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Old 01-03-2015, 10:35 PM   #1281
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Old 01-04-2015, 04:37 AM   #1282
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And Yeah ur mom. Yup.. I pipped her
I said I was a minor but she wasnt believing it
because the size of dick was such a contradiction
she like$ why dont I get a jb and make a honest living
and maybe move in and im like bich r u kidding
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Old 01-04-2015, 09:50 AM   #1283
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Old 01-05-2015, 09:05 PM   #1284
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Want a quote from the grim? You ghost?
Show me your shit. Penis ant
Wingless dance
C'mon, Win a chance to float with the pen..
The ink is acid, it's gonna try to soak in your skin
But, this- this is thin ice.. Care to go for a swim?
Single file zombies. Already croked on dopamine singe
No heart, Dorothy.. There was never a pulse in that tin
Walk around in circles, underneath the sky's pulp w/a grin
I'm laughing, really, such a pure joke from a Djinn
Fisting poltergeist cherry, chipping these shoulders of flint
Careful. Please. Got that arrow<3three sown to limb
You're calling on who? Ain't no fucking phone from within
Spit memory. This that photo of phlegm
Lets get this car full,
Marshall's a fifth deep- wants to go for a spin
Everyone's busy, trying not to let all the moments just end
Want to take it all in. The more you focus, they blend
I swear to god there's nothing left here, all of Portland is dead
The possiblities. Look what grows from my Forest of breath
All that is good and evil, lets store it in flesh
Wake up and smell the.. Oh, a morgue- so morbid and fresh
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Old 01-06-2015, 10:46 AM   #1285
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My psychology is overtop like a god
Im like yoda inside the black ops
I slit the neck off ten cops then
Become a christian just to picket his death
Shove it down the throat of their family and friends
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Old 01-06-2015, 10:18 PM   #1286
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My attributes are completely Unique like Estonia
Lungs are a nuclear reactor sneezing Spirits of Ammonia,
Surviving Subzero temperatures while you Weak with Pneumonia,
Understand that this is like mortal combat and you're just a Trick like Sonia,
Conforting those unable to sleep my Speech can Relief an Insomnia,
On a wrong turn the Evilistic verses can Inflict Paranoia,
become a nightmare so horrific it'll haunt the Dreams of a Momia,
Evolved beyond logic after many years Living with Phobia
No more wars I'll aid your vision and be a Shield like the Cornea,
As sweet as the fragrance released by the Trees of Magnolia.
I'm not Here to Follow deceiving Demon Born from Sin,
Tears of Sorrow cover my face as the inner Angel Mourns Within,
Purposely losing battles to show I don't give a Fuck About Win,
Look before you Jump and Stomp to Begin,
My lines are memorable like Jordan's first Dunk in the Rim,
Amazing like Maleficent's Opening Scene healing that Broken Limb,
Don't think its over after just a surprise Punch in the Chin,
Ever since youtube you couldn't compare ya style Hopeless and Dim,
Sublime Metaphoricals from the Mind of the Finest Oracle,
It might sound Right Comical but everything I Write is Historical,
Saying my verses are whack is considered a Crime that is Horrible,
There is nothing to see in me like a shadow Concealed in the Dark,
The enemy is nonexistent yet my only goal is to Rip him Apart,
My plan is to Ressurect all the dead rappers that Fell,
Engage the Devil in a battle and then Take Over Hell
Even the most feared sorcerers are scared of Facing this Spell,
Second guessing, their only mistake was Training me Well,
Don't mind Hannibal I'm the worse one Causing your Fear,
My concentration is solid like A tribe of cannibals Stalking a Deer,
A Monstrous Man executing any Disastrous Command that the Powerfull Master Demands,
I was blessed with a brain that only God Understands,
My verse will blanket the fallen ones like a Blizzard of Caramel,
Mystical and All Can Tell you just a smurf to the Wizzard Gargamel,
I'm as real as the tataduende Spooking Villagers,
This aint no nintendo I'm talking about real life Brutal Finishers,
Aquire knowledge just to find out that the Truth is Insanity,
Thats why i ignore frivolous amateurs and their Stupid Profanity,
I'm Actually Part of a Faculty who can Casually Turn you Into Casualty,
Unfathomable powers Eminate From My Chakras,
Magically enough to Pump life into a Multialted Carcass,
I live in the clouds barricaded by a fence the size of China Wall,
Recite a prayer everytime a Rival Fall to Inscribe the Awe,
So feel no way because you were born with the Right to Brawl...
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Serpentine dagger at hand as I confront the heavenly father
His omniscient crackling devilish laughter hellishly drags you
A mere boy when the Reverend grabbed you, bending you backwards
Now your soul is second guessing all chapels, the rebellious chapter.
