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Old 10-17-2013, 08:09 PM   #541
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and your so vain....I bet you think I'm talking about you :)

Who could paint a picture better than I
get your schooling sport, keep the Letterman dry
late night yokels getting vocal..
remaining local, brainstorms weathered with hype
get jettisoned alive...keep your regiment right
I been told em' but I never complied
never follow through to keep sentiments high
waving a white flag, let the jealousies rise
the penalties mine, so I keep it off side
walk, ride, better than all their thought's com-bined
binary code, sitting at the library stoned
while I keep writing in a monetary tone
change the concept, keeping commentary slow
take weeks to do what I've done
days to subdue the flow that I'm from
do you even have a clue...nah...I'm done
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Old 10-18-2013, 02:44 AM   #542
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Irrelevant rants of irreverent fancy.
Celebacy dances each bean served from the pantry.
He's stern and its handy... then he's Stern, getting handies...
Boot spurs n' pulpit stirs... all that purrs throws V the panties.
Goons wait in the bush... his gorrillas in the damn trees...
Ambushing for scalps like a brush with a bad case of some man fleas.
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i'm building the cold into a cabin of freeze.
peaches courted in trees...
Georgia is King- James dethroned in his atticus sleep,
forts sing of pillows and mazes of z's.
sadness, what motivates pages to crease.
stone abodes for crosses in roads.
paths padded alone along with lowercase T's.
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Old 10-18-2013, 01:16 PM   #544
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enigmatic climactics baffooning the actives...
enslaving their bias and making them passive.
influencing flavors and taking them captive.
watching the tantalized minds as they backflip...
this sorta distraction's afforded of masked men,
repititive reading like sundays with catholics..
more narrative loudness than mosaics for baptists.
fantasies made of this fashion in asterisks.
roleplayers the real fakers of passion.
alternate faces, this take on travolta/cage action.
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Old 10-18-2013, 05:10 PM   #545
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I, dance with mediocrity..honestly
too advanced for backlash or common themes
excessive philosophies...
I'm exhuming the tomb of Socrates
looking for doom, illusionist properties
light a match & bring the reflections
I'm horsing around with Pegasus wings protection
poisoning kingdoms with my lower sink collection..
good day gov'nor love the heads on the shelf
I swear some of them should get some help
trying to put this cat next to a loose string
mood swings, what do you think?
doesn't matter..sorry...old game..
new Atari..old mechanics, shout out to Marty
think McFly...think
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Old 10-18-2013, 05:19 PM   #546
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I appear to be peering through peerless eyes...
Fearless and tearless, sparring where the tierless rise...
Don't get speared, you spirited queer- this time
the revered get reared as children in kind...

get in gear as I grind.
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Old 10-19-2013, 01:20 AM   #547
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I'm a hybrid licensed to kill with silence
sultry of private seats. privacy and quiet dreams
quietly blinded but awake behind my eyelids
crying. laughing. surprises hide in the climate
I'm as..confused as you another useless tool
presumed as truth but consumed by youth
reckless mutes can view but what they used to spew
is muttered from beneath King Koopas drool
the pit that brewed this pool. a brute loosened screws
fall into it and consume the fluid
and keep any further disputes 100 proof and cool
chilled and away from open flame
Jump high enough for a close escape
like I really care what posers say
Am I supposed to play or close the drain
and let all the work they did soak away
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Old 10-19-2013, 12:22 PM   #548
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This link my second cypher post it ain't depend or intend to admire shire folk
Entering a fight night sign up thread competition ill prepared for a dire loss
Then as I march on daily debating this challenger and it urks me daily
If u thought you advance I'd be like slim Detroit city is too fuckin shady
Fuckin commented in sum dicussion with bags stiil love blowin his hankie
And nigga don't complain cuz u can't find a win in this tournament
Cuz fuck the cypher ill take the belt don't bother defending innocence
Kid talks shit like his crew is tight and people keep him in such high regards
question ya credentials bags and wonder why half ya life behind my bars
I'm eager to fuk ya while your grandmothers worlds dissipate
It's so fuckin distasteful I just cancelled my subscription to sports illustrated
Your probably consumed by anger seething about this cypher post
Ur compelled by text, voters are speculating and bidding on the entire stock

