Netcees  

Go Back   Netcees > Forum > Open Mic Section
Register FAQ Community Calendar Today's Posts Search

User Tag List

Reply
 
Thread Tools Display Modes
Old 10-23-2013, 03:13 AM   #561
e11even
V.V
 
e11even's Avatar
 
Join Date: Sep 2013
Location: .
Posts: 2,076
Battle Record: 31-20



Rep Power: 6247259
e11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant future
Default

A ronin ruling through dueling in fuedal japan... yes, I'm the nuisance bruising muses who imbue you with chance... movements so brutal should be reviewed as a ruthless advance, 'cause tutoring pupils at hand to hand is seducing the damned... into producing a clan moving like 20 van dammes. While you scream your blood marys, I marry kitanas with hands.
__________________
Ahem.
e11even is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-23-2013, 03:58 PM   #562
Mr. J
The Clown Prince
 
Mr. J's Avatar
 
Join Date: Apr 2013
Posts: 5,046
Battle Record: 35-45


Champed
- Art of Writing League

Rep Power: 59349682
Mr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant future
Default

Got a pet named banana hands
that loves to rape. damn traffic jams
tight...sounds like Lil Kim
on the roof squeeze a fiddle in
__________________
.....laugh....and the world laughs with you
Mr. J is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-24-2013, 12:06 AM   #563
CopyPat
Mic Check
 
CopyPat's Avatar
 
Join Date: Mar 2013
Location: Calgary Alberta Canada
Posts: 708
Battle Record: 13-10



Rep Power: 3742225
CopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant future
Send a message via AIM to CopyPat
Default

When ive had a couple beers in me, i rap a couple lyrics g
Pass the fuckin spirits we smashin up, im cheersin these
Had enough its seriously effecting my livelihood
I step in the cypher just textin this rhymin good
Excellence minus the wackness when i spit, yup
Precedents? I’m just ..Standard with the sick stuff
Canon with a big gun, blastin on a victim
Pats the one with wisdom, perhaps you dumb as shit son
Jacked, im on some fist pump tiger woods style
Rappin honest, this bruh kinda good... wow
__________________
My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.
CopyPat is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-24-2013, 01:39 AM   #564
e11even
V.V
 
e11even's Avatar
 
Join Date: Sep 2013
Location: .
Posts: 2,076
Battle Record: 31-20



Rep Power: 6247259
e11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant future
Default

lionesses get this tiger wood... driving long strokes in rough.
At her back 9, she knows I putt. Tee it cuz God put a hole in one.
birdie likes the greens chewed... caddied sack, mean too...
balls deep, every hole... Arnold Palmers when we through.
__________________
Ahem.
e11even is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-24-2013, 01:41 AM   #565
Mr. J
The Clown Prince
 
Mr. J's Avatar
 
Join Date: Apr 2013
Posts: 5,046
Battle Record: 35-45


Champed
- Art of Writing League

Rep Power: 59349682
Mr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant future
Default

I'm the type to cook loud your more like the look out
the kind that tries to keep it straight. but I'm lying rooks down
got knights that hand out L's when I decide...
why should I provide proof clown...keep silent look proud!
Looking sideways get a bish op'd to get took down
time to get the rhyming books out
__________________
.....laugh....and the world laughs with you
Mr. J is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-24-2013, 02:14 AM   #566
e11even
V.V
 
e11even's Avatar
 
Join Date: Sep 2013
Location: .
Posts: 2,076
Battle Record: 31-20



Rep Power: 6247259
e11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant future
Default the irony of a sponge.

ARE YOU READY, KIDS?!!
AYE, AYE, VAG MAN!!!
I CAN'T HEAR YOU!!!
AYE, AYE, VAG MAN!!!

oOOoOOOoOoOOoOOOoOoooOoOoOOoOOh....

There once lived a woman who had a disease...(5'5" Fat Pam!!)
Who let all the fungus get down to her knees...(5'5" Fat Pam!!)
If there was a request you ever could wish...(5'5" Fat Pam!!)
Would it be that you hadn't slept with that bitch?! (5'5" Fat Pam!!) Ready??
(5'5" Fat Pam!! 5'5" Fat Pam!! 5'5" Fat Pam!! 5'5"--- Fat Paaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaam!!!)
__________________
Ahem.

