Myrmidons project - Page 4

dead man · 07-30-2013, 07:28 AM

Confirmed, I'll have a selection by wednesday

oats · 07-30-2013, 04:11 PM

Cool, thanks.

Brian Bryan · 07-31-2013, 11:33 AM

Are we all signed into the league at present?

PancakeBrah · 07-31-2013, 11:27 PM

wut iz thiz? u gai's r kwazee

Brian Bryan · 08-06-2013, 09:14 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Brian Bryan

Are we all signed into the league at present?

yo?

oats · 08-09-2013, 04:12 AM

I'm not @Brian Bryan

Brian Bryan · 08-09-2013, 05:20 AM

LOL you should read what Pinot Grij did with your verse this week haha!

oats · 08-09-2013, 08:21 PM

I did, shit was hilarious. Excellent battle, not surprisingly considering the source of inspiration

oats · 08-10-2013, 12:29 AM

I got a new OM up if any of you wanna check it out.

dead man · 08-10-2013, 09:52 AM

O Brother

so similar. i saw myself inside of your face
even the features that you tried to forsake
everything i love about you
heartache. mine to embrace,
another memory to drown away & try to erase.
we never took the time to relate -
you were speechless,
i was lost for words, lying awake
playing games, drawing segments of a line to a blank
i never let you see me cry or silently pray
that one day we might communicate. connecting the bridge
run, argue, fight, or people-watch like regular kids
what i've come to realize and since accepted is this -
we'll never know each other. brothers, destined to live
in different planes of reality, or sanity.. shit
you've redefined my view of what a family is.
i held your arms, piercing screams, each spasm & twitch
reminded me that i'll do anything to have you exist.

they'll label you wrong. call you deviant, a savage amidst
a hoard of human animals recanting a script
prescriptions for those sedatives to make you relax
doctors kept you tied, speeding trains ablaze on the tracks
you sat patiently. a simple, silent face in a mask
your empty gaze,
a porcelain vase. surface waiting to crack
hating the facts, hoping for more, wishing for evidence
shared moments never captured in a picture development
alas,
self-deception doesn't make it alive,
you're disabled. i'm a monster, full of hatred and pride
wrestling with ancient demons, aimed to collide
all anger aside -- ashamed to feel so shameful inside.
so i'll hide.
though i love you more than words can describe,
we're strangers. sharing faces, bedrooms, parents, and eyes.

your blank stare, it haunted me. that fragile visage
frozen only with a kodak, photographic mirage.

Papa said you always understood,
But never had the ability to speak.
He said you'd talk forever if you could,
instead of staring back until this life repeats.

Lars · 08-14-2013, 01:37 PM

dope shit, Black

oats i got you on feedback tomorrow

the braggadocio joint, right? i read it earlier but couldn't type up the reply i wanted from outside my own office

oats · 08-14-2013, 03:43 PM

that's one of my favorite verses of yours, Black.
@Lars thanks, appreciate it.

leowats · 08-18-2013, 06:56 PM

oats? uk head from RB?...

Brian Bryan · 08-19-2013, 05:31 AM

lmao i don't think he from the UK bruh

leowats · 08-19-2013, 07:16 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Brian Bryan

lmao i don't think he from the UK bruh

My bad had him confused with someone, nvm.

oats · 08-19-2013, 05:53 PM

From RB, not from the uk though lol. A couple generations off.

Brian Bryan · 08-22-2013, 09:08 AM

I think I'm the guy from the UK he's speaking of.

oats · 08-23-2013, 12:21 AM

Or maybe he remembers me for one of my early punch lines in the FL:

After I'm done voters'll ask "U K?" Like they questioned Europe

Brian Bryan · 09-03-2013, 10:02 AM

Terrible/brilliant

link me to that piece of yours talked about on page four

i can't find it now, need the name...

oats · 09-05-2013, 03:40 AM

take your pick

http://netcees.co/search.php?searchid=42665

07-30-2013, 07:28 AM	#61
dead man living Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,468 Battle Record: 33-18 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - AOWL Season 1 - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 4 - Write Week V - GWL Season 1 Rep Power: 77606676	Confirmed, I'll have a selection by wednesday __________________ Zack Wicks for president

07-31-2013, 11:27 PM	#64
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 13,052 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899406	wut iz thiz? u gai's r kwazee __________________ If I ventured in the slipstream Between the viaducts of your dreams Where immobil steel rims crack And the ditch in the back road stop Could you find me?

