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Old 03-27-2014, 12:01 PM   #821
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Curses...Cursive verses reversed in versions of devil talk
popping medal off a mental rock. Nervous urgency worsens
Purposely perfect pebbles drop. the avalanche begun
Management becomes a hassle. its an accurate slump
Packed with a punch. and a peanut butter jelly
you soft I guess you can be real underbelly
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Old 03-27-2014, 05:53 PM   #822
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Stacking up accolades and critical acclaim
I'm cracking up half the day, no physical strain
I've formed safe thinking with this large criminal brain
It's only natural that i move to the gun bars
Packing a mosberg let's me blast but don't run far

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Old 03-27-2014, 08:02 PM   #823
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I handle my business, go ham on the witless
And plan the ballistics to damage the critics
In my view their bitches ,just too analytic
They try to discredit ,all my writings depictions
Prying at each sentence, distorting intentions
It's time for my vengeance, you swine will be ended
My rhymes are defending, each line is acidic
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Old 03-27-2014, 10:18 PM   #824
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I harbor a tortured soul, I'm stripped of hope and so
Hopelessly addicted to opiates, so be it, indulge, go
Service the impluse, never mind exercising control
Sobriety effects you're emotion so let the oxy patrol
You're body and set the dial back to maximum dull
Relax and let go of society entirely, euphoria's home
Melt inside of the forged stone barracading ya dome
Gorge on the pills, don't support the force of the guilt
The peoples rehab retorts are a horse shit of a deal
You're happyness won't be restored, you'll actually feel
Like you're a walking tragedy still and grow mentally ill
Eventually you'll be vengefully fueled and end the cruel
meaningless exsistance and pass away entering another
demention and oxy will be waiting for you to regain friendship
So you see now that its senseless to break this kinship
It's oxy and Clyde and we're going to ride off into the sunset...



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Old 03-28-2014, 01:18 AM   #825
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she change up them eyelids,
she laced up in Osiris-
red splash on that tan
like slave blood on papyrus.
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Old 03-28-2014, 03:39 AM   #826
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I helm Hell's armada,
9 realms quelled in my honor-
From dwarves to elves high
All dwell, held til nigh slaughter...
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Old 03-28-2014, 05:00 AM   #827
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Is this a fart or a shit
I'll embark on it
Let it slip in the dark
...ah, it was shit
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Old 03-28-2014, 10:21 AM   #828
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I rub it in my facial area
nigger raping crackas - no racial barrier
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Old 03-30-2014, 03:49 PM   #829
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Hysteria the best kind of riot
I'm daring ya to go 'head and try it
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Old 03-31-2014, 01:59 AM   #830
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half awake sleepin, heart attack beatin
i'll pass away dreamin, cardiac screamin
can't escape cleavage, masturbate. semen
activate demons, blast away, cya!
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Old 03-31-2014, 02:13 AM   #831
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Exacerbated fiendish activities through the weekend
A pastor faded, leading his ministry through the deep end
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Old 03-31-2014, 02:16 AM   #832
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The poop I'm squeezing in my hand is cute and dreamy
It's like a huge panani. I'm wearing some dude's bikini
doing jumping jacks in the nude, and peeing
I think people think I'm I'm European
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bahahahahahhahahaah

i can't even function after that^

honerable mention to fig too. nice whole bar rhyme scheme, ur welcome for teaching that tto you
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Old 03-31-2014, 02:22 AM   #834
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I'll paint a mural, breathing
Releasing ether,
eating a gyro, bleeding
Like where my ear go, Lisa?
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Old 03-31-2014, 02:24 AM   #835
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I murder semen with a heat lamp pointed straight at my penis
then go in fully laid back. Anointing eight of my nieces.
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Old 03-31-2014, 02:24 AM   #836
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bahahahahahhahahaah

i can't even function after that^

honerable mention to fig too. nice whole bar rhyme scheme, ur welcome for teaching that tto you
Bitch you aint teach me SHIT

lol (thanks uncle.pat!!x)
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easy bitch i'm sneaky sick
you can practically smell the herpes creepin
i'm magic with spells: inertia treatment
cause ur raps don't move me..turf em, Jesus
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I'm castrated, my aunt's faded, my jacks dated
My cats racist, the blacks hate it, I'm faceless
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i sucked on a tit while it lactated
but her milk was sour... she needs to back date it
cause it was bad tasting. mad complaining
in bad taste about that day when her tat's deflated
i'm exacerbated, like tax payers with bad payments
backs achin', and i lack patience. feelin bad, hated
gettin fast wasted, just mad gamin
but fack playstation, im talkin rap game'n
with u 2 wack faggots
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Lets set up a table with place mats
Where we plug anals and make jazz
Play with animals and kill people
Sell people. Buy people. If you steal people
Are they still people?
Morpheous gimme another pillllll negro
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