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Old 10-04-2013, 06:23 PM   #1
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denying the end only to supply the eyes to the head
add prize to attempt, everyone wins, losers die & then...
silence, quiet enough to open your own mind with
try it, try has no purpose, do does if you apply it
if has no purpose, we all see what happens on the surface...
perfect, flaws are transparent, neutrality
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Old 10-05-2013, 01:01 AM   #2
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the finality of deaths taken my breath
i can't see between the lines to take a step
mistaken the depth for room to wiggle
tried to fine myself a little, tried to make some spittle
my mouth is dry though. cant comply to notes i never wrote
just sit back and act like i dont see the world dying
its beyond trying to counteract it
just behind the counter active, subtracting brain cells
where the pain dwells hits with tomahawks
soon my heart'll stop, but it's not beyond the drop
or where the whole world listens
the pearl still glistens and tells me it's allright
up all night. where could have i gone right.
i'll never know.
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Old 10-05-2013, 06:54 PM   #3
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Once, I wrote a song. That song was clear and concise. I never recorded said song, so I'm not sure calling it a song would be wise. I mean, what is a song? Is it a metaphor for the scheming I'll give to this written to pretend it has meaning? A song can be a bird. Which can be a middle finger. A middle finger can be a prong, or a substitution for a wiener. That's neither here, nor there. So where is it? Does it have no place to find relevance? I just blither and blather. You'll find no intelligence, but you'll lap it up, so long as I say it with eloquence. Not to lend that label to this crap, this is just me sitting at a table to chit chat. It's painful I'm this drab.
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Old 10-06-2013, 12:22 PM   #4
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Sooner or later Im gonna take her heart, sooner or later she gonna taste my charge, musical vapors are gonna fade my scars. Tubular, blaming you's gonna save my start. Moving the graves, musical blades are gonna play her harp
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Old 10-06-2013, 12:31 PM   #5
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Sooner or later Im gonna take her heart, sooner or later she gonna taste my charge, musical vapors are gonna fade my scars. Tubular, blaming you's gonna save my start. Moving the graves, musical blades are gonna play her harp
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Old 10-06-2013, 03:03 PM   #6
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Old 10-06-2013, 12:36 PM   #7
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I said cotdam.
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Old 10-06-2013, 02:18 PM   #8
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I used to tell myself I had a purpose. Ashing the Turkish
Axe for murders. The slabs were perfect. Amity's burning
I used to tell myself the mask was working. Hatchet? Sure thing
See the ad in person. Casual merchant. Casket's murky
Couple stabs for purchase. Chalkcaison, stock raving mad n'lurking
Boo'ing, doing communities an actual service
No surprise it's cold & dry when I'm attacking the cervix

Fuck this dead body shit
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Old 10-07-2013, 12:10 AM   #9
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I spit the rhymes sickest bruhs, rhythmically its over
I’m vilified, ill enough to spit diseases broseph
I live my life as if i’m drunk, but physically i’m sober
This is why getting fucked literally is bolder
I fill my time clicking smut, littering the folder
Cause the bitch in Whys sig is just giving me a boner
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Old 10-07-2013, 05:06 AM   #10
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literary astute- rarely favors a brute
this lawrence taylor, rebuked, is prepared to anchor your route.
the pointless bantor's enamored not, still I claim what is due.
annointed hammer, this can of pop'll spill saint outta you.
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Old 10-07-2013, 07:06 PM   #11
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I unearth the momentum lost by the whole spectrum
render my profession to the point it see's no ending
seasoned with some Hendrix, high strung dependants
no longer seizing the lessons, seeing the connections
now you need a infection thats complete with an injection
to believe you can compete or even be interjected
introducing...introspective direction directed to the heading
destroying your body of work with the force of a jet engine
eclectic, lacking directive but enjoying chaos in my section
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Old 10-08-2013, 11:08 PM   #12
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Safety raised me in the same sheath
waiting to take me in to make the brain leak
80s baby chasing the casing
erasing the fakeness thats changing
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Old 10-11-2013, 12:51 AM   #13
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Albeit chaotic, witness the life of Johnny Neurotic
Castatrophic losses of knowledge due to stresses so chronic
Addressed as an assessment of longing to be part of a bonding
Taking place between favorites of a society tarnished.
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Old 10-11-2013, 01:02 AM   #14
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Lugubrious, today I wanna rhyme with lugubrious
And lay back and play hacky sack wit sum peruvians
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...who maneuver in my room using them lubricants...
succulent juices run loose from them as I use two again.
Channeling my inner Lucifer... each succubus once a confucionist.
Dedicated to the conclusion: to lose their virtuous sense...
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Part of the dispute, sometimes it's harder to rip through
impossible to get to, the mind alone leaves illogical tissue
phenomenal, I get in quick while holding the carvers ginsu
aquatical menu, raw form from back to forward...horrible issue
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Old 10-11-2013, 06:04 PM   #17
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Ran rampant in my absence sippin' absinthe
spittin' past tense wrapped in delirium & traction
slippin' back then..slippin' back in
wet as passion gaspin' for air, graspin'...
simple terms, little worm get your symbols burnt
quit it jerk there's no war down in middle earth
just fickle blurts of sarcasm & potential worse
I release a gentle burp that send sentinels first
automatic reaction blastin' out of a boom box
tone it down a bit bastard I hold the key and the tomb locks
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My subconscious could jump up on this
shed light on your shame, no one ups or tips
making it harder for you to come up with concepts
don't trip, I been the one up in all this..
spreading seedlings breathing on these heathens
beating my meat and reading the recents
sweeping and cleaning up house without reason
believe it
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i make deer skins outta terms of endearment
turns of that queer shit make weird dicks appear to be reared sick
nahhh... they were born that way... on some lady gaga 'songs of the year' shit...
hearing AIDS in all my bars makes these nigga's gf's not wanna hear SHIT...
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Orangatangs & plantains... its all the same ta you
Heinous duke- aint gotta embrace a racist's noose ta hang with you
claim a troop, then i'mma napalm anus, tooth, dick, nape n' boob
tenacious half jamaican lookin satan scrapin take of who???
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