08-10-2013, 09:52 AM	#70
dead man living Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,468 Battle Record: 33-18 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - AOWL Season 1 - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 4 - Write Week V - GWL Season 1 Rep Power: 77606676	O Brother so similar. i saw myself inside of your face even the features that you tried to forsake everything i love about you heartache. mine to embrace, another memory to drown away & try to erase. we never took the time to relate - you were speechless, i was lost for words, lying awake playing games, drawing segments of a line to a blank i never let you see me cry or silently pray that one day we might communicate. connecting the bridge run, argue, fight, or people-watch like regular kids what i've come to realize and since accepted is this - we'll never know each other. brothers, destined to live in different planes of reality, or sanity.. shit you've redefined my view of what a family is. i held your arms, piercing screams, each spasm & twitch reminded me that i'll do anything to have you exist. they'll label you wrong. call you deviant, a savage amidst a hoard of human animals recanting a script prescriptions for those sedatives to make you relax doctors kept you tied, speeding trains ablaze on the tracks you sat patiently. a simple, silent face in a mask your empty gaze, a porcelain vase. surface waiting to crack hating the facts, hoping for more, wishing for evidence shared moments never captured in a picture development alas, self-deception doesn't make it alive, you're disabled. i'm a monster, full of hatred and pride wrestling with ancient demons, aimed to collide all anger aside -- ashamed to feel so shameful inside. so i'll hide. though i love you more than words can describe, we're strangers. sharing faces, bedrooms, parents, and eyes. your blank stare, it haunted me. that fragile visage frozen only with a kodak, photographic mirage. Papa said you always understood, But never had the ability to speak. He said you'd talk forever if you could, instead of staring back until this life repeats. __________________ Zack Wicks for president

08-14-2013, 01:37 PM	#71
Lars PROVEN BITER Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Wolverhampton Posts: 1,588 Battle Record: 5-0 Champed - The Winter Topical Rep Power: 1809295	dope shit, Black oats i got you on feedback tomorrow the braggadocio joint, right? i read it earlier but couldn't type up the reply i wanted from outside my own office __________________ PROVEN BITER

08-18-2013, 06:56 PM	#73
leowats Realasdername Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 127 Battle Record: 2-1 Rep Power: 33	oats? uk head from RB?... Last edited by leowats; 08-18-2013 at 07:18 PM.

07-30-2013, 04:11 PM	#62
oats Steel Cut Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,075 Battle Record: 19-10 Accomplishments - OM HOF (2x) Champed - Fight Night LXXXIV - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 79005425	Cool, thanks.

07-31-2013, 11:33 AM	#63
Brian Bryan BITER Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: England Posts: 620 Battle Record: 4-0 Champed - Gimmick Battle League Rep Power: 0	Are we all signed into the league at present?

08-09-2013, 04:12 AM	#66
oats Steel Cut Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,075 Battle Record: 19-10 Accomplishments - OM HOF (2x) Champed - Fight Night LXXXIV - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 79005425	I'm not @Brian Bryan

08-09-2013, 05:20 AM	#67
Brian Bryan BITER Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: England Posts: 620 Battle Record: 4-0 Champed - Gimmick Battle League Rep Power: 0	LOL you should read what Pinot Grij did with your verse this week haha!

08-09-2013, 08:21 PM	#68
oats Steel Cut Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,075 Battle Record: 19-10 Accomplishments - OM HOF (2x) Champed - Fight Night LXXXIV - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 79005425	I did, shit was hilarious. Excellent battle, not surprisingly considering the source of inspiration

08-10-2013, 12:29 AM	#69
oats Steel Cut Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,075 Battle Record: 19-10 Accomplishments - OM HOF (2x) Champed - Fight Night LXXXIV - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 79005425	I got a new OM up if any of you wanna check it out.

08-14-2013, 03:43 PM	#72
oats Steel Cut Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,075 Battle Record: 19-10 Accomplishments - OM HOF (2x) Champed - Fight Night LXXXIV - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 79005425	that's one of my favorite verses of yours, Black. @Lars thanks, appreciate it.

08-19-2013, 05:31 AM	#74
Brian Bryan BITER Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: England Posts: 620 Battle Record: 4-0 Champed - Gimmick Battle League Rep Power: 0	lmao i don't think he from the UK bruh

08-19-2013, 05:53 PM	#76
oats Steel Cut Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,075 Battle Record: 19-10 Accomplishments - OM HOF (2x) Champed - Fight Night LXXXIV - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 79005425	From RB, not from the uk though lol. A couple generations off.

08-22-2013, 09:08 AM	#77
Brian Bryan BITER Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: England Posts: 620 Battle Record: 4-0 Champed - Gimmick Battle League Rep Power: 0	I think I'm the guy from the UK he's speaking of.

08-23-2013, 12:21 AM	#78
oats Steel Cut Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,075 Battle Record: 19-10 Accomplishments - OM HOF (2x) Champed - Fight Night LXXXIV - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 79005425	Or maybe he remembers me for one of my early punch lines in the FL: After I'm done voters'll ask "U K?" Like they questioned Europe

09-03-2013, 10:02 AM	#79
Brian Bryan BITER Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: England Posts: 620 Battle Record: 4-0 Champed - Gimmick Battle League Rep Power: 0	Terrible/brilliant link me to that piece of yours talked about on page four i can't find it now, need the name...

09-05-2013, 03:40 AM	#80
oats Steel Cut Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,075 Battle Record: 19-10 Accomplishments - OM HOF (2x) Champed - Fight Night LXXXIV - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 79005425	take your pick http://netcees.co/search.php?searchid=42665