04-16-2019, 01:55 PM | #1 |
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LR WEEK 5: Sharp vs Bodysnatcher - Sharp wins
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04-16-2019, 03:19 PM | #2 |
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lmaooo you got the reunion tour of battles this week
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04-16-2019, 04:18 PM | #3 |
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jesus lol
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How is this a diss?...Ur a pussy so I'ma get the clappin at once & leave so much ‘blood on the walls’...it'll look like a menstrual cycle has happen for months
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04-17-2019, 01:55 PM | #5 | |
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Can get these hands for that ego. Ima dislodge ya mouth with one right No one mistook you for king before, but once they see ya Joffrey they just might Last edited by Sharp; 04-17-2019 at 02:52 PM. Reason: .. |
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04-17-2019, 04:07 PM | #6 |
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Didnt like either.
Body- this was weak conceptually imo. Good wording tho. U def executed the idea well. But im not feeling it too tough Sharp- i liked the concept, but the wordplay itself is only decent. I mean it works perfectly tbh, but something about how u executed the jaw free/joffrey play is irking me. Vote sharp |
04-18-2019, 12:19 AM | #7 |
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Joffrey was a great idea that wasn't done correctly. Could have been a banger
But still better than that period punch v/Sharp |
04-18-2019, 11:40 AM | #8 |
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Body was safe as always. I'm tapped out of menstrual cycle bars tho body, so sorry.
Sharp Joffrey line was cool. Had potential to be dope tho. & it's a bit outside the box even as a GOT ref it wasn't the typical one tho Mvgt- sharp |
04-18-2019, 09:12 PM | #9 |
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Lol I liked this battle.
Body got his wall revenge from a previous matchup with Sharp. I dug the redundancy and downright rebellious attitude with the line. Worded well and it hit Sharp however, is a slick bastard lol. The joffrey shit almost snuck past me bit the tie in in the opener makes you get the shit, damn near a Jedi mind trick lol I gotta go with Sharp with a more well thought out and executed line.
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04-21-2019, 01:53 PM | #10 |
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4-0 Sharp wins
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