BodySnatcher vs bleak - BODY WINS

[bleak]

SOL Season 1
Wk 4

Due Thursday, Feb 14

Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 16 lines
Line limit can increase if both agree
24hr ext to be granted by opponent

NO biting
NO swaying
NO feeding
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[bleak]

10 pref you would think I should have 30 written already but sadly no

[BodySnatcher]

We dropping today then?

[bleak]

Lol

Na but I'm showing to this, probably tmrw if you wanna go early

[BodySnatcher]

Word. Tomorrow.

[bleak]

Body chase greats' coattails, you act like I'm prone to jealousy
I'm a precise shooter, don't need 6 for u to Catch the Steel like Brady's legacy.
you the face of the Street? it's getn stomped to the curb now
Heel 2 ur skull, the bad Guile flash kick u to the pavement in the 3rd Round
if I clap rounds - black Talons. all the talkin you can fkn save it.
FIND urself in a Lake, deagle got u Running from the Birds like Anthony Davis
.22 in a loose sock, if u got me cornered I'm sparkin
Extendo in the boot, lil toy w/a whole lot of screamin like Chihuahua's barking
oh you the Busting Melon type? Push Wigs and dead geeks!
BRODIE I'll bust on ur bitch melons and push that wig into ur bedsheets
I'll scalp you with a bolo. &even out of range ur in danger
- scope w/a Fine Tune - 6 clicks away I'm Splitting Hairs with the laser.

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[BodySnatcher]

I’ve beaten him twice so even if the shotty miscues,
He's got enough on his plate & I don’t think he wants any more Body issues
U don’t sip sizzurp...u guzzle it until ur hand aches,
& that explains why the back of ur neck looks just like a stack of pancakes
Bro I’ll take ur bitch right after I let the chopper fire,
She let my ‘hand get so far between the walls’...I could pull out copper wire
He’s a rat so I’m on the hunt like “Where his house at?”
I’ma snap & let this metal bang on his neck like he’s caught in a mouse trap
U love suckin off vets...so watch as this shit gets gory,
I lick shots while ur ‘tongue is stuck on a pole’ like the kid in Christmas Story
This shotty...big as his body. How could I not rock it?
So when I give him food for thought...the slugs are bigger than a Hot Pocket

[Ronin]

Body chase greats' coattails, you act like I'm prone to jealousy
I'm a precise shooter, don't need 6 for u to Catch the Steel like Brady's legacy.
...good...
you the face of the Street? it's getn stomped to the curb now
Heel 2 ur skull, the bad Guile flash kick u to the pavement in the 3rd Round
...nice, shoulda been 1rst round tho imo js...
if I clap rounds - black Talons. all the talkin you can fkn save it.
FIND urself in a Lake, deagle got u Running from the Birds like Anthony Davis
...good...
.22 in a loose sock, if u got me cornered I'm sparkin
Extendo in the boot, lil toy w/a whole lot of screamin like Chihuahua's barking
...not feeling...
oh you the Busting Melon type? Push Wigs and dead geeks!
BRODIE I'll bust on ur bitch melons and push that wig into ur bedsheets
...lol...
I'll scalp you with a bolo. &even out of range ur in danger
- scope w/a Fine Tune - 6 clicks away I'm Splitting Hairs with the laser.
...ehh, filler...

Vs

I’ve beaten him twice so even if the shotty miscues,
He's got enough on his plate & I don’t think he wants any more Body issues
...good...
U don’t sip sizzurp...u guzzle it until ur hand aches,
& that explains why the back of ur neck looks just like a stack of pancakes
...seen the concept and u coulda did it better imo. No miss but didnt hit...
Bro I’ll take ur bitch right after I let the chopper fire,
She let my ‘hand get so far between the walls’...I could pull out copper wire
...lol...
He’s a rat so I’m on the hunt like “Where his house at?”
I’ma snap & let this metal bang on his neck like he’s caught in a mouse trap
...blah...
U love suckin off vets...so watch as this shit gets gory,
I lick shots while ur ‘tongue is stuck on a pole’ like the kid in Christmas Story
...fuckin gun bars, this was clever tho. Good line...
This shotty...big as his body. How could I not rock it?
So when I give him food for thought...the slugs are bigger than a Hot Pocket
...ok for a gun bar...


Overall: body need to expand his horizons and quit using so many gun bars first and foremost. Shit gets old. To the verses, I thought bleak had a smoother read overall with the higher quality writing even tho body's opener was nice.



V. Bleak

[Zaddy]

Body chase greats' coattails, you act like I'm prone to jealousy
I'm a precise shooter, don't need 6 for u to Catch the Steel like Brady's legacy.
decent, had potential for more cause the concept was good but lacked solid execution
you the face of the Street? it's getn stomped to the curb now
Heel 2 ur skull, the bad Guile flash kick u to the pavement in the 3rd Round
this is OK
if I clap rounds - black Talons. all the talkin you can fkn save it.
FIND urself in a Lake, deagle got u Running from the Birds like Anthony Davis
whats a deagle? Aside from that this line was fire
.22 in a loose sock, if u got me cornered I'm sparkin
Extendo in the boot, lil toy w/a whole lot of screamin like Chihuahua's barking
lmao nah man
oh you the Busting Melon type? Push Wigs and dead geeks!
BRODIE I'll bust on ur bitch melons and push that wig into ur bedsheets
nah
I'll scalp you with a bolo. &even out of range ur in danger
- scope w/a Fine Tune - 6 clicks away I'm Splitting Hairs with the laser.
what?


