Welcome to the offseason. - Page 9

PancakeBrah · 08-22-2014, 12:10 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Certain

Hooks ruin so many underground rap tracks.

Yeah it's a shit song from the first hook on.

PancakeBrah · 08-22-2014, 06:45 PM

@Certain

Listened to Grimes - Oblivion because of the Pitchfork best songs of the decade so far list.

I liked it. Kind of.

More importantly; my life goal is now to impregnate her.

Thoughts?

Certain · 08-22-2014, 06:48 PM

She annoys the hell out of me. She's so hipster that even hipsters are like, "Whoa, she's so hipster." She's so hipster that if she joined this board her first Open Mic post would be full of rhymes and titled "I'M SO HIPSTER LIKE PANCAKE I'M SO HIPSTER."

PancakeBrah · 08-22-2014, 06:49 PM

That read like the opening line of a David Sterns Razor Burns open mic.

Your reasoning has not swayed me. Do want uterus.

What about the song itself?

Certain · 08-22-2014, 07:27 PM

I like that song more than most of her stuff. But her music is pretty oppressively hipster, too.

Taylor Swift's new song is my jam.

Witty · 08-22-2014, 09:08 PM

Great now I have to kill Certain.

timeless · 08-23-2014, 04:29 PM

signups start during the end of the short verse tourney im assuming?

King Ra. · 08-23-2014, 05:33 PM

@timeless just about.

YDK · 08-24-2014, 12:13 PM

My fuckin computer screen is cracked smfh back to the phone again. Hopefully with the ten line tourney it wont detract from my verses too much. Gonna try an get it fixed before next season

Adonis · 08-25-2014, 12:32 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by YDK

My fuckin computer screen is cracked smfh back to the phone again. Hopefully with the ten line tourney it wont detract from my verses too much. Gonna try an get it fixed before next season

You can't go old school and actually write it?

I ask because I don't like to write on papper ever.

But I can, as soon as I start flowing it comes out...No homo.

It actually works better because I'm forced to sit there and think of the line before I write it because I aint trying to erase and shit.

When I write on the comp I literally end up with 2-3 pages of shit I removed from each posted verse.

YDK · 08-25-2014, 01:05 AM

I have ocd really bad actually and can't stand using lead like pencils or even click pencils so I use pen and scratch shit out everytime I have a spelling error or choose to use a different word so I can't see the actual line lengths till I get to the final copy an rewrite everything 2 to 3 times without an grammatical errors and then if somethings off I have to start all over again. On phones an computers I can just backspace and adjust the format and wording as I go. Now while using a phone the screens smaller so I still can't judge the lines as accurately as I'd like to so it can still come out fucked up or flowing just a bit off which is a big deal to me because of the fuckin ocd (which is usually why my rhymeschemes are usually as clean and consistent as possible with my wording issues)
so my computer screen being cracked is a huge deal for me lol possibly bigger than the average writer

Split · 08-25-2014, 07:07 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by YDK

without an grammatical errors

King Ra. · 08-25-2014, 08:22 AM

Lmao. Fucking Split.

YDK · 08-25-2014, 08:54 AM

lmao fuckin auto correct

Dagel · 08-26-2014, 06:01 PM

Ydk needs a rimjob.

Split · 08-26-2014, 06:45 PM

Antihero?

Dagel · 08-26-2014, 07:09 PM

Indeed.

Pent uP · 08-26-2014, 10:19 PM

@mods

can I/barter on the dates/times for next season?

i really want to participate but I have 2 jobs now and have been working 12 hour days. I would love to participate but I need a full weekend day open to do so so I have to have my topic by then.

Or i can sign in as an alias and hope you dont merge my record for speed writing. whatever.

Tag me please I dont sign in often

Certain · 08-26-2014, 10:22 PM

One suggestion I had for @King Ra. was to move the due date to a normal weekday rather than Fridays. That could give you a weekend day to write.

Dagel · 08-26-2014, 10:43 PM

Collab or battle anybody?

