The Alpha Male - Page 3

Saila · 03-04-2014, 02:08 PM

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Originally Posted by Vulgar

If you sign up for the topical league I will give you an ego check you'll never forget.

I have Chronic-Amnesia, early onset of Altzeimers, & I just severely bumped my head laughing at your bravado. I highly doubt your claim Mr V

Zen · 03-04-2014, 02:53 PM

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Originally Posted by Saila

30 lines? Who writes verses 1 bar short? You fucking retard you need to learn to count. Go set it up. Deadline is 1 hour. Bring your pre-written verse lol

lol
Do you even math, bro?

Saila · 03-04-2014, 02:58 PM

Do I even what? I'll humour you and assume you mean do I do math.
1 bar = 2 lines - which would make it a 32 line verse.

Or is that not the netcees way of conducting yourself?

Anyways, where the fuck has Alvaro Paquito got to? My verse is ready. Tell him to get his frail little frame over to the battlefield and set up our battle

PancakeBrah · 03-04-2014, 03:21 PM

I'm pretty sure Hush isn't standing by and refreshing this topic every two seconds to have seen that 1 hour rule.

I didn't read the verse but from your persona I can guess you would lose to Vulgar.

Let's settle down and not be such an insecure free poster. Everything will be okay guy.

PancakeBrah · 03-04-2014, 03:26 PM

Just read it and 'lead guy' does indeed stick out as bad wording. Throughout the piece you used elegant and regal language so to say lead guy is a bit too slangy. It goes against the tone you set and is only there to rhyme. You should have reworded either lead guy or the rhyme to accommodate a smoother and more consistent read.

It was a solid piece but being rustled over an honest and fair criticism of just one phrase paints you as someone who thinks their shit doesn't stink. Its no way to be. You're not the best writer here nor are you above reproach. It'd be better to take good feedback, which Zenland gave, and consider it instead of arguing.

Saila · 03-04-2014, 03:30 PM

What's a freeposter?

Hey, I was fine till ya boy ZenFag got my back up.
Respect is a two way thing, right? Seems I hurt a lot of egos with my own, but it's all good. I can be nice too. Try me.

I'm not expecting Manyata Dominguez with his Pubert Adams moustache to refresh this every few seconds. And I'm in no rush to post the verse I got done a short while back. He will of seen my request and will reply when his shitty verse is done.

Saila · 03-04-2014, 03:35 PM

Yea, like I said, I got stuck for a synonym with that part, but felt like it worked out well considering I failed to find an alternative.

And if I made myself look as you say, then that wasn't my intention. My record is 73-4, and believe you me, I have NEVER been confident enough to genuinely think I'm good. That's the honest truth. You wanted the truth, so there you have it. I would never think I'm the best writer either lol that's laughable to me

Hush · 03-04-2014, 03:53 PM

Where's your verse pussy?

You been in this thread all day reeking of foreskin

Grow a pair and drop u coward

Saila · 03-04-2014, 03:59 PM

All day? Ok. I obviously haven't, but to know that you'd of also had to if been in here all day, or be stalking me, right? Which one is it Chico Vato-Mendez?

My verse was ready 7 minutes after your post. Where is the thread? You have 1 hour to post your pre-written tripe.

Hush · 03-04-2014, 04:31 PM

You've replied to every post in less than ten minutes. You have spent all day in this thread . Lol

Diode · 03-04-2014, 04:37 PM

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My record is 73-4

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lol k

Zen · 03-04-2014, 04:42 PM

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Originally Posted by Hush

You've replied to every post in less than ten minutes. You have spent all day in this thread . Lol

@Captain Obvious

Saila · 03-04-2014, 05:05 PM

I get a notification on my phone when a reply is posted. Blame admin.
Are we gonna discuss my reply speed or are we gonna get that battle underway? You don't have to stall for time. I mean, you already had 12 lines prewritten didn't you?

So my record isn't 73-4? Is that what you're insinuating? Do I have to prove my claims?

Diode · 03-04-2014, 05:14 PM

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Originally Posted by Saila

I get a notification on my phone when a reply is posted. Blame admin.
Are we gonna discuss my reply speed or are we gonna get that battle underway? You don't have to stall for time. I mean, you already had 12 lines prewritten didn't you?

So my record isn't 73-4? Is that what you're insinuating? Do I have to prove my claims?

oh god yes please prove your claims

Saila · 03-04-2014, 05:16 PM

Are you serious? lol you can't take my word for it?

Hush · 03-04-2014, 06:10 PM

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Originally Posted by Saila

I get a notification on my phone when a reply is posted. Blame admin.
Are we gonna discuss my reply speed or are we gonna get that battle underway? You don't have to stall for time. I mean, you already had 12 lines prewritten didn't you?

So my record isn't 73-4? Is that what you're insinuating? Do I have to prove my claims?

So u run and respond every time u get a notification?

Some life u got

Saila · 03-04-2014, 06:26 PM

Run? I literally lift my arm slightly, phone in hand, and type. Just cuz you rock a Commodore 64, doesn't mean we all live in the 80s.

I shall say it clearly now. Set, up, the, battle, thread. My, verse, is, ready, to, be, posted.