Turn your head the other way, see the relevant matter
Your ability to see more is thanks to the perspective master
Realize that we're but composites of elements that bonded
Quantum rearrangements, fragments of resonant atoms.
Everything matters, even the scraps from Cerberus platter.
Eat away at the contaminants that have entered your brain
The center of change, seratonin's base, a chemical trait
That once unleased has you feeling better for days
If your fully healed, discredit my chatter
But, tell me why does a stream of red urine still exit your bladder?
How afar along will you let the pestilence travel,
Into your bowels, or until you emanate armor?
Go ahead and disintegrate further, but let me salvage your carcass
So I can prove to you I can discover your sadness
Agony camouflaged underneath your shadow side garments.
Allow me to harvest it, and use it to transform my passions
After all, such socipathic patterns are the ammo of madness
The art of deductive reasoning is an instructive deed to seek
Yet, Self delight constructs my idiocy, corrupting abysmally.
Even the most proficient can't touch my illiterate speech
Fearless, I'm still waiting for hell fire to incinerate me

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Old 01-09-2015, 12:31 AM   #1288
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More in tune with myself than in the past life
every wrong decision dissipates into a crash site
Deliverance from evil I'm just preaching for the people
Turning back the black with a flash light, I'm that nice.
Smokin on some shit that could make Stevie wonder
Open up ya blind eye and view things that creep under
What I'm holding.. frightenin'
boi imma mean gunner
this shit'll make you hear lightnin' and see thunder.
Evil seeps into me I'm so mean bro
Cross the line an get hit with 4 fives like you made a freethrow
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My thought process is disconcerting
I wish I could tell you,
but I have a problem with conversing.
It's what happens
When monsters starts converging
with a wanderer with no purpose.
In his eyes,
Life is wondrous yet imperfect
The joys of summer aren't certain
To be in comfort you must earn it.
Puddles of this verbiage
Represent my struggles against garbage
Coming from my organs;
Vomiting up porridge, my stomach is burning
Sometimes another person
Is the Strongest referral.
A futureless prodigy bombing rehearsals
On the premise that I saw the inferno.
Otherworldly experiences,
Has me longing for my journal
So I can scribe prophecy that's eternal,
Poetic adages touching under your sternum
Until your heart's flutters are normal.
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Old 01-09-2015, 10:18 AM   #1290
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The acknowledgement of knowledge JUST
outside the eye of our consciousness leaves me bothered.
Possibilities seem so bottomless. Nothing I'll ever comprehend.
When anything's achievable then everything that's reachable
seems feeble and it keeps me dull. The reason I can't sleep at all.
Kindness. Honor. Love. Respect.
Blind to all that once was stressed.
Wife. A dog. A son. A nest.
Why'd it all become a mess?
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Old 01-09-2015, 10:33 AM   #1291
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I wanna dance with the moon
i wanna fly up to sky ayoo wheres my shrooms
Hidding all my sins ayoo wheres my broom
I go out barely groomed kids pointing at chu
teenage girls laugh while they all in a,group
And all adults they look and shook their heads
at this point and time I acutally wish I was dead
But I try not to show it got that non chalant confidence
till I walk inside a store and workers offer pepermint damn.
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Old 01-09-2015, 07:19 PM   #1292
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I predict the future, and commit to Kama Sutra
a hip with 2 shooters, some equipment from Hooters
I get rid of the commuters, diggers & Roto rooters
seriously I'm a dick to the losers riding an electric scooter
riding along the Bermuda, with a group of cougars...
