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First draft is complete.
Second novel, Squad. Stiving forward towards order.
I also discovered the movie Brainstorm from 1983 and the synchronicities got weird, because our stories are similar in a way. Fascinating. Dear diary posthumously. Down to battle again. Get at me.
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Message from future self: purchase the Mind and Brain by Sir John.
Leave this here.
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The test of making characters that have to try to not be characters.
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Mid life crisis
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congratulations
my problem with characters is making them different entities when speaking. somewhere down the line i write them all the same.
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Brainstorm excellent flick
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what is crazy is that the book is similar to the movie and I never even knew the movie existed until the week I finished it.
whooooo
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Shout out to Jude Colavito and Victor Hernandez though.
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Excited to read
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Both sir. You will see.
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While i was gone did a clear winner of best beard ever become known between veritas and uhoh?
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veritas' beard and hair style are just another futile attempt at currying my favor through idolism. i must say its working though. he has a solid beard. i'd like to see it in context. a beard can seem more impressive than it truly is due to the size of the person flourishing it. he might have a pin head for instance, where as im a 7 7/8 head fat monster. i think he is 5'7 149. hats probably 7 1/4. also he keeps his beard like a woman, where as mine just does what it does.
i commend him for rocking the bald head and beard though on that note i just put a fresh shave on my noggin and im in heaven. bought super legit razors and gel. i got a really expensive set of clippers that basically take it all the way to skin so i've been lazy with it just buzzing it all down with those, and calling it a day. but i took my time and shaved the fuck out of my head, against the grain numerous times just staying lubed up with the gel and good razor. its smooth as fuck. i want to lube it up and put it in a butthole up to my brows
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5’11 175-180. I think my hat size 71/8?
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never heard of brainstorm - ima check it out
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now throw it in the trash
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