Vs


I’ve beaten him twice so even if the shotty miscues,
He's got enough on his plate & I don’t think he wants any more Body issues
this is dopeee
U don’t sip sizzurp...u guzzle it until ur hand aches,
& that explains why the back of ur neck looks just like a stack of pancakes
lol nah it’s a miss for me
Bro I’ll take ur bitch right after I let the chopper fire,
She let my ‘hand get so far between the walls’...I could pull out copper wire
decent here
He’s a rat so I’m on the hunt like “Where his house at?”
I’ma snap & let this metal bang on his neck like he’s caught in a mouse trap
nice
U love suckin off vets...so watch as this shit gets gory,
I lick shots while ur ‘tongue is stuck on a pole’ like the kid in Christmas Story
this is cool
This shotty...big as his body. How could I not rock it?
So when I give him food for thought...the slugs are bigger than a Hot Pocket
nah


Cool battle here. Bleak is steadily improving with each verse, definitely showing signs of that 1-2 punch champ we saw last season. The Anthony Davis line was dope but man bleak I gotta tell ya more often than not I have no idea what you’re talking about in your lines lmao. It’s like yeah you’re rapping but what you say just isn’t clicking or registering in my brain. Cool verse bleak and you def have the potential to get a lot better but you gotta omit the weird lines. Body you had a couple misses here but also had some really solid lines. Body issues was lotb for me and mouse trap, Xmas story were both nice too. Good showing here.


Vote BodySnatcher

[Ryno]

Bleak:

Guile
Anthony Davis

BodySnatcher:

Opener
Mousetrap
Xmas story

v/BS...close one. I got him edging it by a bar. Bleaks not bad though

[Blas]

Body chase greats' coattails, you act like I'm prone to jealousy
I'm a precise shooter, don't need 6 for u to Catch the Steel like Brady's legacy.
meh ok
you the face of the Street? it's getn stomped to the curb now
Heel 2 ur skull, the bad Guile flash kick u to the pavement in the 3rd Round
ok
if I clap rounds - black Talons. all the talkin you can fkn save it.
FIND urself in a Lake, deagle got u Running from the Birds like Anthony Davis
oook
.22 in a loose sock, if u got me cornered I'm sparkin
Extendo in the boot, lil toy w/a whole lot of screamin like Chihuahua's barking
i understand what you attempted but it's just not hard hitting imo
oh you the Busting Melon type? Push Wigs and dead geeks!
BRODIE I'll bust on ur bitch melons and push that wig into ur bedsheets
valiant effort
I'll scalp you with a bolo. &even out of range ur in danger
- scope w/a Fine Tune - 6 clicks away I'm Splitting Hairs with the laser.
dont know what was even attempted here tbh

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I’ve beaten him twice so even if the shotty miscues,
He's got enough on his plate & I don’t think he wants any more Body issues
fucking dope
U don’t sip sizzurp...u guzzle it until ur hand aches,
& that explains why the back of ur neck looks just like a stack of pancakes
too simple but lol
Bro I’ll take ur bitch right after I let the chopper fire,
She let my ‘hand get so far between the walls’...I could pull out copper wire
ok this is actually a dope fucking concept
He’s a rat so I’m on the hunt like “Where his house at?”
I’ma snap & let this metal bang on his neck like he’s caught in a mouse trap
cool
U love suckin off vets...so watch as this shit gets gory,
I lick shots while ur ‘tongue is stuck on a pole’ like the kid in Christmas Story
LMFAO
This shotty...big as his body. How could I not rock it?
So when I give him food for thought...the slugs are bigger than a Hot Pocket
meh

v/ Body. His verse was actually quite dope. Honestly had a lot of quoteables and cool conepts. Bleak had some attempts but I personally did not enjoy them.

[Cynic]

you the face of the Street? it's getn stomped to the curb now
Heel 2 ur skull, the bad Guile flash kick u to the pavement in the 3rd Round
if I clap rounds - black Talons. all the talkin you can fkn save it.
FIND urself in a Lake, deagle got u Running from the Birds like Anthony Davis
.22 in a loose sock, if u got me cornered I'm sparkin
Extendo in the boot, lil toy w/a whole lot of screamin like Chihuahua's barking
oh you the Busting Melon type? Push Wigs and dead geeks!
BRODIE I'll bust on ur bitch melons and push that wig into ur bedsheets

I’ve beaten him twice so even if the shotty miscues,
He's got enough on his plate & I don’t think he wants any more Body issues
U don’t sip sizzurp...u guzzle it until ur hand aches,
& that explains why the back of ur neck looks just like a stack of pancakes
He’s a rat so I’m on the hunt like “Where his house at?”
I’ma snap & let this metal bang on his neck like he’s caught in a mouse trap
U love suckin off vets...so watch as this shit gets gory,
I lick shots while ur ‘tongue is stuck on a pole’ like the kid in Christmas Story
This shotty...big as his body. How could I not rock it?
So when I give him food for thought...the slugs are bigger than a Hot Pocket


shit was dope. I like bodysnatchers copper wire bar but he just took the idea from ryno last week and did it dope too. good shit

bodysnatcher

[bleak]

So is 4-1 good battle Body