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MMLP · 08-26-2014, 07:38 AM

@sraL i have, have you? youtube?

sral · 08-26-2014, 08:06 AM

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@sraL i have, have you? youtube?

Mine's on FB, not sure if I can upload it here, Ben will show you though haha!

StarFaggot · 08-26-2014, 11:46 AM

This magazine is HOF worthy. See to it that it's added.

jilti · 08-26-2014, 12:54 PM

Sick mag and audio explanation

Objective · 08-27-2014, 12:33 AM

@Certain and everyone else working on this mag... Great fucking work! And you're absolutely right about English being my second language. I've only used it a little bit when my mother was working at a reception center for a couple years, never really had any real use of it. I was a fuck up in school and graduated with a C in the English language. Beside general sentence building and everyday words my vocabulary is self taught. I used to read the dictionary a little bit every day just to up it, and it shows in a lot of my verses when words look the same but don't really rhyme, or when it's used in ways that isn't really natural etc. I try to improve that all the time though. Lately and mainly in NC 2.0 my issue have been motivation/inspiration to write, not really writers block, just motivation. I try to fight myself through it for the time being.

Certain · 08-27-2014, 12:36 AM

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@Certain and everyone else working on this mag... Great fucking work! And you're absolutely right about English being my second language. I've only used it a little bit when my mother was working at a reception center for a couple years, never really had any real use of it. I was a fuck up in school and graduated with a C in the English language. Beside general sentence building and everyday words my vocabulary is self taught. I used to read the dictionary a little bit every day just to up it, and it shows in a lot of my verses when words look the same but don't really rhyme, or when it's used in ways that isn't really natural etc. I try to improve that all the time though. Lately and mainly in NC 2.0 my issue have been motivation/inspiration to write, not really writers block, just motivation. I try to fight myself through it for the time being.

Keep at it. Keep reading, even when you can't write.

oats · 08-27-2014, 12:44 AM

@Objective what is your first language? where are you from?

Objective · 08-27-2014, 01:51 AM

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@Objective what is your first language? where are you from?

Norwegian, I live in a city 45 minutes away from Oslo.

oats · 08-27-2014, 03:20 AM

That hardly counts, Norwegians are fluent in dozens of languages, pretty sure it's required by law. You probably learned how to speak English better than I did. NOT IMPRESSED

sral · 08-27-2014, 03:49 AM

@Objective I copped The Bothersome Man on your rec.

havent watched it yet, most likely be this weekend before i get the chance but i'll let you know what i think

e11even · 08-27-2014, 05:22 AM

Cool shit. Dope mag. I hope I get an in. Goodluck to all you ppl.

Objective · 08-27-2014, 03:57 PM

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That hardly counts, Norwegians are fluent in dozens of languages, pretty sure it's required by law. You probably learned how to speak English better than I did. NOT IMPRESSED

That's true, never said anyone should be impressed either. Besides, ain't there some German dude around here that used to destroy people left and right? Almost the same situation, right? Certain mentioned that it's my second language and I said that it was. We start learning English in second grade.
But my school environment has been fucked up ever since third grade. To give you an idea: In third grade I was ahead of everyone in my class by a year in math, when I started 8th grade I was at 4th grade level. Our class was fucked up, we'd bully teachers until they stormed out crying and shit, one of which that stormed out was an English teacher. I kept skipping classes and barely graduated high school. When I tell you most of my knowledge in English has been self taught you best believe. Not saying you or anyone should be impressed because there isn't a reason for it, I'm just telling you how my situation has been and why writing in this language has been harder for me than most others from here. And it's my choice to keep writing in this language so it's on me.

Objective · 08-27-2014, 03:59 PM

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@Objective I copped The Bothersome Man on your rec.

havent watched it yet, most likely be this weekend before i get the chance but i'll let you know what i think

Dopeness, hope it's in your lane.

oats · 08-27-2014, 08:14 PM

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Originally Posted by Objective

That's true, never said anyone should be impressed either. Besides, ain't there some German dude around here that used to destroy people left and right? Almost the same situation, right? Certain mentioned that it's my second language and I said that it was. We start learning English in second grade.
But my school environment has been fucked up ever since third grade. To give you an idea: In third grade I was ahead of everyone in my class by a year in math, when I started 8th grade I was at 4th grade level. Our class was fucked up, we'd bully teachers until they stormed out crying and shit, one of which that stormed out was an English teacher. I kept skipping classes and barely graduated high school. When I tell you most of my knowledge in English has been self taught you best believe. Not saying you or anyone should be impressed because there isn't a reason for it, I'm just telling you how my situation has been and why writing in this language has been harder for me than most others from here. And it's my choice to keep writing in this language so it's on me.

