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Old 01-29-2014, 07:33 AM   #1
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"You've got to jump off cliffs and build your wings on the way down." - Ray Bradbury



Boarding the bus to the Bolivian boarder. Paul Wessler and his wife Cynthia Dora
City New Yorkers
Visiting Cynthia's grandparents who live up in the misty asphyxia forest
The view to the Pacific Ocean through the window a dingy, distorted,
Bugsplattered peripheral vision: playing trivia - bored: winding through cliffier corners,

"Isn't it gorgeous?" My wife says with her hand out the window into, dampening, misty breeze
The pampering bristled seats. The bathroom; blue liquid.
Cynthia's cramping-
Hampering visibility... the bus rams through the steep lands vicinity.
"The City of La Pas" 16,000 feet through jungles grand ambiguity
A single lane road.
'built during the Chaco war by Paraguayan prisoners"
Says Dan. The Bus driver, understanding of the Hispanic history, which has spanned
And interweaved into the mountain side without an amp of electricity.
No guard rails to cram or squish this street.
The Yunga road in San Pedro is the most dangerous road on our planet driven
We record from our cam the distant sea -- An attention span of disbelief --
We figiditly film the road known for 300 deaths; overran in infinity
The markings on the muddy track where sedans and vans swam into thick of trees
Where vehicles had fallen - and landed despicably - there'd be something planted in the proximity
"To the damned and their dignity"
The tanning humidity had fanned considerably, the cool altiplano terrain was damp and drizzly -
Daniel said to Timothy, A young man who had trouble breathing -
"Expand"
he didn't wheeze
Hypoxias: the result of being at high altitudes, and clamming: constrictively

Cynth and me look at each other,

Wham the sympathy

Dan slams the breaks and the bus skids down the ramp slippery...

Cynthia cramps miserably.
..
The tractions began rhythmically
..
The whole bus takes a second glance under the circumstances wistfully.
..
The traction began rickety
..
The Bus is in a jam officially -
Dan waves everybody off the bus, unsure of he can, the width, it seems,
Too narrow, he shifts, with trans am agility- sandy, minerally
Cynthia contracts, her last chance at fertility.
The Bus drops sheer off -
Daniel Divinity
Cynthia contracts again, but she can't, she misconceived.







Gas from Burrito grande XL, her diaphragm disagreed.














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