08-05-2020, 10:55 PM | #1 |
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Shadow Boxing Battle #5
Battler 1
frauds get bodied wida shots .. ii got beams thata lift Yukons up like a Denali at the shop ya boo gonna see me grinnin from da gore .. kutthroatt. ii show ya beyblades thata have uu spinnin on da floor bodybagz in bulk dawg i do's dis .. ii bring the murder, b .. N uu'll dissapear quicker den that news did beat uu to an inch of life den raw dogg ur wife dude call me valve .. ii tear into that pussy N leave her at half-life, too ii came here to murder uu non probz uu do yuh best work in da shadows .. alleyway blowjobs ii bet this jerks the worst && uu never be the #1 battler even if yuh verse is 1st Battler 2 Check 1, 2... Welcome to tonight’s showing, a few jabs and some light gloating I’m here to leave a Ring around your eye that’ll rival this sites voting I deflate chests, a shook opponent’s what I create best Step to me, you’ll get ejected and wind up on your deck like a VHS Whole hood’s fucked your girl, for you it’s actually trauma... When she says her Private Matters in the street, she ain’t talkin’ family drama You soft as hell, and being patient is a costly tell If you’re Biden your time, it’s because you’re hiding sexual assaults as well Took his girl home, made sure her buns were stuffed Then had his mother “spread ‘em old-fashioned style” like a BlunderBuss You’re bugging if you think I’ve never fucked long on your couch Your kids can play Floor Is Lava with the places I’ve cum on in your house
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08-06-2020, 08:07 AM | #2 |
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Yukons kinda
Bey blades Alleyway blow jobs Closer was horrible Vs Biden Blunderbuss Tapedeck Battler 1 had a few good ones but the rest was weak. 2 had probably more highlights and no real misses plus everything was written way better Vote - 2 |
08-06-2020, 10:42 AM | #3 |
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frauds get bodied wida shots ..
ii got beams thata lift Yukons up like a Denali at the shop ok ya boo gonna see me grinnin from da gore .. kutthroatt. ii show ya beyblades thata have uu spinnin on da floor bar's ok, think it's been done before a couple times. not really feeling the overly try-hard street style but i get that you're trying to disguise yourself in some fashion bodybagz in bulk dawg i do's dis .. ii bring the murder, b .. N uu'll dissapear quicker den that news did nah i wasnt really feeling this much beat uu to an inch of life den raw dogg ur wife dude call me valve .. ii tear into that pussy N leave her at half-life, too i like the idea, execution is missing something though ii came here to murder uu non probz uu do yuh best work in da shadows .. alleyway blowjobs this was kinda funny, i dig it ii bet this jerks the worst && uu never be the #1 battler even if yuh verse is 1st nah this was weak the first half looked kinda like a barc verse to me, but the alleyway blowjobs bar was too much lol for barc, i think. idk Welcome to tonight’s showing, a few jabs and some light gloating I’m here to leave a Ring around your eye that’ll rival this sites voting okay, could've extended this idea better I deflate chests, a shook opponent’s what I create best Step to me, you’ll get ejected and wind up on your deck like a VHS i like this Whole hood’s fucked your girl, for you it’s actually trauma... When she says her Private Matters in the street, she ain’t talkin’ family drama i like the general idea but I think this was gonna be a hard concept to pull off no matter how you worded it You soft as hell, and being patient is a costly tell If you’re Biden your time, it’s because you’re hiding sexual assaults as well nah not really digging this, very sloppy and elementary wordplay Took his girl home, made sure her buns were stuffed Then had his mother “spread ‘em old-fashioned style” like a BlunderBuss nah You’re bugging if you think I’ve never fucked long on your couch Your kids can play Floor Is Lava with the places I’ve cum on in your house nah this was a really weak closer battler 2 started out well but declined quickly in my opinion. VHS was bar of the battle, but battler 1 was more overall consistent v/ battler 1 |
08-07-2020, 01:00 PM | #4 |
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The first guy was smooth as fuck, pretty unconventional but his shit hit, that closer was one of the worst I've ever seen tbh but other than that he was nice
Second guy was nice too, much more polished....I just don't think he hit as hard, his opener was dope, after that everything was quite soft tbh. Voting for the first guy.