Last edited by e11even; 10-24-2013 at 02:15 AM. Reason: title
e11even is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-24-2013, 03:11 AM   #567
Nahhh
Member
 
Nahhh's Avatar
 
Join Date: Oct 2013
Posts: 82




Rep Power: 5533
Nahhh has a brilliant futureNahhh has a brilliant futureNahhh has a brilliant futureNahhh has a brilliant futureNahhh has a brilliant futureNahhh has a brilliant futureNahhh has a brilliant futureNahhh has a brilliant futureNahhh has a brilliant futureNahhh has a brilliant futureNahhh has a brilliant future
Default

I won't let these locos with low self esteem,
Try to tell me I can't reach, my goals nigga please
Save the negavitiy to a medicore who gives a whole
Fuck for your opinions i'ma be a legend if
u believe me or not so, god flow mentioned with
Jay-Z,Eminem, Biggie yeah all those.
Nahhh is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-24-2013, 05:54 AM   #568
e11even
V.V
 
e11even's Avatar
 
Join Date: Sep 2013
Location: .
Posts: 2,076
Battle Record: 31-20



Rep Power: 6247259
e11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant future
Default

Compute: my boot> your chute> you're mute.
More proof you're goof, warn troops you're cooch.
Mourn who? You're poofed... your hooved whore too.
More goose? Pour two!!! Gourd juice bored you.

I'm drunk..... I think.
__________________
Ahem.
e11even is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-24-2013, 01:15 PM   #569
Concrete
Senior Member
 
Concrete's Avatar
 
Join Date: Oct 2013
Location: Oslo
Posts: 179
Battle Record: 5-0



Rep Power: 2158978
Concrete has a brilliant futureConcrete has a brilliant futureConcrete has a brilliant futureConcrete has a brilliant futureConcrete has a brilliant futureConcrete has a brilliant futureConcrete has a brilliant futureConcrete has a brilliant futureConcrete has a brilliant futureConcrete has a brilliant futureConcrete has a brilliant future
Default

I plant all the mushrooms down the pipe simply to emanate a gloomy mist
my mood shifts as this odyssey evolve into a looney trip, on some spooky shit
it seems I am seized in an infinite maze - I would prefer to leave this vigilant place
my mind is tripping in a dissonant state, my feet skips to harmonize intricate traces
seeking to reach the gate, I contemplate if Bowser or the grim reaper awaits
the steep plates seemingly sealed my fate, jumping to conclusions like leaps of faith
feeling baked, eyeballing disfigured features epitomizing these creeping creatures
my need for reefer is getting deeper, the very reason I jump on all these sad souls
I came from left to right, in a game of death or life - the very end is a flag pole
Concrete is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-24-2013, 02:58 PM   #570
e11even
V.V
 
e11even's Avatar
 
Join Date: Sep 2013
Location: .
Posts: 2,076
Battle Record: 31-20



Rep Power: 6247259
e11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant future
Default

you know me; shinobi with blade
hattori hanzo's on me, homie- male uma zoomin your way...
corrosive fumes consumed in my wake- the plumes exude from my brain
the ooze poisons... black mamba bombing your crew, excuses decay...
__________________
Ahem.
e11even is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-27-2013, 08:43 AM   #571
ribbit
The deputy of nc
 
ribbit's Avatar
 
Join Date: Sep 2013
Location: The Rodent Kingdom
Posts: 514
Battle Record: 1-10



Rep Power: 7784053
ribbit has a brilliant futureribbit has a brilliant futureribbit has a brilliant futureribbit has a brilliant futureribbit has a brilliant futureribbit has a brilliant futureribbit has a brilliant futureribbit has a brilliant futureribbit has a brilliant futureribbit has a brilliant futureribbit has a brilliant future
Default