the Life of Pi...nah that's literally the life of me
a sight to see, I been living like this since '93
comin' out hard, MJG...I don't think they get it yet
the game winner with no minutes left, pathetic attempt
I was fully grown when you were still in faulty equipment
baby jokers screaming out 'nah I'm bilingual! theres a difference'
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Old 01-09-2015, 09:28 PM   #1293
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These Amphibians with Grudges have yet to face the Warlord Alpha Vet
Who can make a Million Words and turn it into single Verse with the Alphabet,
A Battle against me is like Gamble with Life, Reenachment of a Cobra Strangling Mice,
You really Fail at Showing Advancements, Get ready for Ya Soul Enhancement,
You suck so much you should Come with Attachments,
Watch Your Dreams Vanish while I'm here to flow with Intrepid Brothers,
You're too busy Being Childish Disrespecting Mothers,
Unfathomable Record, I'm not here to Cause Corruption,
Instead I'm using Intangible Weapons of Mass Disstruction,
My verse can breed a hater if not taken as Compliments, Every free posted Earthquaking Continents,
This is cut throat kitchedn and your platter was tasteless till I Laced with Condiments,
Ready to Rain as the Drizzle Increases, Deadly in the game Spitting Diseases,
Ready to Maime Ripping Thesis Leave it Split In 2 Pieces for being Insignifican Feces,
Then make you into a pizza topped with Fifthy Different Cheeses,
You just a foot soldier I'm the Chief Bro, Burn you with my Chi Flow,
Trained by Militants Eminate Brilliance that Eliminate the Ignorance,
while the rest Sing and Dance I Emerge from the Darkest Wilderness,
Searching for enemies to Assault with Viciousness,
Pitifully you are no match for my 100% in All Seriousness,
You'll fail miserably so get back you laughing Stock of Hideousness
Caz you'll be Trapped in Deliriousness after the Wrath's Deliverance,
Wave a Torch of Lightening and Watch these lonely Fuckers Dieing,
with no one on the scene only Vultures Flying,
You must be Stupid caz you Don't Compare,
I'm Stooping Near Shooting you with Solar Flares,
A Disgusted Violent Giant Bombrushing Trampling Tyrants,
Making their blood flow on the streets like Busted Fire Hydrants,
This duel is an honor i'm not here for the Prize and the Win,
But instead to remind that Everything you Write is a Sin in the Eyes of the Jinn,
I unleash the dormant forces of Souls Brutalized Within,
After a Vicodin Punches Find your Chin to Reverse every Line you Fling which belongs in a Recycle Bin,
Never labeled a Mad Psychopath Thank God the Light is Back,
Transcended beyond your logic so to me Everything you Write is Whack,
Keep talking like a trick and you Might get Smack,
Take you down with the Slightest Knock, Eat you like the Lightest Snack,
Keep calm while I Hype it Back, I don't know why I Like to Rap,
But on other hand thanks for givin me the Insight I Lack,
Whats next will you tell me that the Night is Black?
My heart is a vault the Inside is Lock, My Mind Rise to the Top,
You Couldn't cheat your way out of my bars if you Bribed a Cop,
A Viking Grown in Torments, While you so lame you liking your Own Comments,
You against me is No Contest, You be left UnConscious,
A soul Tormented by Horrible Dreams Flow so pure they Followed by Streams,
Perverse and Mean Bomb your Regime wih No Self Esteem,
So just Keep it Real and don't be an Emcee with a Grudge,
My Windshield is blurry Pardon me while I Clean the Smudge,
Have you sound like children victimize by Regina George,
Your rhymes are Sweet like Fudge Dirtying the Scene like Sludge,
Battle Much? Take your time to write your lies I won't Even Budge,
Because to me you're just Lame and Sloppy, Keep acting Way too Cocky,
Thats the meain reason I throw punches a your Face like Rocky,
Reppin for Real, My raps are like gyrating blades Shredding Sleel,
You pussies suck so much you get no Record Deal,
Ya shit's whack go back to the Laboratory or get smoked to Ashes in Purgatory,
Caz I'l defeat you so bad you won't get chance to recover ya Flaccid Former Glory,
I Mangle Misfits check the Battle Statistics,
You Not worth the effort I won't even Unravel the Sick Scripts,
Your case Delirious Insanity Oblivious to Reality,
Your flows are Messy, Old like Pepsi, Game hasn't even started and I got more Goals than Messi,
I'm an Evil Roaring Lion Exploring Deep Shores in Zion, Punches are lethal Deforming Iron,
Its not an illusion its all the Same Trick, I'm Dodging your shots like the Matrix...
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Hey, self awareness! I didn't notice you there.
Ironically I've already seen my soul in the bare.
Holes in the air of our awkward conversation.
You offer consolations like I'd off myself from break ups.
I've already forgotten. Sell the paint brush. I'm painting with buckets.
That doesn't mean a God damn thing, or maybe it doesn't.
Wasn't. Crazy. A puppet. Playing a trumpet for these ladies. In public.
Made me make me look like a dumb shit. Drag my name through the mud.
Tracked it through the house. Been awake for a month.
Misery keeps me company late into dusk. Pour away at the pub.
I'm wasted on being wasted. Just a grave that ain't dug.
A wake that ain't come. Asleep at the wheel.
You hear the beeps and then squeals.
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Hey, self awareness! I didn't notice you there.
Ironically I've already seen my soul in the bare.
Holes in the air of our awkward conversation.
You offer consolations like I'd off myself from break ups.
I've already forgotten. Sell the paint brush. I'm painting with buckets.
That doesn't mean a God damn thing, or maybe it doesn't.
Wasn't. Crazy. A puppet. Playing a trumpet for these ladies. In public.
Made me make me look like a dumb shit. Drag my name through the mud.
Tracked it through the house. Been awake for a month.
Misery keeps me company late into dusk. Pour away at the pub.
I'm wasted on being wasted. Just a grave that ain't dug.
A wake that ain't come. Asleep at the wheel.