08-22-2014, 06:45 PM	#162
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 13,052 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899406	@Certain Listened to Grimes - Oblivion because of the Pitchfork best songs of the decade so far list. I liked it. Kind of. More importantly; my life goal is now to impregnate her. Thoughts? __________________ If I ventured in the slipstream Between the viaducts of your dreams Where immobil steel rims crack And the ditch in the back road stop Could you find me?

08-22-2014, 06:48 PM	#163
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,072 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899403	She annoys the hell out of me. She's so hipster that even hipsters are like, "Whoa, she's so hipster." She's so hipster that if she joined this board her first Open Mic post would be full of rhymes and titled "I'M SO HIPSTER LIKE PANCAKE I'M SO HIPSTER." __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

08-22-2014, 06:49 PM	#164
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 13,052 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899406	That read like the opening line of a David Sterns Razor Burns open mic. Your reasoning has not swayed me. Do want uterus. What about the song itself? __________________ If I ventured in the slipstream Between the viaducts of your dreams Where immobil steel rims crack And the ditch in the back road stop Could you find me?

08-22-2014, 09:08 PM	#166
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,810 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 82986458	Great now I have to kill Certain. __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime.

08-23-2014, 05:33 PM	#168
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932960	@timeless just about. __________________ Vetwork, bitches.

08-23-2014, 04:29 PM	#167
timeless past tense Join Date: Nov 2013 Location: NJ Posts: 1,627 Battle Record: 22-39 Rep Power: 4341326	signups start during the end of the short verse tourney im assuming?

08-24-2014, 12:13 PM	#169
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,564 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181109	My fuckin computer screen is cracked smfh back to the phone again. Hopefully with the ten line tourney it wont detract from my verses too much. Gonna try an get it fixed before next season __________________

08-25-2014, 01:05 AM	#171
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,564 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181109	I have ocd really bad actually and can't stand using lead like pencils or even click pencils so I use pen and scratch shit out everytime I have a spelling error or choose to use a different word so I can't see the actual line lengths till I get to the final copy an rewrite everything 2 to 3 times without an grammatical errors and then if somethings off I have to start all over again. On phones an computers I can just backspace and adjust the format and wording as I go. Now while using a phone the screens smaller so I still can't judge the lines as accurately as I'd like to so it can still come out fucked up or flowing just a bit off which is a big deal to me because of the fuckin ocd (which is usually why my rhymeschemes are usually as clean and consistent as possible with my wording issues) so my computer screen being cracked is a huge deal for me lol possibly bigger than the average writer __________________

08-25-2014, 08:22 AM	#173
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932960	Lmao. Fucking Split. __________________ Vetwork, bitches.

08-25-2014, 08:54 AM	#174
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,564 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181109	lmao fuckin auto correct __________________

08-26-2014, 06:01 PM	#175
Dagel BITER. Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: BITER. Posts: 75 Battle Record: 0-1 Rep Power: 0	Ydk needs a rimjob. __________________ BITER.

08-26-2014, 06:45 PM	#176
Split . Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 8,904 Battle Record: 27-22 Rep Power: 85899395	Antihero? __________________ http://split8.yolasite.com

08-26-2014, 07:09 PM	#177
Dagel BITER. Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: BITER. Posts: 75 Battle Record: 0-1 Rep Power: 0	Indeed. __________________ BITER.

08-26-2014, 10:19 PM	#178
Pent uP Robin Williams of Fallen Victims Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 1,502 Battle Record: 25-11 Accomplishments - NC Hall of Fame Champed - Netcees Writers League (2x) - NWL Season 1 - Write Night I - Art of Writing League (2x) - Write Week IV Rep Power: 6862273	@mods can I/barter on the dates/times for next season? i really want to participate but I have 2 jobs now and have been working 12 hour days. I would love to participate but I need a full weekend day open to do so so I have to have my topic by then. Or i can sign in as an alias and hope you dont merge my record for speed writing. whatever. Tag me please I dont sign in often

08-26-2014, 10:22 PM	#179
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,072 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899403	One suggestion I had for @King Ra. was to move the due date to a normal weekday rather than Fridays. That could give you a weekend day to write.

08-26-2014, 10:43 PM	#180
Dagel BITER. Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: BITER. Posts: 75 Battle Record: 0-1 Rep Power: 0	Collab or battle anybody? __________________ BITER.