Suthaveli 3-1 vs ill nik-A 7-5 - ILL NIKA WINS

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@Suthaveli @ill nik-A

[ill nik-A]

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Welcome!

[Suthaveli]

Sure :)

[Suthaveli]

Ok, soooo first of alll

Dood, u're outdated. Miss me w. ya moody-pout-fake-shit
U were NVR a Gem. Tht'd b truely outrageous... Truely, truely, truely outrageous
Issa nother loss for nika. U mad at da heartbreak? Pity..
His current state of txt is Utah- His emotions cld nourish Salt Lake City
Dn't sign out. Take da thrashin likea man ya hopeless prey
Cuz if i EVEN think Ugandan Knuckles hit ya face until u knw dee way
Ya beige bich, can't rage quit! U're garbo, accept da facts
If he thinks this a game then I expect to see, "Your opponent has left the match"
Killin u s'like preppin ta smoke, it's comedy. Da facts look golden:
^Split da cuban str8 dwn da middle, dump his guts & I'm in da backwoods rollin
Y so srs, nik? I keeps a blade tuck ta insert chiseled grins
This tiny thing'll give u a scar face impression so 'shay ahlow tu muh le-uh fren!!'
Maneuver? Think. Ya move or blink & fool u'll sink & lose ur rank
I'll throw some golden hooks tht'll connect ta ya face. Whatta cuban link :)
Sign out ta get ya cries out. I'm layin hands on ta rattle da kid
But don't pour out all tht mad, dog.. let ya homies handle tht when ya dead


G'luck @ill nik-A

[ill nik-A]

No girl wants to fuck or date an ugly broke nigga cuz there’s no way u’ll pay
so u gonna need to put dust in her drink... & I’m not talking ya usual Grape Kool-aid
fk ths wck fggt! u sound retarded, stop writing, just throw in the towel
let me put it so u understand the favor I’m asking... cn smn pls by sthvlli _ vwl
eyes wide open like an owl... cuz u know that whole mumbo jumbo is shady
Ur text verses look like u ripped a page out a voodoo spell that originated in Haiti
But fuck it I’m crazy. Shoot u in front of ya girl there’s no remorse when I’m buckin
I make ur ex tense... u wanna live so u can put Muff’s tips to use on that horse u was fuckin
eat a lizard or somethin’! Droppin old shit I’ve destroyed, though now u squeeze toys
It’s the same song & dance... only difference is I’m whippin ya ass on netcees instead of bboys
This round’s on me! & since I’m the life of the party I can peddle u some drugs
But I brought the 38 for 60 minutes of fun... & my trigger happy hour special’s on ya mug
u been around since Pac-Man was hot so I don’t understand the familiar bars u prep
perfect for this era where played shit’s acceptable... u like one of those throwback counsels that are hard to get
u’re not a threat. Have a good laugh when I’m shotty aiming
Shoot u in the stomach & have ya guts popping out like I’m body shaming

[Jabari Black]

Suth came out with a very well rounded verse. I didn’t really catch the reference on the opener so can’t really judge the bar. Salt Lake City was a jab landed. I thought Ugandan Knuckles bar was a stretch but I salute the creativity. Nother jab with the rage quit line.

The Cuban cigar bar was fire. Scar face was cool - good wording. Cuban link bar was dope to me. Closer was fine.

Nik’s opener was funny af to me lol. Idk if that’s what you was going for but it was. The buy a vowel was diff but didn’t hit to me. Thr Haiti bar was a miss. Didn’t get the Muff bar - sorry bro I’m new. Liked the personal. 38 special bar was pretty dope - coulda worded it better but I liked it. Next bar was ehh. Body shaming bar was okay.

Vote Suth

Like I said Suth verse had the complete package. What he lacked in huge haymakers, he made up for with some impressive multis and creativity. Some of the punches would have just been aight but the lyricism pushed them over the edge. Nik came way harder last week imo. If you bout to be in the playoffs ion blame you lol save them bars. Good read.

[El Muffin]

Suth the gawd


Dood, u're outdated. Miss me w. ya moody-pout-fake-shit
U were NVR a Gem. Tht'd b truely outrageous... Truely, truely, truely outrageous
(Dawg wut . this sounds familiar but for the life of me I have no idea the reference bring mentioned)
Issa nother loss for nika. U mad at da heartbreak? Pity..
His current state of txt is Utah- His emotions cld nourish Salt Lake City
(I like this lotb after reading both versrs)
Dn't sign out. Take da thrashin likea man ya hopeless prey
Cuz if i EVEN think Ugandan Knuckles hit ya face until u knw dee way
(I don't get the tie in . or is it just ur typing African? xD wp sound but tie in was a no . others might like it but its s no o just trying type in a accent ?)
Ya beige bich, can't rage quit! U're garbo, accept da facts
If he thinks this a game then I expect to see, "Your opponent has left the match"
(Ok . )
Killin u s'like preppin ta smoke, it's comedy. Da facts look golden:
^Split da cuban str8 dwn da middle, dump his guts & I'm in da backwoods rollin
(Fresh spin on very old concept its nice)
Y so srs, nik? I keeps a blade tuck ta insert chiseled grins
This tiny thing'll give u a scar face impression so 'shay ahlow tu muh le-uh fren!!'
(Corrrrnnnnyyyyyyyy ugh cringe I love the scarface impression part we'll I thought I would buti then yeah this is corny to me)
Maneuver? Think. Ya move or blink & fool u'll sink & lose ur rank
I'll throw some golden hooks tht'll connect ta ya face. Whatta cuban link :)
(Eh is this like the obv or some play on Zelda either way I not fw it :/)
Sign out ta get ya cries out. I'm layin hands on ta rattle da kid
But don't pour out all tht mad, dog.. let ya homies handle tht when ya dead
(Pretty good)