Stop ducking

Exoduzt · 03-04-2014, 06:29 PM

can we get some replies on the other OM drops....thanks

Geno · 03-04-2014, 07:31 PM

fuck no -we can not
but yo, this shit wasnt even that dope tbh. had its moments.

now -can we gfet onto other OM posts. this one is about dried up of lulz

ill nik-A · 03-04-2014, 08:00 PM

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=56922
@Saila peep that

03-04-2014, 03:53 PM	#48
Hush NJ Devil Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,042 Battle Record: Who Cares Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Rep Power: 84181417	Where's your verse pussy? You been in this thread all day reeking of foreskin Grow a pair and drop u coward __________________ Bed stuy fly Bushwick sick East ny walk

03-04-2014, 04:31 PM	#50
Hush NJ Devil Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,042 Battle Record: Who Cares Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Rep Power: 84181417	You've replied to every post in less than ten minutes. You have spent all day in this thread . Lol __________________ Bed stuy fly Bushwick sick East ny walk

03-04-2014, 06:29 PM	#58
Exoduzt Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 39 Battle Record: 0-2 Rep Power: 35	can we get some replies on the other OM drops....thanks __________________

03-04-2014, 07:31 PM	#59
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,330 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036758	fuck no -we can not but yo, this shit wasnt even that dope tbh. had its moments. now -can we gfet onto other OM posts. this one is about dried up of lulz __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

03-04-2014, 08:00 PM	#60
ill nik-A Super Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 7,413 Battle Record: 70-25 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - BA Picture - Picture Battle Tournament - Netcees Battle League (3x) - Netcees Writers League (2x) - Summer Classic VI - Fall Brawl III - Netcees Battle League Season X - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 77164516	http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=56922 @Saila peep that __________________ Grumpy old man.

03-04-2014, 02:58 PM	#43
Saila Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2014 Posts: 179 Rep Power: 32	Do I even what? I'll humour you and assume you mean do I do math. 1 bar = 2 lines - which would make it a 32 line verse. Or is that not the netcees way of conducting yourself? Anyways, where the fuck has Alvaro Paquito got to? My verse is ready. Tell him to get his frail little frame over to the battlefield and set up our battle

03-04-2014, 03:21 PM	#44
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 13,052 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899406	I'm pretty sure Hush isn't standing by and refreshing this topic every two seconds to have seen that 1 hour rule. I didn't read the verse but from your persona I can guess you would lose to Vulgar. Let's settle down and not be such an insecure free poster. Everything will be okay guy.

03-04-2014, 03:26 PM	#45
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 13,052 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899406	Just read it and 'lead guy' does indeed stick out as bad wording. Throughout the piece you used elegant and regal language so to say lead guy is a bit too slangy. It goes against the tone you set and is only there to rhyme. You should have reworded either lead guy or the rhyme to accommodate a smoother and more consistent read. It was a solid piece but being rustled over an honest and fair criticism of just one phrase paints you as someone who thinks their shit doesn't stink. Its no way to be. You're not the best writer here nor are you above reproach. It'd be better to take good feedback, which Zenland gave, and consider it instead of arguing.

03-04-2014, 03:30 PM	#46
Saila Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2014 Posts: 179 Rep Power: 32	What's a freeposter? Hey, I was fine till ya boy ZenFag got my back up. Respect is a two way thing, right? Seems I hurt a lot of egos with my own, but it's all good. I can be nice too. Try me. I'm not expecting Manyata Dominguez with his Pubert Adams moustache to refresh this every few seconds. And I'm in no rush to post the verse I got done a short while back. He will of seen my request and will reply when his shitty verse is done.

03-04-2014, 03:35 PM	#47
Saila Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2014 Posts: 179 Rep Power: 32	Yea, like I said, I got stuck for a synonym with that part, but felt like it worked out well considering I failed to find an alternative. And if I made myself look as you say, then that wasn't my intention. My record is 73-4, and believe you me, I have NEVER been confident enough to genuinely think I'm good. That's the honest truth. You wanted the truth, so there you have it. I would never think I'm the best writer either lol that's laughable to me

03-04-2014, 03:59 PM	#49
Saila Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2014 Posts: 179 Rep Power: 32	All day? Ok. I obviously haven't, but to know that you'd of also had to if been in here all day, or be stalking me, right? Which one is it Chico Vato-Mendez? My verse was ready 7 minutes after your post. Where is the thread? You have 1 hour to post your pre-written tripe.

03-04-2014, 05:05 PM	#53
Saila Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2014 Posts: 179 Rep Power: 32	I get a notification on my phone when a reply is posted. Blame admin. Are we gonna discuss my reply speed or are we gonna get that battle underway? You don't have to stall for time. I mean, you already had 12 lines prewritten didn't you? So my record isn't 73-4? Is that what you're insinuating? Do I have to prove my claims?

03-04-2014, 05:16 PM	#55
Saila Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2014 Posts: 179 Rep Power: 32	Are you serious? lol you can't take my word for it?

03-04-2014, 06:26 PM	#57
Saila Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2014 Posts: 179 Rep Power: 32	Run? I literally lift my arm slightly, phone in hand, and type. Just cuz you rock a Commodore 64, doesn't mean we all live in the 80s. I shall say it clearly now. Set, up, the, battle, thread. My, verse, is, ready, to, be, posted. Stop ducking