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Old 10-19-2013, 10:05 PM   #549
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Not exactly...
These wack niggas tryna cuff HoF like Officer McCaffrey...
Partnered up with a half-me, they still lose badly to this demonic halfbreed.
Iceberg principle... you only know what you CAN see.
Til you get scraped and sink in a flow of titanic proportion... like a Leo & Cam piece.
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Old 10-21-2013, 12:53 PM   #550
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Fractal image imagine the fact you did it
To act as if you had fashion senses
abstract patterns that match the limit
of thread counts that surpassed the stitches
I'm laughing bitches. With that King flow
Nat King Cole blasting celebrating sink holes
this is Sparta and my hands are distinct growths
that smash on anyone who even thinks thrones
you bring hos. I bring shovels and a linked note
a sickle wrapped around a chain letter
your chain whatever but my chain is better
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Old 10-22-2013, 01:38 AM   #551
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I got my platoon on Tattooine ready to blast you fiends envisioning fractal dreams as I crack through *creak* with no actual theme I make the contrast you breathe. too fast to think too brash to blink let me ask who bleeds when the facts you see wreck and crash new feats its only factual you leave. don't back Bruce Lee unless you understand words of wisdom I turn the difference. burn the prism and unearthed a Christian for a second birth then disturbed his mission by curving his worthless henchmen. you deserve to listen when I butter up and churn the system that the churches give em.
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Old 10-22-2013, 01:53 AM   #552
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the worst decision was to step to me. really? i'm successfully killing records, exceptionally illy. mentally thrilling to those involved, essentially chilling.. my flows is all stretched and be sitting, just dozing off, resting. forgetting to mow the lawn, texting a bitty..or phone its mom, my texting is chilling.. i told u all.
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Old 10-22-2013, 02:32 AM   #553
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You couldn't decipher the cypher to find out the Alumni
the teacher of Puns heighth til his tongue would run dry
deliver punchlines or combine emotions with metaphorical genius
Most writers jump high enough to land on my metaphorical penis
Skyscrapers and such. take an Al Queda plane to crush my erection
Send my haters some love. I know who really loves my collections
who dug my respected...ground zero...drug dealer I pound heroines
Surround narrowed trends and surpass the doubt they barreled in
peep the news Herald and put your ads in the classifieds
that's the only way you could catch a fast clap tonight
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asinine. pats the guy who pass the mic. ill sick, cancer rhymes. kill kids, can't survive. still spit past you guys. real shit. ask advice. my skill set magnified real big when havin Ny-quil sips. that is why filled with data my fingertips vana white. always got the answer when i still flip random style
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Greeted with a phantom smile. acting wild slapping the baddest child then hand his style back with his purse. act absurd like its a man's concern one punch will send him to Jupiter til he crashes back to earth
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Bastards- this hazard's birth was blasphemy to the baptist church... still laughed when the holy water splashed his shirt. no ass as curt as u fags will live ta harass in verse. two mags on that ass when this clap dispersed... reimbursed for the acts of being trash when bags should have suffocated ur dads 'fore he could hatch you currs. So brash how i dispatch you turds...
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Sittin in my couch i'm thinking bout this bitch that
Snatched my cash off my house woww hoes yo
Souls pitch black with no care so sick man
i blasted a nut but i guess cash chewed her interest
Bitch,Bitch, Tramp ! i'll hang you up in a bridge,
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I snap the nerve then relapse on herbs as they contact the earth if the mother feel it..its the contractions that would match the hearse pain from added girth knowing that this flaccid hurts. Ima grasp the world and that Atlas hurled into this galactic whirl. Another fractured pearl I rest my tongue on...GET AT IT GIRL I'm the dude with the magic twirled in his stick like a duck screw..FUCK YOU..FUCK YOU...YOUR COOL...FUCK YOU I'M OUT...the fuck you bout? Full frontal doubt couldnt have sprung you out..wrung you out of the wonderful drought added with that 1 2 bounce
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I better not see you i'll feed you cheddar
with a rope hanging around your necklace
give u a rich death the scene in my head warms
my heart
i better not see u
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I'm the henny cooker sipping flame and renting hookers
that come off the top just like Jimny Snuka
see where the penny took ya..you still slaves
Still blazed as it hits like Wolverine in a steel cage
Freddy Kruger with Eww face. I have an ill taste
that mankind couldn't undertake give the dude love
new blood to a new glove looking for practice at...
my little humble abode you get the ***tus jack?
pins and needles with flow that stings and feeds you
keeping their love on call like two distant people
that's when this mistress meets you...
with her big brother too pissed to greet you
but he shakes your hand and POOF
you and the other clown live as equals
deep where the lie in the myths cathedral
shiiiiiit this shit is lethal
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