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Old 02-13-2019, 05:58 PM   #1
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You smear my character and shout
All I wanted you to do was hear me out
Fear and doubt. The latter and the former
Paint myself into a corner
Spiderwebs form near the cracked window
Let's just hope it's not a black widow
Squish it and throw it away
Hopeful today, despite modes of decay
My scar tissue is, hardly the issue
Is this relationship measured in miles?
Spent the afternoon watching Forensic Files
A real thriller. Darling I hope you catch my killer
I'm compiling evidence
on why you are so reticent
All I ask for, is a touch of sentiment
Submissiveness is not good for your health
Would you prefer we make reservations somewhere else?
Stop the nonsense
Stop telling me it's a lot to process
I'm aware you could keep up this fight for days
Hungry? I'll just put some metal in the microwave
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Old 02-16-2019, 08:23 PM   #2
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lol nice read. smooth, slightly comical. big easy enjoyment
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Old 02-17-2019, 12:28 PM   #3
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Ya. This was perfect for the mood im in. Not to long. Not to wordy. Not to fantastic. Just right, really
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