I need someone smart to read my book - Page 3

bare ryu · 07-03-2021, 07:07 PM

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Originally Posted by ~RustyGunZ~

If you’re from RR you’re probably not good enough

what if im from america?

kungfugrip · 07-04-2021, 04:39 PM

If you don't want certain people to read your book, wouldn't that mean it's absolutely not good enough to be published?

You realize that like, 29 people will read your book if it ever hits the shelves right? And you probably can't trust them to keep it a secret

Answer · 07-04-2021, 08:37 PM

I’m just looking for feedback, trying to make sure I didn’t claim anything that’s clearly false, and I’m still making changes to it. fixing a lot of typos, etc. it’s nowhere near complete yet

kungfugrip · 07-06-2021, 04:02 PM

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Originally Posted by Answer

I’m just looking for feedback, trying to make sure I didn’t claim anything that’s clearly false, and I’m still making changes to it. fixing a lot of typos, etc. it’s nowhere near complete yet

I have 3 screenplays written and i send them out willy nilly. My favourite one is about how racist WWF was in the 80s. It's called Tusslemania 10: The Caucasianing, and i used alot of those Million Peso Man jokes from UPN

Ouch · 07-04-2021, 09:22 PM

go to a forum thats about people writing in the style you do nigga its not thats much.. people here are like old ass 30 year olds who kind of write....

you do know what reddit is right... and im not tryna be a dick

Answer · 07-04-2021, 10:32 PM

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Originally Posted by Ouch

go to a forum thats about people writing in the style you do nigga its not thats much.. people here are like old ass 30 year olds who kind of write....

you do know what reddit is right... and im not tryna be a dick

What’s reddit

UPN Zuch · 07-04-2021, 10:42 PM

Bro ouch is owning you right now

~RustyGunZ~ · 07-05-2021, 11:27 AM

Also gay

~RustyGunZ~ · 07-05-2021, 01:48 PM

If you put as much effort into selling hot tubs as you do making aliases on a text forum in 2021 your wife might fuck less black guys while your kids nap

BOOM · 07-05-2021, 02:00 PM

lmao ur wifes cunt juice taste of honey glazed ham

~RustyGunZ~ · 07-05-2021, 02:02 PM

Delicious

Your wife look like cured meat

kungfugrip · 07-06-2021, 03:46 PM

Lmao this is hilarious

07-04-2021, 09:22 PM	#5
Ouch Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2019 Posts: 5,677 Battle Record: 1-5 Accomplishments - Lost to Kill Spree Champed - Wall Talking Rep Power: 4052255	go to a forum thats about people writing in the style you do nigga its not thats much.. people here are like old ass 30 year olds who kind of write.... you do know what reddit is right... and im not tryna be a dick __________________ I just figured out how to change this.

07-04-2021, 04:39 PM	#2
kungfugrip Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2017 Posts: 2,425 Rep Power: 76706	If you don't want certain people to read your book, wouldn't that mean it's absolutely not good enough to be published? You realize that like, 29 people will read your book if it ever hits the shelves right? And you probably can't trust them to keep it a secret

07-04-2021, 08:37 PM	#3
Answer He / Him / His Join Date: Oct 2013 Posts: 1,701 Battle Record: 20-1 Champed - Summer Classic IX - Netcees Battle League - Fight night 15 Rep Power: 14633673	I’m just looking for feedback, trying to make sure I didn’t claim anything that’s clearly false, and I’m still making changes to it. fixing a lot of typos, etc. it’s nowhere near complete yet

07-05-2021, 02:00 PM	#10
BOOM Member Join Date: Apr 2020 Posts: 77 Rep Power: 0	lmao ur wifes cunt juice taste of honey glazed ham

07-06-2021, 03:46 PM	#12
kungfugrip Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2017 Posts: 2,425 Rep Power: 76706	Lmao this is hilarious