I was just being facetious man, I actually am impressed lol. can you speak any other languages?

Objective · 08-27-2014, 08:19 PM

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I was just being facetious man, I actually am impressed lol. can you speak any other languages?

lol! Nah, I had German and Spanish in school but I didn't learn much, well, I barely remember any of it, haha. I'm looking to learn Albanian in the future though. Got family n shit I'd like to be able to speak to. How about you?

oats · 08-27-2014, 09:22 PM

just English. I'm proficient in conversational basics of Japanese, and I can understand bits of spanish because my fiance talks shit to me in spanish when she's mad. but one of my goals in life is to be bilingual.

Pinot Grij · 08-28-2014, 11:29 AM

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lol! Nah, I had German and Spanish in school but I didn't learn much, well, I barely remember any of it, haha. I'm looking to learn Albanian in the future though. Got family n shit I'd like to be able to speak to. How about you?

NOT EVEN ALBANIANS WANT TO SPEAK ALBANIAN!!! THIS DUDE IS GONNA LEARN ALBANIAN!!! I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHERE ALBANIA IS!!!

Not but seriously, that's impressive as fuck.

Seymour BUTTS · 08-28-2014, 11:39 AM

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I was just being facetious man, I actually am impressed lol. can you speak any other languages?

anatawa BAKAYARO

Zen · 08-28-2014, 11:50 AM

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and I can understand bits of spanish because my fiance talks shit to me in spanish when she's mad.

I know dat feel.

Objective · 08-28-2014, 10:56 PM

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NOT EVEN ALBANIANS WANT TO SPEAK ALBANIAN!!! THIS DUDE IS GONNA LEARN ALBANIAN!!! I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHERE ALBANIA IS!!!

Not but seriously, that's impressive as fuck.

Lmfao, yo, Albania is dope as fuck, shit got a double-headed eagle in the flag man. Hahahah.

Thanks, appreciate it.

08-26-2014, 11:46 AM	#43
StarFaggot Leave you flatlined. Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 5,108 Battle Record: 12-9 Champed - Site Diss 2013 - Tag Team Tournament III Rep Power: 0	This magazine is HOF worthy. See to it that it's added. __________________ [B][CENTER][SIZE="5"] It's Aero join me at RAPBATTLES[/SIZE][/CENTER][/B]

08-27-2014, 12:33 AM	#45
Objective ( ͡º ͜ʖ ͡º) Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,868 Battle Record: 17-32 Rep Power: 52474192	@Certain and everyone else working on this mag... Great fucking work! And you're absolutely right about English being my second language. I've only used it a little bit when my mother was working at a reception center for a couple years, never really had any real use of it. I was a fuck up in school and graduated with a C in the English language. Beside general sentence building and everyday words my vocabulary is self taught. I used to read the dictionary a little bit every day just to up it, and it shows in a lot of my verses when words look the same but don't really rhyme, or when it's used in ways that isn't really natural etc. I try to improve that all the time though. Lately and mainly in NC 2.0 my issue have been motivation/inspiration to write, not really writers block, just motivation. I try to fight myself through it for the time being. __________________ I'm not a slave for entertainment, I'm entertainments personal slave, So deep into writing I'm concerned bout the text on my grave. www.youtube.com/watch?v=gV8ozGcGJ6o

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oats Steel Cut Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,084 Battle Record: 19-10 Accomplishments - OM HOF (2x) Champed - Fight Night LXXXIV - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 79005428	@Objective what is your first language? where are you from? __________________ You should be water

08-27-2014, 03:20 AM	#49
oats Steel Cut Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,084 Battle Record: 19-10 Accomplishments - OM HOF (2x) Champed - Fight Night LXXXIV - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 79005428	That hardly counts, Norwegians are fluent in dozens of languages, pretty sure it's required by law. You probably learned how to speak English better than I did. NOT IMPRESSED __________________ You should be water

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e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247259	Cool shit. Dope mag. I hope I get an in. Goodluck to all you ppl. __________________ Ahem.

08-27-2014, 09:22 PM	#56
oats Steel Cut Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,084 Battle Record: 19-10 Accomplishments - OM HOF (2x) Champed - Fight Night LXXXIV - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 79005428	just English. I'm proficient in conversational basics of Japanese, and I can understand bits of spanish because my fiance talks shit to me in spanish when she's mad. but one of my goals in life is to be bilingual. __________________ You should be water