Signed on to netcees and searched the site and the lobbies
Needed a reason i cant explain purpose find me some alimony
This branch demonic my post amphebean this novice is still inebreate
The public allowed to observe for their viewing pleasure this consecrate
I provided a link to the thread with substantial proof consuming his regrets
Couldn't pick up the pace since he lost his connection with diligence
Who cares if your not impressed cuz I'm dropping this on the net
Splitting his head like melons call me implants they keep bouncing checks
ribbit is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-29-2013, 07:29 PM   #572
Mr. J
The Clown Prince
 
Mr. J's Avatar
 
Join Date: Apr 2013
Posts: 5,046
Battle Record: 35-45


Champed
- Art of Writing League

Rep Power: 59349682
Mr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant future
Default

Whether your emotionally drained, opponents get slain
there's potency in the claims, I'm chokin' the flow to the brain
black out, keep reachin' for the wall, let me know it's today
that you approach, boast, I turn these ghosts into haze
smoke em', elopin' with fate, take the high road on your high horse
just make sure you don't run into my flow where I course
anyone who object keep their mind moving with my force
just getting on off for the time being, sublime treason
with my pen ready to leak whenever I feel I need it...
__________________
.....laugh....and the world laughs with you
Mr. J is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-29-2013, 08:33 PM   #573
e11even
V.V
 
e11even's Avatar
 
Join Date: Sep 2013
Location: .
Posts: 2,076
Battle Record: 31-20



Rep Power: 6247259
e11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant future
Default

Certified chief, sent to nullify beef...
They want the mad cow, bullshit is all these flies see.
Audify all these rhymes- notice I beast...
Personified more than why morgues need ID.
Tear these foes extra assholes- bets for cash flow...
Tetris, these low level squares too slow ta match bro.
Spazz shit, strike like matchsticks- send techs like castrol,
I'm an astrisk, fit your casket- death's your tax toll.
__________________
Ahem.
e11even is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-29-2013, 09:55 PM   #574
Mr. J
The Clown Prince
 
Mr. J's Avatar
 
Join Date: Apr 2013
Posts: 5,046
Battle Record: 35-45


Champed
- Art of Writing League

Rep Power: 59349682
Mr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant future
Default

Compost heap from the cons so sweet
peep game cyclops and a monocle beam
froggie? so leap as I frogger your dreams
crossin those streets hoppin yo streams
Irritation on board with topical cream
__________________
.....laugh....and the world laughs with you
Mr. J is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-29-2013, 11:43 PM   #575
Split
.
 
Join Date: Aug 2013
Posts: 8,898
Battle Record: 27-22



Rep Power: 85899399
Split has a reputation beyond reputeSplit has a reputation beyond reputeSplit has a reputation beyond reputeSplit has a reputation beyond reputeSplit has a reputation beyond reputeSplit has a reputation beyond reputeSplit has a reputation beyond reputeSplit has a reputation beyond reputeSplit has a reputation beyond reputeSplit has a reputation beyond reputeSplit has a reputation beyond repute
Default

sketching contrasting motifs, metal scraps in the heap
treaded a pasture of sheets, white as alive,
phantasms in reach of the silent survived.
__________________
http://split8.yolasite.com
Split is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-30-2013, 12:03 AM   #576
Wise Wiggles
nok Su kow
 
Wise Wiggles's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 4,505
Battle Record: 1-1



Rep Power: 51788022
Wise Wiggles has a brilliant futureWise Wiggles has a brilliant futureWise Wiggles has a brilliant futureWise Wiggles has a brilliant futureWise Wiggles has a brilliant futureWise Wiggles has a brilliant futureWise Wiggles has a brilliant futureWise Wiggles has a brilliant futureWise Wiggles has a brilliant futureWise Wiggles has a brilliant futureWise Wiggles has a brilliant future
Default

Sand blasts on the beach. You see it, but can't ask if it's me?
This place is a wash.. All the way to the ant-acids in bleach
I match slabs at the feet, that is, if they have the mark
Last try.. these black eyes hide the sign after dark
__________________
"black as midnight..black as pitch
blacker than the soul of the foulest witch"
Wise Wiggles is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-30-2013, 03:05 AM   #577
e11even
V.V
 
e11even's Avatar
 
Join Date: Sep 2013
Location: .
Posts: 2,076
Battle Record: 31-20



Rep Power: 6247259
e11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant future
Default

The sign of a mark- no design in his marks.
He'd whine and remark, with no rhyme or rhythm to why he's at heart,
With all these lines that he starts, lying, when he's miming his LARPs...
When IRL, wishing he'd die in the mart with a nine he was trying to spark...