girl wants to fuck or date an ugly broke nigga cuz there’s no way u’ll pay
so u gonna need to put dust in her drink... & I’m not talking ya usual Grape Kool-aid
( that's RACISS xD no this is ok tho)
fk ths wck fggt! u sound retarded, stop writing, just throw in the towel
let me put it so u understand the favor I’m asking... cn smn pls by sthvlli _ vwl
(Lol this was unique and I like the dig at his abbreviated style . I noticed this too but this week he's not as bad about it. Not hard but I think this was different)
eyes wide open like an owl... cuz u know that whole mumbo jumbo is shady
Ur text verses look like u ripped a page out a voodoo spell that originated in Haiti
(Lol retarded but humorous)
But fuck it I’m crazy. Shoot u in front of ya girl there’s no remorse when I’m buckin
I make ur ex tense... u wanna live so u can put Muff’s tips to use on that horse u was fuckin
(Its ex tenze bro =( sounds like extends bit of a mistake here man I mean someone just used it the correct way for good effect too n it was tied in using my name )
eat a lizard or somethin’! Droppin old shit I’ve destroyed, though now u squeeze toys
It’s the same song & dance... only difference is I’m whippin ya ass on netcees instead of bboys
( shit )
This round’s on me! & since I’m the life of the party I can peddle u some drugs
But I brought the 38 for 60 minutes of fun... & my trigger happy hour special’s on ya mug
(Pretty cool)
u been around since Pac-Man was hot so I don’t understand the familiar bars u prep
perfect for this era where played shit’s acceptable... u like one of those throwback counsels that are hard to get
(Eh
u’re not a threat. Have a good laugh when I’m shotty aiming
Shoot u in the stomach & have ya guts popping out like I’m body shaming
(Ok)
__________________


This battle was odd. N a bit underwhelming . still an interesting read

suth had 4 lined where he typed in an accent n that was supposed to carry the bar for him? Imo they fizzled . unfortunate because they were great concepts!

Ill Nika fkd up the wp on ex tense . umm had a weird wheel of fortune bar thst I oddly enough liked? But I bet my sentiment will not be shared . its not a quote but I just a interesting off kilter bar

Noe that I'm looking ? Suth had a decent amount of WTF moments so ima have to give it to The Cuban

V/ Nik A


Suth both those accent punches weren't my thing

N ur opener wat is that from? Kicking myself rn it sounds so familiar

[BodySnatcher]

v- Nik.

Suth's only line that really appealed to me was the backwood line. The Scarface was bad. I didn't get the opener, Utah was cool, Link eh...closer ok

Nik's opener was cool, the buy a vowel line was dope and sealed the battle in my eyes.

[Saint]

salt lake, backwoods, mad dog was ok hit

buy a vowel, song & dance -- thought was good, lotb imo.
60 minutes was ok

V -- Nik for less misses. & having lotb as well

[Blue Bayou]

Issa nother loss for nika. U mad at da heartbreak? Pity..
His current state of txt is Utah- His emotions cld nourish Salt Lake City
^liked this
Dn't sign out. Take da thrashin likea man ya hopeless prey
Cuz if i EVEN think Ugandan Knuckles hit ya face until u knw dee way
^I've done U-gone-da before but regardless this w/p was cool & I like the swag on the ounch
Killin u s'like preppin ta smoke, it's comedy. Da facts look golden:
^Split da cuban str8 dwn da middle, dump his guts & I'm in da backwoods rollin
damn, fire flip this was dope
Sign out ta get ya cries out. I'm layin hands on ta rattle da kid
But don't pour out all tht mad, dog.. let ya homies handle tht when ya dead
^cool closer

vs.

No girl wants to fuck or date an ugly broke nigga cuz there’s no way u’ll pay
so u gonna need to put dust in her drink... & I’m not talking ya usual Grape Kool-Aid
^like this concept
fk ths wck fggt! u sound retarded, stop writing, just throw in the towel
let me put it so u understand the favor I’m asking... cn smn pls by sthvlli _ vwl
^lol good punch, setup was nice
eyes wide open like an owl... cuz u know that whole mumbo jumbo is shady
Ur text verses look like u ripped a page out a voodoo spell that originated in Haiti
^lol this was funny and hit to me
eat a lizard or somethin’! Droppin old shit I’ve destroyed, though now u squeeze toys
It’s the same song & dance... only difference is I’m whippin ya ass on netcees instead of bboys
dope personal, this hit
This round’s on me! & since I’m the life of the party I can peddle u some drugs
But I brought the 38 for 60 minutes of fun... & my trigger happy hour special’s on ya mug
pretty dope & fresh concept... liked the way it was setup also


Cool battle fella's this was a good read with some zingers... Suth the backwoods and Salt Lake City lines were fire to me, Nika as were your vowel, song & dance and happy hour lines..
On the whole I've got Nika with one more quotable, tbh his last 2 bars nearly lost it for him imo but Suth had a few concepts I just wasn't digging enough to push him ahead... real close & good read... props to both

Vote - Nika