Post your first ever battle verse and your most recent

[anime_boners]

i wish my first verses still existed somewhere :(

dom is streetverbalz vs rapworlds archived anywhere?

[Sn00p]

@Dominate...I warned you.

vs. Faze.

faze look at your sig, your bones showin', skinnier than Lindsay Lohan/
he needs to gain some weight, stop crying, you're eyes red, you're fed with fame?/
change your font, red is the color of menstruation and periods like the one in his name/
this guy'll be officially fazed after this lines/
cause mine, they even rhyme/
but he oughta know what rhymin' is/
comin' straight outta oxford, here to diss/
me, I'll help you out, maybe call me "Kraut"/
I'm german, that means I'm allowed/
to murder you too, why? we've always been the sick killers, duh/

[Dominate]

@Sn00p HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. At the start I was like "ehh this isn't that bad...OK menstruation line is played..." Then it got to "cause mine they even rhyme" and I'm like "uhh no they don't" and then by the end it was roflz. When did you drop that?
@anime_boners - smh @ that name, go back to "a desk" lol. And nah I'm pretty sure those battles are lost in the deep recesses of the interwebs forevahhhh

[Sn00p]

Originally Posted by Dominate

@Sn00p HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. At the start I was like "ehh this isn't that bad...OK menstruation line is played..." Then it got to "cause mine they even rhyme" and I'm like "uhh no they don't" and then by the end it was roflz. When did you drop that?

It's all internal rhymes. See:

faze look at your sig, your bones showin', skinnier than Lindsay Lohan/
he needs to gain some weight, stop crying, you're eyes red, you're fed with fame?/
change your font, red is the color of menstruation and periods like the one in his name/
this guy'll be officially fazed after this lines/
cause mine, they even rhyme/
but he oughta know what rhymin' is/
comin' straight outta oxford, here to diss/
me, I'll help you out, maybe call me "Kraut"/
I'm german, that means I'm allowed/
to murder you too, why? we've always been the sick killers, duh/

Yes, at that time I thought too rhymes with duh. Don't ask why. It was in '09.

[Fart]

My first text battles are gone along with goldmic :l when it was openmic forums...01 or 02
But they might not be worse than some posted in here lmfao.

[Sn00p]

Originally Posted by Dominate

Ya hair only stands on end to escape the unwholesome stench/
And the blue colour it’s turned? Well hell, it’s holding its breath!/

dead at unwholesome stench

[Dominate]

ahaha I remember being really pleased with myself for that concept... rofl so lame

[Sn00p]

Originally Posted by Dominate

ahaha I remember being really pleased with myself for that concept... rofl so lame

But yours, they even rhyme!

[Flow]

Originally Posted by namix

lol, that actually made me laugh tbh

Not always a good thing lol

[anime_boners]

Originally Posted by Dominate

@Sn00p HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. At the start I was like "ehh this isn't that bad...OK menstruation line is played..." Then it got to "cause mine they even rhyme" and I'm like "uhh no they don't" and then by the end it was roflz. When did you drop that?
@anime_boners - smh @ that name, go back to "a desk" lol. And nah I'm pretty sure those battles are lost in the deep recesses of the interwebs forevahhhh

damn. i know SV's archives are forever lost, wasn't sure if RW had any remnants left

roflz.. I'm both mad and amused that you remember "a desk" lolol

[namix]

Originally Posted by Flo Real

Not always a good thing lol

lol - no doubt, no doubt

but hey , i started right as "cum lines" were finally being considered played out -- but that was followed by about two more years of cum line flips about cum line flips being played ('concepts so played, ya verses have more cum lines than ya bed does', shit like that lol).

all the dudes that relied on cum lines then switched to dick/mouth punches -- so i just seen so many hella bad flips that this one actually got a chuckle outta me lol

'put my dick in ya mouth, only time i care what comes out' - haha, it's like one of those rare cases where the simplicity of the delivery actually helps give a real played concept a glimmer of hope.

but nooo doubt bro

the punch obviously wasnt jaw dropping (and i bet his opponent wasn't either lol)

[Flow]

Originally Posted by namix

lol - no doubt, no doubt

but hey , i started right as "cum lines" were finally being considered played out -- but that was followed by about two more years of cum line flips about cum line flips being played ('concepts so played, ya verses have more cum lines than ya bed does', shit like that lol).

all the dudes that relied on cum lines then switched to dick/mouth punches -- so i just seen so many hella bad flips that this one actually got a chuckle outta me lol

'put my dick in ya mouth, only time i care what comes out' - haha, it's like one of those rare cases where the simplicity of the delivery actually helps give a real played concept a glimmer of hope.

but nooo doubt bro

the punch obviously wasnt jaw dropping (and i bet his opponent wasn't either lol)

Sadly It is probably better then half the stuff I have these days haha
Just re read that drop you had in the UW chat... That shits dope dude.

