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Old 03-22-2013, 04:08 PM   #121
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So I went back just now and looked at all the votes on my previous battles and they all either said you're flow is fucked or it's too cliche....If anyone calls my flow fucked up this week it's just because you can't read. Fuck you. If anyone calls my piece cliche this week then you can suck my dick. Oh and fuck you.....I'm sorry I needed a release right now. Carry on gentleman.
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I worked a warthog line into my verse this week.
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Old 03-22-2013, 06:33 PM   #123
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Old 03-22-2013, 06:35 PM   #124
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Kuja mate im in OZ so i dont know the time zone..
I'll prolly post in the next 24hrs..

Anyone does that fit in before the dead line..
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Old 03-22-2013, 06:42 PM   #125
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Deadline is saturday this week. So you should be good
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Old 03-22-2013, 06:45 PM   #126
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after reading both verses from zen..

Random query is your screen name
gotlife? on RM by anychance..

Now i could be wrong..
GL does the same style.. but he cuts lines into 4,6 or 8 syllables instead of running through the whole thing..

And if so and this is you.. Then i prefer this way better because you can read it faster as if i was rapping it in double time or twist..
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Old 03-22-2013, 06:47 PM   #127
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ok..

Lol the prob is its 9:45am Sat 23 - March.. Right now
going by my clock in 12 hrs or so i miss it and need extension which is fine but just so i know whats cracken, i've been out of the circuit for a bit.. :)

so ahh how many hours
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Old 03-22-2013, 07:47 PM   #128
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im just curious, on this site what happens if someone drops a verse but they get a no show..

I have all faith my man kuja will show but in the future, does it get paired up with another no show verse dropped or slotted in a 3 way in a match that hasnt been voted on yet..
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I dont think zen is gotlife. Zen is too nice to be gotlife
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Old 03-22-2013, 08:11 PM   #130
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Kuja mate im in OZ so i dont know the time zone..
I'll prolly post in the next 24hrs..

Anyone does that fit in before the dead line..

Got plenty of time bud, i havent even started yet lol will write tomoz tho
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Old 03-22-2013, 08:17 PM   #131
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im just curious, on this site what happens if someone drops a verse but they get a no show..

I have all faith my man kuja will show but in the future, does it get paired up with another no show verse dropped or slotted in a 3 way in a match that hasnt been voted on yet..
they get featured on the the mag..recombinations would be dope.
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Old 03-22-2013, 08:57 PM   #132
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Zen is nice? Awwwww I think I just shed a man tear. And no I am not that fella. Never heard of him tbh.
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nice in comparison to GotLife. rofl... that dude can get under a guys skin like no other... i liked that though, you can count on him to just tell you how he sees it in the votes
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@Ink: Was supposed to write some today. Got someone on visit that left around 3 hours ago. Been a mess all day cuz I haven't slept for 30+ hours. Sometimes I can write shit in an hour, other times my brain tells me to go fuck myself. I got some ideas in my head that I hope to be able to translate to rhymes. I'll post something up tomorrow. Busy weekend for me, but I hope it wont come off as rushed/whatever. If I get in my zone it might be decent afterall. But yeah, I'm showing.
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Old 03-22-2013, 09:40 PM   #137
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Got plenty of time bud, i havent even started yet lol will write tomoz tho
sweet..
I've been looking forward to this re-match since last year..
i'm waiting to see this gem you have stored away..
since you've left it til last min i shall call it "the one inch punch"

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they get featured on the the mag..recombinations would be dope.
ATM a writer gets no comments, feedback, critisim or any kind of words of wisdom at all from other writers you admire.. It's cool that it gets acknowledged for existing but a lil gay if its just thrown in the closed thread sub-folder for eternity.. BLANK :(
I put in a formal request that they get re-matched or slotted in..
I'm gonna drop when im done every week regardless, i just dont want them killed before they breathe yah kna mean..

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Zen is nice? Awwwww I think I just shed a man tear. And no I am not that fella. Never heard of him tbh.
Dont shed POOH MANy tears..

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u got the juice now @Cereal_Killa

your piece is being featured in the magazine, whenever Keith sends me the No Show features
also feel free to drop in the Open Mic, some good writers who could feed you that simply dont compete
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