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08-08-2020, 02:24 PM | #5 |
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frauds get bodied wida shots ..
ii got beams thata lift Yukons up like a Denali at the shop nice ya boo gonna see me grinnin from da gore .. kutthroatt. ii show ya beyblades thata have uu spinnin on da floor solid bodybagz in bulk dawg i do's dis .. ii bring the murder, b .. N uu'll dissapear quicker den that news did light but ok beat uu to an inch of life den raw dogg ur wife dude call me valve .. ii tear into that pussy N leave her at half-life, too again light, but funny ii came here to murder uu non probz uu do yuh best work in da shadows .. alleyway blowjobs more goofy than anything ii bet this jerks the worst && uu never be the #1 battler even if yuh verse is 1st well your verse was first so fuck you Battler 2 Check 1, 2... Welcome to tonight’s showing, a few jabs and some light gloating I’m here to leave a Ring around your eye that’ll rival this sites voting this is kind of like a dated current event tbh. Just feels salty I deflate chests, a shook opponent’s what I create best Step to me, you’ll get ejected and wind up on your deck like a VHS nice Whole hood’s fucked your girl, for you it’s actually trauma... When she says her Private Matters in the street, she ain’t talkin’ family drama while it's grammatically correct both ways, you wouldn't actually hear conversational English say one of those two ways. Aside from making it awkward, it makes the punchline really predictable. Don't know if there was any saving this one for me. You soft as hell, and being patient is a costly tell If you’re Biden your time, it’s because you’re hiding sexual assaults as well light but okay. Guess we haven't really seen 'Biden' flips since 2016 Took his girl home, made sure her buns were stuffed Then had his mother “spread ‘em old-fashioned style” like a BlunderBuss I fuck with the spread em/blunderbuss concept but I'm not crazy about the execution. Kinda like the private matters, old fashioned style just kind of exists to extend the wordplay but you wouldn't really talk about 'old fashioned style'... idk I'm like 10 years behind on slang You’re bugging if you think I’ve never fucked long on your couch Your kids can play Floor Is Lava with the places I’ve cum on in your house goofy, but when the initial goof settles your punch is about jizzing in another man's home. You had to know this wasn't gonna be too impactful I thought battler 1 was more consistent. There's definitely some preference at play for me, I rather a bar be understated than overcooked and I think 2 tried doing a little too much at times. Good showings from both though, writing without an opponent in mind isn't easy V/1 |
08-08-2020, 10:47 PM | #6 |
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Battler 1 had the first two bars that I thought were smooth n hit..
. Closer was cool to. .. Battler two had his first two bars were worth quoting.. rest was iight.. . I just think the first dude hit lol harder V first dude
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08-09-2020, 08:40 AM | #7 |
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ya boo gonna see me grinnin from da gore ..
kutthroatt. ii show ya beyblades thata have uu spinnin on da floor bodybagz in bulk dawg i do's dis .. ii bring the murder, b .. N uu'll dissapear quicker den that news did Vs Check 1, 2... Welcome to tonight’s showing, a few jabs and some light gloating I’m here to leave a Ring around your eye that’ll rival this sites voting I deflate chests, a shook opponent’s what I create best Step to me, you’ll get ejected and wind up on your deck like a VHS Whole hood’s fucked your girl, for you it’s actually trauma... When she says her Private Matters in the street, she ain’t talkin’ family drama Took his girl home, made sure her buns were stuffed Then had his mother “spread ‘em old-fashioned style” like a BlunderBuss Ya I got battler two with better concepts and more quotables. Their misses were much better imo |
08-09-2020, 08:20 PM | #8 |
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Battler 2 got this.
Blunderbuss was flames Good battle guys |
08-10-2020, 12:43 PM | #9 |
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Battler 1 ya boo gonna see me grinnin from da gore .. kutthroatt. ii show ya beyblades thata have uu spinnin on da floor bodybagz in bulk dawg i do's dis .. ii came here to murder uu non probz uu do yuh best work in da shadows .. alleyway blowjobs Battler 2 I deflate chests, a shook opponent’s what I create best Step to me, you’ll get ejected and wind up on your deck like a VHS Whole hood’s fucked your girl, for you it’s actually trauma... You’re bugging if you think I’ve never fucked long on your couch Your kids can play Floor Is Lava with the places I’ve cum on in your house This was pretty close. I was digging the rudge 1 style of battler 1. The beyblades line was fire. like his style more with Short set ups and direct punches. I just wasn’t feelin the concepts as much. I thought battler 2 had some creative lines. The VHS was the line of the battle and ultimately decided it for me. Super close. could go either way. Vote – Battler 2.
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08-10-2020, 01:23 PM | #10 |
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tied at 4-4
Both advance
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