12-06-2018, 11:28 PM | #1 |
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Lucipher Howlz vs Maximus[MAX WINS]
NWL:Season I: Week VII
Verses ares due: FRIDAY(next week) at 11:59 PM EST Voting ends: SUNDAY at 11:59 PM EST Line Limit: Minimum:10 lines, Max: 30 Voting on 2 battles is required. TOPIC: FREE TOPIC THIS WEEK @Lucipher Howlz @Maximus Last edited by Inno; 12-18-2018 at 12:13 PM. |
12-07-2018, 05:50 AM | #2 |
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12-14-2018, 09:52 PM | #3 |
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12-15-2018, 05:51 PM | #4 |
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----- Feel the pains of a young African man The hardships will force you to make travelling plans And move from the map of this land Into another country, with a different anthem and flag For greener pastures and a chance to advance From ragged and trash to the status of haves That's why we make moves like the transit of tramps Airborne, seaborne or topographies with sand Like the desert's irregular channels and paths And become prone to predators, bandits and gangs A passage with a plethora of hazards and traps Where fellow adventurer's food rations are snatched Anything just to get our living standard enhanced We become stowaways in the catamarans Long as we make it past the Atlantic intact To interweave with new cultural tapestry strands Last edited by Maximus; 12-16-2018 at 06:32 AM. |
12-16-2018, 07:47 PM | #5 |
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Shout out for posting late, and shout out for rhyming the whole verse with a similiar scheme. That was cool, and actually stood on topic.
vMaximus PS: And become prone to predators, bandits and gangs That threw everything off. |
12-17-2018, 05:43 AM | #6 |
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