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Old 03-08-2014, 07:43 PM   #1
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I dominate this abomination of a congregation
With my strong lyrics appearance its bombs away son
I declare invasion, I just hit the snares abrasive
I'm in prepared formation, I bet you're scared away from
My stare and gazing flair portrayed, I'm rare to hate
But just in case you better barricade you're bare estate
Do you dare escape my terror or make an error late?
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Old 03-09-2014, 09:13 AM   #2
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I'm a non-active animal activist. I once hit a deer by accident. He became my passenger.

Wit is different. Sick and twisted. Was kidding when I claimed to be demented. Had 'em in stitches. Turned 30 and something switched. It's, what was hilarious puns got scarier once I admitted that I meant it.

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Old 03-10-2014, 06:43 PM   #3
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Intended to leave the game scented with endless loss
Oh well its the sentiment that counts, knock off the scoff
Demented plots locked inside my noggin for me to stock
When I body you, you'll see the outlined victim in chalk
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Old 03-13-2014, 05:49 PM   #4
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Ur an irrelevant species... comparable to elephant feces.
Each parable I paraphrase catapults me to deity.
Kinda. Like your normalcy is unbearably easy.
Like the day I was born I was a nightmare to the Lord of the Rings team.
Or something like that.
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Old 03-16-2014, 12:21 AM   #5
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You can learn to follow the scheme, I'm dope
I'm the essence of bottled steam and so
I hollow you're dreams til they go up in smoke
You bound by the seams, I'm seamless with flow
I careem through the charts redeeming my heart
I'm creatively fluid, and brewing up art
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Old 03-16-2014, 01:35 AM   #6
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We as artists try our hardest to please ourselves
We're hoping exposing the truth feeds our sells
Sometimes we're devistated by criticism
The blogs the critics written fog the vision well
It feels like an assault from salty cynic cells
Adapt and evolve an exhalted sense of self
Strengthen you're resolve and continue to excel
On the mic, on stage, within you the venue dwells
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Old 03-16-2014, 03:29 AM   #7
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How does one manage to capture a ravishing thought remastered?
weak casters appear as hapless bots that only see from the rafters.
that flaw can diminish the awe that broadens each pasture,
a one-dimensional draw that, in turn, limits all possible answers.

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Old 03-20-2014, 11:46 PM   #8
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Once the second rate flow begins, the inner hatred resonates and grows within.
I'm weapons grade plutonium ready to deonate, exploding when section eight loads me in
Fuck THAT topical shit, I'd rather make opticals flip and shatter wit a kelidescope effect
cuz the hypest dopest text you mightve wrote in jest gets outdone in half a stroke or less
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Old 03-21-2014, 03:22 AM   #9
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i tweeted funny things for you.
wait. i deleted those funny sheets of crude.
fuck it. i'd fiend your ridicule. i'd bleed
the beatings like blissful readings from Beatitudes.
lick it up, every awk touch like finger food
til you stop, blush, and bring me dinner too.
it fucking embitters you. spit on the path
you'd have me socially flit slash fidget through,
filling my glass with some of that winter booze.
sit back and wait for that bitch to visit, dude,
remap every sweet snap
and wish she'd speak back gently in
quicker sweeping intervals,
it doesn't mean jack that she's kissing you, Figure Two:
it just seems. i mean. she probably like...
she doesnt seem that into you
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Old 03-21-2014, 04:11 AM   #10
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Artistry is fuckery, comedy's a must for me
Soft and dull topicals are honestly a buck apiece
Don't care about the issues of your knot-wrenched heart
Or your metaphysical musings, kid, you're not that smart
This shit is unbearable, fuck your whimsical fairy world
It's intrinsically terrible and I couldn't care at all
Say something funny, some kind of engrossing tale
An engaging verse these days is like finding the Holy Grail
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Old 03-21-2014, 05:03 AM   #11
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Holy hell! I scream and yell from this moldy cell
As I boldy tell the same shit you fail ta wholly sell.
Paradigms for a pair of dimes get paraphrased to impair the times.
Ensnaring lives in a page is not just a gift, but present to your glaring eyes
beware... your wares are false stock and fail to rise
compare in size and magnitude to the fallice upon which you fantasize.
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Old 03-21-2014, 03:10 PM   #12
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throat famine dry under salmon skies
ear images Skrillex can't design
asinine pantomimes trying to cancel time
headspinning like those roadside fucks handle signs
writing pyramid schemes on a camel ride
be normal? who else you know w/a phantom life
mr. Big shit til ya pride & joy has to dance for lines
lol w/e
cigarette sun burns.
..beware how bright the cancer shines
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Old 03-21-2014, 08:13 PM   #13
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..beware how bright the cancer shines
I barely write.. I pass the time by burying snipes on patches of ice
Inherently nice at handling ice, the stereotype of Canada’s right

Cause I’m going half clapper and top cheddy
These back-checkers get caught guessing
My shots heavy and accurate too
I sauce deadly, exactly to dudes
The jocks of tendys just land in the roof
When cocked n ready, I’m cashin it huge
My passing eludes the deftest defensemen
I slash in and juke in less than a second
Unless there’s a ref then I’m taking some liberties
I’ll question your methods and skating abilities
Amazing agility, nothin but head fakes, sucker
I’m basically Sid to these fuckin dead weight pluggers


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Old 03-21-2014, 10:46 PM   #14
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Loll dope I'll contribute a puck verse later
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You can spit a dope verse worth worship
The pope even let a curse blurt toward it
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Don't you dare say that you apologize
You can stare straight into these hollow eyes
I don't care whatchu say its all a lie
You're affair has degraded all our time
I've spent many nights all balled up crying
In deep dabate if I should call you're place
I could just imagine you're dolled up face
Wine colored lips and the balm id have to taste
No way you could compare the burn of hate
I feel betrayed and dumped in digrace
Our love has decayed with the growing space
Between the legs of the slut you portray




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A murderous mind elaborates with me.
Feeling a hundred voices filling a soul that's empty.
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"Mission impossible, Agent Inoperable!
There's a spy on the loose in an octopus suit!
Get ready to hop out and shoot through the ink that he's lobbing at you!"
"Oh shut up! That's not gunna do.
I'll just do a drive-by dual wield as I hop out the roof...
He'll be as cooked as a lobster, red as cranberries too!"
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I carry the standard your married to, alongside the buried truth
I shovel more dirt on fakes, the "real" I show respect to very few
leave em' slayed along with their merry crew
contrary to...popular belief your gifts are made from imaginary youth
you garbage, but there are still a few things you try to hold merit to...
like...careless views, misguidance in verse with the cross you carry through
shit son, I'm bored of the fabrication, I'm relaxing naked
but still keep enough weaponry to crack your face in hatred
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I'm so brash with habits and I flash so lavish
I've surpassed you maggots who bashed my rappin
I've detached from mentors and entered the dragon
I'm centered in passion I spit verbs in fashion
Flip words just spazzin, I'm a sick kid with caption
Explicit and savage, ya'll addicted to status
I'm ya eviction by constriction with diction
Assassin of stature, i'm slashing you bastards
Depicted as master, vicious, vivid with vision
Eclipse of the masses, the darkness recaptured
Revisit the scripture, revelation, disaster
Wrath of a titan, half of em frightened
My Path is righteous, blast em with lightning
I'm fantastic, don't bite me, gymnastic with rhyming
My pen spasims, delighted, just asking for writing
Can you match it? Well try me. Just attach it by me


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