[namix]

Originally Posted by Flo Real

Sadly It is probably better then half the stuff I have these days haha
Just re read that drop you had in the UW chat... That shits dope dude.

lol hey man, don't sell yourself short, i peeped your UW drop and you keep that flow pretty tight all throughout -- you also got a rise outta me with that toy story punch specifically lol -- i appreciated your elaboration on the analogy, you tied a lot together to build on top of the concept (it is admittedly one of those punches that certain readers might not appreciate as much as others - but the concept was funny and the expansion on it added a layer of 'complexity' that made it legit to me)

and thanks a lot for the feed on the key brotha - its one of those hidden drops that im pretty sure only 3 people have seen, only you and i have read, and Sn00p moved haha.

[Flow]

Originally Posted by namix

lol hey man, don't sell yourself short, i peeped your UW drop and you keep that flow pretty tight all throughout -- you also got a rise outta me with that toy story punch specifically lol -- i appreciated your elaboration on the analogy, you tied a lot together to build on top of the concept (it is admittedly one of those punches that certain readers might not appreciate as much as others - but the concept was funny and the expansion on it added a layer of 'complexity' that made it legit to me)

and thanks a lot for the feed on the key brotha - its one of those hidden drops that im pretty sure only 3 people have seen, only you and i have read, and Sn00p moved haha.

lol glad that it wasnt lost on you. I had the concept but after 6 different ways of wording it I just gave up. I spend about as long as you do analyzing the punches trying to write one.

Haha more people will see it when it comes to bitching about why no one understood there concepts or some shit

Lol... wow... here's mine
this guy aint a monster, all he is a Rat-O-Min(e)
this guy couldnt be hot, even if he sat on nines
i burn rats and turn gats on those who challenge Methodical
i urn quacks and churn caps at min cuz his loss is probable
he better not want a W cause im handing him L's
open up a can of whoop ass, like im canning him belts
this dude couldnt win "rounds" if he was a compact disc
im gonna flatten his record, because ima stomp on him
ill tear out this guys horns and stab him right in the eyes
think again before you have another open challenge, you might be surprised

[fenix osiris]

topical...

very first topical battle - about two years ago

Self Inflicted, Written for SS vs KnowP


i caused my injury, constantly trying to hinder me
quivering, deliver me pain, to my brain: ungingerly
sinisterly building my history of misery
its no mystery, death is my ultimate victory
picture me restricted by rope, life and death i'm conflicted
the pain is self inflicted, its mentally encrypted
this weapon selicted, suicide attempt depicted
my failure predicted, but to affliction im addicted
self creation of lacerations is my masturbation
i'm fond of the exasperation for lengthy durations
this pain in me is agony, its ragingly nagging me
to be suffocatingly gagging me, make more ache in me
i'm a wrist cutter, so i'll die slowly, close this shutter
and lie lonely in privacy, in bliss and clutter
neighbours hear a help cry only in a distant stutter

my latest: - last weekend

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The Misfits, Written for SV vs Black
Written by Trajik

we are street thugs with mean mugs we love to use and sling drugs
seemingly the brink of the sweetest life that you can dream up
summon hell so quietly, the underbelly of society
we appear dumb as hell, but our crunchers swell defiantly
don't judge a crook by his cover, we wrote and drudged through books
thrown punches, hooks, cuts in upwardly motions, kung fu rooks
geniuses that brawl like three 'will huntings' but not one who's good
believe this or not: we kill without suffering grievances at all
we've conquered empires who break to pieces as they fall
if you deserve it, you deserve it, you're gonna be murdered
but encourage it with nourishment, brains shouldn't be burdened
criminal complexities, i'm visually dressed to please
'twas suggested to me that inside i have an aggressive beast
it could be suppressed in me with little bits of cess to breathe
bullet spray would set the streets ablaze without incessant weed

they're misfits, monsters, how'd they get here, what was the process?

these villains were three children with a plethora of promise
these thrilling scenes of dreams building together is honest
scattered through the school they're mastering their tools
taking all the steps, could say they were gathering the stools
well behaved, unphased and in check, they were raised with respect
never scathed or neglected, their parents were praised by the rest
admired by other children, once there was a fire in the building
situation dire, you could feel it, smoke higher than the ceiling
they risked themselves to help someone from a bathroom prison cell
weekend volunteering helped the elderly and poor kids as well
they were stars of their own sport, need not share the court
so daring to score, covered in scars of their own accord
these brothers outclassed the class acts and were destined for success
but why act out the dark route, maybe suppressing so much stress?