... at glass, too much a fag to ever let fly a few darts.
__________________
Ahem.
e11even is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-30-2013, 06:37 PM   #578
Mr. J
The Clown Prince
 
Mr. J's Avatar
 
Join Date: Apr 2013
Posts: 5,046
Battle Record: 35-45


Champed
- Art of Writing League

Rep Power: 59349682
Mr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant future
Default

Keep a secret deeper than the sea get
the meanest since Run DMC, the cleanest
stepped on the set to the point my jeans ripped
leaned it, with a clean grill, syrup sippin'
with more than enough heart to make sure ya listen
not enough cash so I left the proof of purchase missin'
snuck out more than I could carry, caught, rarely
skeletons in the closet with my emotions buried
just another spirit amongst me, itchin' like a junkie
to find somethin' above me, til' things got ugly
I escaped the process, like a immigrant to the country
it bugs me, how real I am but no one seems to love me
fuck that, I know I'm nice, so you bitches want to fuck me
__________________
.....laugh....and the world laughs with you
Mr. J is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-31-2013, 04:14 AM   #579
e11even
V.V
 
e11even's Avatar
 
Join Date: Sep 2013
Location: .
Posts: 2,076
Battle Record: 31-20



Rep Power: 6247259
e11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant futuree11even has a brilliant future
Default

Ummm no.
You are a scholar. I, aspiring, will never let the bum show.
Malice sipped from my chalice as I flick chips at staged chimps while I sit front row.
Dumbed dope...
but never cut, well, maybe by those so-ghetto sluts I dunked pro.
I was never the one, sat in class rear, plottin on Pam Greers, on my study flow.
A nerd's pain made me gung-ho,
You picked on me. I pick a pen up, til what's pent up shivs up n' cuts throats.
Never to slack, I go forever and back, barrettas in raps, each letter a trap to he who's slung coke.
Fuck it, i'm done yo.
__________________
Ahem.
e11even is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-31-2013, 11:26 AM   #580
Split
.
 
Join Date: Aug 2013
Posts: 8,898
Battle Record: 27-22



Rep Power: 85899399
Split has a reputation beyond reputeSplit has a reputation beyond reputeSplit has a reputation beyond reputeSplit has a reputation beyond reputeSplit has a reputation beyond reputeSplit has a reputation beyond reputeSplit has a reputation beyond reputeSplit has a reputation beyond reputeSplit has a reputation beyond reputeSplit has a reputation beyond reputeSplit has a reputation beyond repute
Default

i don't dissect frogs. i dissect conics, and spherics,
appearance in songs, correspondence- APPEARANCE,
get this consonance in conduit and harmonics in series,
Im live. circle survive. music, mused amused disappearing,
rewriting the stick-ups, the verdicts, surprise- mute confusion reviewed and televised as life.
none of these points I made were relevant, important,
but you'll still approve and nullify my ascensions as intelligible lies
with all due accordance
Split is offline   Reply With Quote
Reply

Tags
aero is successful in life, billion syllable syllabus, comanchero, dexlabb infinte whackness, fig didn't make this tag, fig made this tag, frank stoppable hof, gillionaire girls club, i also made that tag - fig, if frank aint hof, lars absolute fire, no pacifier, premature, sinacog is a great writer


Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is On

Forum Jump


All times are GMT -4. The time now is 05:55 AM.


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.5
Copyright ©2000 - 2025, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
User Alert System provided by Advanced User Tagging (Lite) - vBulletin Mods & Addons Copyright © 2025 DragonByte Technologies Ltd.
Google+