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Old 11-28-2013, 12:26 AM   #641
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open mice are the tissue. muscle fibers, the ghost
swam to pretty islands just to die at the coast
frozen eyes as the ocean blue like sirens and smoke
piece of pie and a roast. thanks for buying me hope
i've seen the root of harmony inside of a scope
aimed it at my minister. then silenced the pope
cyanide and tire irons. vitamins, dope
shook my friend that overdosed, he finally awoke
just to curl up and fade away beside me, so close
to that fireplace that i used to make my coffee and toast
my shoes are made by children that a chinaman owns
so i wear them hoping everyone will step on my toes
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Old 11-28-2013, 01:59 AM   #642
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catch this pendulum again and again. let it rest within
seconds ago. medicine, edison, tesla and goethe.
pages to poke. no new borders.
barns, & nobles with charm, bailing hay in baroque,
the sex that i hate that you loathe. arrangements arose,
im six stars in blue corner. basin, basting in statuesque quo.
the new northern. mattress & rope, a new ornament, bro
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Old 11-28-2013, 12:28 PM   #643
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I'm flinging scrunchies w/a snap. I'm feeling hungry for your ass
Thumbing through your scraps. Cuddling w/your rash
Grand papi purple in a fur coat. Dirt flow, where the worms go
Sipping meds from a nurse skull. Itching flesh when the percs show
Little sex when the skirt's high. Lit her cigarette on the first try
Damn it all. Molly coaster in a hand massage
A grind, going back n forth w/the average jaw
Smashing rocks, grasping the aspirin straw
acid washed brain. Raven eyes glasses on.
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Old 11-28-2013, 12:51 PM   #644
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Dope man, it's only begun. But dressing is gross
Regret is a slope. Never lay your eyes on the end of the road
I layed my eyes down once so memento's would glow
I wanted to lay em on the bed & just float .
Waxin' for days. Jack in a maze. Steps in the snow
I almost lept from the edge of my soul
But I'd rather just vege on the rest of this bowl
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Old 11-30-2013, 11:07 PM   #645
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It's a fucking miracle I ain't dead. This the plague spread.
Brain left a while ago. The style i chose gets xylophone low.
I buy the wrong clothes & wine to odd hoes
Blinded by lights & opticals. Heart dripping ice & popcicles.
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Old 12-03-2013, 09:00 AM   #646
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i remember you as a time of day.
explosions. moment silence.
violent azure fray. frostbit,
lost kids, guess who finally got their way?
repercussions. rarefactions. never nothing.
everlasting. rock in place, reminisce,
evidence of thought unseen wove a web of dreams
and god exists. like bodies in the misty clay.
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Old 12-03-2013, 11:11 AM   #647
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In the misty clay I'm whisked away to times untold
Where the mystics play the simple game where minds take hold
& become molded into creatures of their own desire
The opposed are featured as diseased, thrown into the funeral pyre
Some are comfortable liars, others are brutally honest
I'm just stuck in the mire 'cuz nothing's fruitful through promise
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Old 12-03-2013, 12:11 PM   #648
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Cranium full of messy laundry
Ahhh.... The taste of a refreshing death n' tonic
Taking me back to when I was but a pest in college
A legend, brolic. Launching webs of concrete
It's best to die on it. Pesticide omelette. My breath is dry vomit
Drexel glide sonnet, etched in five continents..