for the sake of tracing ways, it's narrowed down to one fateful day
a crazed and racing driver displaced his rage and raised the stakes
both parents taken from grace, erased by a man who made mistakes
foreshadowing the days their traits began displaying disgrace
the brothers' future of importance became more than mortgaged
the government began absorbing them when they became orphaned
they were put through group home after group home until the youths grown
the world was their oyster, they had something to prove though
so they shucked it raw, they're new personas rendering truest
suspended because they were seen as threatening students
they never returned to class, money started earning them fast
a lifestyle transformation, forever burning their past
the battle against spoiling of good apples, i can't stomach it
to live knowing i was the driver is my damn punishment



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[Ghost1]

DEADDD@ meth!!!


lol i forgot all about that RAT O MIN SHIT abbahahahaha

[Orc]

vs Dominate

Dom Aka Shane,
. .

Both w/ the force behind us? Ha ! You beating me was one of many short surprises.
You've done ''A Lottery Peat In - Amongst Others'' w/o ''Bogs, being raffled off as prizes''...
Shoo, mate. but it's too late to alter your bolstered crude fate 'cause dude, WAIT!
If it's a ''Tyrese Cycling, won't save you'' - w/o ''Gibson, failing to lose weight''... [Tie Recycling]
Ending it all? I'll manage and damage the twerp, he's a FAG! it was average at first,
But ''SueAside - He STILL Likes To Add Komen'' - Ha, It's not because he's a fan of her work! ...
Get bashed/hurled stuck. In the past, twirled & asked about losing - does it hurt much?
You'll ''Dicot, In your OWN words'' - so I ''won't take a Leaf, out of YOUR book''...
You fell off, fuckin' wimp it's vile, you CAN'T beat me with that simple style,
You ''Peaked, way back in the day - it was nothin! '' similar to ''Porn addicts, STILL in denial''...
Twist this shit slow ; MY verse? it's got a slick flow & bashes his wits, soo..
Now ''Shane, MAC beat you'' - but dude, this battles definitely ''NOT a Big Show''... (my alias is Macabre)
W/ POTENTIAL like a tentative lever PUSH IT, it's a sensitive treasure,
Now you ''Willow Pen, The FloodGates'' w/o - ''Orchards, ..taking preventative measures''...
Ha, get folded might is lacking as I'm flowing tight, Aussies are NOT the boldest type.
To smack you to the ''Eyre, would fit nicely'' - as ''Birthing you..was your countries LOWEST point''.

. .

` Vacate the throne.
-Burd.

[Orc]

actually found my Blade Thesis battle hahahah like my 3rd or 4th battle ever & i won. I remember writing these punchlines during maths in school trying so hard hahaha I was 16.

referred to goverment plannin the kids heavily taxed, and u made a book of your life's facts?!
..RW's like professional actors how no one reads..& Bladed 'Script..Yours' are quite whack! (scriptures)
I never reveal the hand i was dealt. and its true that ill keep inflicting his health,
We know he's overrated and lonely, Mainly Lack Lust, Or... is he simply in love with himself? (lacklustre)
Kid you best remember, your place..BOTTLE NOSE! with a face like his VVV he' justs a pretender
^Ill turn away from the book of ''blade did the,sis'' like reading about death of a family member!!
whats with the hat? you have pubic hair on your chin WTF, its gets worse bitch.
now im'a swing around the 'bat,man' and NO not the kind you comic geeks worship!!
..its TOO easy
now its exposing time, you posed as D OMEN!! your now damned so dont talk man,
so the kids just like a devil worshipper^, screamin there 'sat, a nic' like over excited sport fans!! (satanic)



RIP son,

[Split]

lmao. well, this is against some kid named Smashal0t on RM. fuck. my newb tourny verse was 1,000x worse, somehow


Smashal0t rings a bell, but all clowns look alike,
Round 1 KO, well that's word to Open Mic,
Not an Oh to your name so I'll supply your bitch for life,
Mama Smash two weeks due- brained on coke and ice,
Her son lacks rapping talent, she paid the junkie's price.
I grow ill as time elapses while you stay non-iconic,
This cat mimes punches, wait that makes your name ironic.
Smashalot at the club, nine fifteen, Cristal clear he gets dismissed,
Ten pm and Eight's on scene- Absolut-ly A-list,
Eight strutted Sound now I Smash you with the Fury,
Seek shelter or turn to ash like Nagasaki in the forties,
Gut you down the center and burn, Swisher Sweet,
My lines fresh like os 6, smash is Windows 98 obsolete,
Turn and get enlightened, Split spits ferocious,
Tourniquet tightens, this tough talker overdosed on dopeness,
You're american soccer without a keeper, fucking Hopeless