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Old 07-10-2020, 11:08 PM   #1
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Old 07-12-2020, 07:34 PM   #2
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As a sidenote, what is actually written will shut down your vascular system.
...You're mad absurd. Just rap your verse.
Take this like you had it first.

Dope shit.

I liked it all if I'm honest...scheme & imagery was nice, good stuff.
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Old 07-12-2020, 11:06 PM   #3
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Meh, seems basic but not in a good way in any sense
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Old 07-13-2020, 01:48 AM   #4
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Feel like you do your best work when you're inspired and it was clearly not this, but I liked the way it flowed you could just feel the ehhh whatever vibe radiating off of it
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Old 07-23-2020, 02:50 AM   #5
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Old 07-27-2020, 09:50 PM   #6
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"I rhyme whole sentences w/ MY dope penmanship."

I feel like youre mocking me...or Zygote...probably.

Anyway, not up to your usual standard. it completely fell apart at the end.

i saw you drop a top tier verse or two in GWL. This one was a throw away

But it's all good. I've written my fair share of throwaways, too.
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Old 07-29-2020, 05:46 AM   #7
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Gotta agree with a few of the feed you've gotten, You've done light years better than this.
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