You hear the beeps and then squeals.
Come at me. Slush, between the clay and the muck. Sludge
Slate, and some gunk. Mush, braze, and residuum.
Loves late, a continuum. A degree adjusted in tandem
It's nothing, a breeze, a combustible band
of gunpowder. Diseased touch, of debris crushed in your hand
Sunflowers. Every snake in the mud. Every paint, in the brush.
Mistakes like blades full of mud. I've erased and begun another canvass
Just, like, well it's like, ... the moment the ink drips on the paper
And seeps on the counter, and leaps bounds between the medians out.

yes???

It's the tiny smidgen of grease.
I just wish a group of scientists would study my hand movements in cursive
to predict and map rubrics in spurts.
so I can exist, and feel my mannerisms are human.
Melancholism effusive. It's like alcoholism. but, prudent.
Lonely, lewd and abusive, souls consumed
by a moving phonograph of obtrusive
Open almanac. It's a translucent, overcast of aloofness.
I don't know.
It's hard to think, but it's not. It's like we're at odds with the world.
Oxalis.
Atomically, billions of atoms were encrusted in that blot of ink
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Marking my calendar with markers
Calculating the average days starving
The afflictions in my appetures are harmless
Yet, they've cause all the earth to suffer.
Feeling guilty makes my vascular turn sluggish
Sciatica and numbness means on the average I'm busted.
Can't even stand up to greet the scavengers & gluttons
Individuals who display me on the abattoir till' lustrous.
Also, it's not unbeknown for an avatar to punish
Himself- because he has no other challenger to summon.
Well how do you know the pathogen is divine justice?
Because if the disease is Glandular it signifies justness
Especially with a concussion where you visualize pumice;
A lucky stone you can carry as an immunized substance
To remedy the virion which targets civilized corruption.
The cure was inhaling lavender and rose hips
until your able to soliloquize every stimuli offered
A catharsis of omens where you simplify your function
As you outwardly synthesize discussion.
I don't mean to individualize destruction
After all, we all somehow symbolize abduction
Thing is, it lies hidden by obstructions
We've become specialized sunk ships
Weaponized by social sanctions;
Customs where we epitomize reduction
Emotion hazards, where we criticize the puppet
But hate when others simplify our blog hits.
I'm not a narcist bastard- you got that motion backwards
What I am is another soul with bone like cancer
Desperately looking for the potent answer.
Yet, the truth stares at me each moment after
I ask to be shown the lantern illuminating the holy patterns.
Only anarchy has bestowed me the golden nuggets
Erupting the latent factors in my frozen papules
Venting to the surface the only thing that mattered.
Self aware, there's no more need to listen to rubbish
Or carry unnecessary equipment and luggage.
Apotheosis of self means the spirit is polished
Wellbeing makes the appearance turn olive
I welcome the criticism of lyrical comment
But, be careful with what your critical of, 'cause
I'm armed with an American musket.

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Don't fuck with genius, these fingertips linger with
The meanest grins. Baby just told me I need to see a therapist
When I read her dull boy gliffs. I'm trying to salt these poisoned cliffs
Cuz that's in my blood and I believe in that
Just a shelf elf, bleeding black dust, Misewell clean my tortures
With a steady pulse of stagnant..
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I'm too crazed, I can't hold conversations or taste
everything is diseased, the sickness can't be contained
highly contagious even though it seems wildly basic
so wherever you paste it, ingest, defecate and waste it
You'll do what dog's do, on my feet like dog poo
that's when I curb you til' there's no teeth to talk through
you do what you got to, I do whatever I want to
now isn't that awful damaging to the ego you thought through
writers are apostles & I sacrifice kids in latex suffocation...
literally leaving no prints, I swear you could dust the casings
usually bust in faces in the hallway like a drinking fountain
violating whoever you dream of, hope for.. think of pounding
I don't even think about it...swag bro...I'm a literal asshole
I spit Jim Carrey game at ho's...whoa...
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My thought process is disconcerting
I wish I could tell you,
but I have a problem with conversing.
It's what happens
When monsters starts converging
with a wanderer with no purpose.
In his eyes,
Life is wondrous yet imperfect
The joys of summer aren't certain
To be in comfort you must earn it.
Puddles of this verbiage
Represent my struggles against garbage
Coming from my organs;
Vomiting up porridge, my stomach is burning
Sometimes another person
Is the Strongest referral.
A futureless prodigy bombing rehearsals
On the premise that I saw the inferno.
Otherworldly experiences,
Has me longing for my journal
So I can scribe prophecy that's eternal,
Poetic adages touching under your sternum
Until your heart's flutters are normal.
This was dope as fuck.
But since this is a cypher,
I'll say this flow is UNGH.

But forreal I dig it, brah.
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