhat similar but Broke got a structure thats a lil' smoother flowin' and he's punchez are more creative... Thought thiz was all Broke Vote-Broke ________________ |
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Congrats to you guys making it to the finals. This was a nice battle. First off. Broke came with a lot of jabs, he was probably the more consistently sound battler in this bout, to me. He had cool punches throughout his verse, and only 2-4 that really stood out as a miss. He did well. Nik, was less consistent in my opinion. But he was throwing haymakers. He might have missed on 1 or 2 more but that is easily made up by some of the really tight stuff he was dropping. Good battle guys. I held off voting for a while because I couldn't decide what I thought should win; consistency vs. power, jabs vs. hooks. Broke can't when by decision if nik knocks him out in the 10th round though. V/ ill nik-A
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ever Oneduh why "nik" np's get u pissed? no trollin son he cooked u to perfection wit them 8 yrs ago...n' even then they were considered overdone i'll disgrace ur name with a haymaker or basic age flip n' they'll call this the biggest upset since......the other day when big baby made u rage quit BL = UPN troll, there's ur advantage now admire mine check the bracket seeding, Andres..I replaced Beyond n' still had ur number the entire time behind those attention whore pics and every quoted bar ur just a sad 37 yr old poser who takes somali n' acts more childish than their soldiers are ur out of shape so in all or nothing battles u never sweat cuz ur known to hand out walking papers..n' thats as close to being athletic as u'll ever get u tag with younger up-and-comers to cramp their spot when kung left u lost ur grip..so now ur nervous n' holdin Bags tighter than a ransom drop Nik cherish every day cuz it may be the last time u use personals again, clown Great memories last a lifetime… yours is of your 2 week old son who is around ten now we gotta stop this nonsense; this the kinda shit we cannot fathom, fam your verses don’t just tank… this square has protesters lined up from here to Tiananmen So u gonna brawl with who? u punch like a girl, so u may wanna call a truce & if u get caught up in the crossfire… I bet Joan of Arc would show more balls than u I got great charm; I get pussy plus a place to crash after a night at the late bar & if it comes to worst your mom’s my insurance… while u drunk dial Jake from State Farm I titty-fuck bitches unlike u who gets slapped & meddled Let’s be honest, if u crushed any cans… it’s only to sell as scrap & metal & Yea, u got the freedom to look-up whomever u want but ya prying is weak got congress questioning the patriot act… ever since you started using Belichick’s spy gate technique Searching threads to post statement lines isn’t impressive; u kidding B? ya style doesn’t need a touch-up… it’s begging to be molested by someone with creativity u stumbled your way here; so thinkin u can win doesn’t make honest sense either you’re punch drunk… or the Mayor of Whatever USA approved your confidence This was a solid battle both came with a couple lines that stung, I got Nik with more quotes here though and line of the battle, Nik was also a bit more consistent in tying his hits together, this was basically a jab fest though only haymaker I saw was the LOTB which was on the side with more quotes anyway... mvgt/Nik
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Solid battle. Too many lines, which made for less potent punches. Broke had more misses than Nika, and even those misses were good enough to beat anyone else any day. I thought Brokes best lines were the Aes one and the bar before that. Niks best were the first 6 or so personal lines. I would very slightly edge this to Nik. Good job from both for getting this far.
Vote, Nika.
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09-09-2014, 04:57 AM | #17 |
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ill nik-A wins the Summer Classic 7-4. Congratulations.
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