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Old 12-03-2013, 01:32 PM   #649
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Swanton bomb flip. paradigm shift. beyond marksman
the dark pen locked in on any oncoming targets
pivotal conscience put away deep inside with no locksmith
no way out it became a wrestling contest
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Old 12-03-2013, 02:07 PM   #650
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Hand washing I just can't stop it I lather rinse and repeat cautious
Bacteria is infecting me causing me to be nautious I'm a hostage
Compulsory knowledge gained my memory solace is drained
Hypochondriac in the laundry mat I think a polyups in my brain
I'ma see doctor Wallace for the day get my growing pains xray'd
It's the sixteenth time I've been clear in the midst of this decade
Thanks to my imagination and my lack of any real restraint
I've been dead and cancerous all within the same damn complaint
Now the professionals downplay any peep or sound made from me
All of my family and the people in our town say I'm a insane breed
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Old 12-03-2013, 06:22 PM   #651
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There's no more waiting I'm defacating on ya reputation
no death escaping its your breathe I'm taking by strangulation
Yes I'm crazy and medicating with these cuts from razors
Self mutilation premeditated the pulsing pain I love to savior
Convulsing rage engaged I become a self loathing terminater
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Old 12-03-2013, 07:06 PM   #652
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Waiter trader player any other rhymes to thr layer
Dragon slayer lair taker far from the modern tier
yeahh..Sonny & Cher for mayor with the priest Judas
shooters..looters consumers from the land of Hooters
all heart & no brains a scarecrow that's scared to grow
here we go round & round we go on the merry goooo
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Old 12-04-2013, 12:35 AM   #653
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Fucking nerd rap you herb cats should learn that your words wack
Who give a fuck where her purse sat the day in the park when the bird shat
On her fur hat. Lol. Bro why is that where your concerns at
My only question is this bitch gonna strip slurp tricks or turn packs
Ill herd back every track you heard spat in a burlap sack
And hurl that crap off the earth straight to the sun and burn that black
Cut the church act jack, get to business and I turn back hats
With a skrrrt crack crack the crowd start screaming duck, like someone hurt afflac
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Old 12-04-2013, 02:11 AM   #654
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You talkin Afllack ducks? You droppin wack ass stuff, I'm awful glad Pats buff on some Ryan gosling figure yes, cause I ain't talkin cigarettes when Copy smash mad butts. You always act black rough, but probly half that tough. Involved in rap that's love, you call it backpack but I never nap sacks bruv, cause I ain't sleepin with any nuts. Hawaiian pizza for everyone cause I ain't beefin, just veggies son. I guess a little ham can slip, the texting-smith philanthropist: I try to vegan with everyone.. but it gets a bit disastrous when every single faggot thinks his pen emits the baddest shit. So then I spit a thousand clips worth of verbal cartridges. And end ya shitty talentless verse and murder bars you flipped.
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Old 12-04-2013, 06:27 PM   #655
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Blah blah blah I don't have to put any heart in this
my armament is prepared for any of the drama spit
the Ramada Inn couldn't hold down my armada kid
I'm mad sad slap happy with a tomahawk equipped
got alotta shit a lotta problems with the doctors script
Make a pinata with your lines til you see the mockery live
blah blah blah I don't need any thought in this
Wizard of Oz. Pras and Nas make a pot
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Old 12-05-2013, 04:21 AM   #656
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Shitting on you like the witty type
Though most misconstrue me for the white whitney likes
I'm about that city life...
con a rose out its petals like Geppetto giving wood a shitty slice.
Of the dream miley, paris, lindsey n nicole bitchy might
Indulge in... just cuz I'd chuckle at the irony of spending nights
Looking for knights that shine n shimmer when they only glimmer in the light.
This tone was a sliver... but a portion delivered from my quiver, sprites.
She's oblivious to the notion that deliverance only comes with living right,
So I slither in her dumb bull doors, offering the illest bite...
The realest that ever did it... she's reeling in the matrixes im knitting like
How could it be this easy? This bitch is driven offa gettin piped...
Then comes the commitments... so I'm itchin like
I aint bout be gettin lice! I'm dippin. Next victim
gettin served like them B2K niggaz.

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Old 12-05-2013, 04:55 AM   #657
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somebody done fucked up, I've seen enough bluffs
corrupted interrupting me may abruptly fuck off
fuckos can't stop this, I bring ruckus
that's nutty like hobbits posturing bossy
what an atrocity, drop yall in head caskets
winter is coming, I stay comfortable in a straight jacket
I hate on maggots, don't wait for an exculpation
taking a piss at me will only stain your own reputation
no need for tension, don't care if you're a "vet"
with all disrespect, I must keep every bitch in check
break pencil necks without breaking a sweat
dissing con you will only dis-connect
while I swing correct - against that dying crap
-relying on battle stats
and just for the record; nobody is buying that
I am a pillar, like public erections I have evident potency
^don't think I'm soft just because I write delicate poetry
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maaan fuck these meter coins. rattle when the bass slaps.
cattle with a Grace ass. student nurse, snackin Percs
working 2s for the vapor drags. gravel is the state of paths.
fuck a pavement. fuck a payment. run away with
whoever gone hop in, no questions asked
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Old 12-05-2013, 09:23 AM   #659
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Yeah? Well, I wanna fuck anime bitches
Talking pussy so powerful, has gamma rays in it
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half pair of kicks packed in the casket.
brain tortured, been racked to last pin.
frustration mixed flavors with. something like passion.
fruit of your labor gets nipped. punch in cupfuls of plastic.
and another. I'll major in fifths. make it my lunch-in-a-bag shit,
my theme song arpeggio notes, rings like archipelagos mapped.
im sailing for pleasure, jetting puffs from the pack.
gold on rocks thrown at the Crown. like the Royal got cracked.
shots to the dome, clinched to the throne, mostly intact,
Set-up for failure dips to grody linoleum slab.
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