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Old 07-19-2014, 06:31 PM   #61
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Guys, I leave here for like less than a month and I dislocate my hip like an old man which means I can't sit, stand, lay down or walk without being in terrible pain.


Fuck my life so hard. So I'm back I guess?
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Old 07-19-2014, 06:42 PM   #62
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I sort of prayed you would return sooner then later

I can only blame myself for your pain, but I'm happy and selfish for it, because the prodigal son has returned
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Old 07-19-2014, 07:36 PM   #63
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Old 07-19-2014, 08:50 PM   #64
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I'm really hoping i'm not stepping too far out of my comfort zone with this verse tbh
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Old 07-19-2014, 09:45 PM   #65
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Comfort zones limit creativity and you become complacent. Break down your comfort zones and write something you've never wrote before. Even if everyone hates it you'll love it, and what's more important than that? Idc if you gays don't like one of my verses because I love it, ya dig?
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Old 07-19-2014, 09:57 PM   #66
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Comfort zones limit creativity and you become complacent. Break down your comfort zones and write something you've never wrote before. Even if everyone hates it you'll love it, and what's more important than that? Idc if you gays don't like one of my verses because I love it, ya dig?
wise words of zen.
I need these each and every day k? thanks bro lol
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Old 07-19-2014, 11:43 PM   #67
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finally got my piece pumped out lol good luck bro @timeless
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@King Ra., I know you always drop right at the deadline. But my verse is up for whenever you're ready.
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Never leave your comfort zone. Enter a self-perpetuating dialogue with yourself so drawn out no one can relate. Repaint the same scenes over and over until they become geometric stains laid on a page. Regress the same paths. Trees become characters, regrets become laughs. People are interjections in a story you've been trying to tell for years. It never seems to end & no one gets the message. Maybe you'll start a new story but the old one will haunt you. It's so dead and unmoving it has now become real. Do it again, in the same way. Occupy a thousand spaces at once and never try and find yourself.
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Old 07-20-2014, 01:53 PM   #70
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Always leave your comfort zone. Enter self deluding dimensions you've barely traversed and unleash a depository. Repeat your cleverly equipped ordnance and brushstroke the scenery with your initials. Recreate the scorched earth, make them know you were there. Explore beyond the lair of your own esteem. People are a severance silence. A sonder belief. The realization that each random passerby is living a life as vivid as your own. Invisible anthills. Crowds morphed to your liking. Decorated avenues that paint snowflakes that you never knew existed, or will ever know. You may only appear once, or never. As an extra, writing notes in a park; blurry and incompetent. Discontent. A fuzzy silhouette of a human being appearing only so obscurely in another humans monologue. A cloud. Unforeseen objective, and even in someone elses story you struggle with your comfort zone. Never being noticed because of relief, rather than belief.
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If mentioned in a discussion its who'd still use wordy lines and act all dope
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@Certain do you know any other rap albums that similar in sound to Blue Chips 1 & 2? The Party Supplies type of sound. Been looking and can't find anything similar tbh.
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So you want that real laid-back, minimalist beat and a street rapper?
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So you want that real laid-back, minimalist beat and a street rapper?
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Although I don't know if I'd qualify Party Supplies as a minimalist beat really, but yeah.
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How much MF DOOM have you listened to?
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