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ghost in the matrix
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I think I'm just echoing the rest when I say this failed to live up to its potential lol Angkor you coulda had this man with just a few more lines wat the shit kinda ending is that lmao not much to really breakdown here vulgar had a solid drop but almost overdone with the multies but lex pretty much handed the win over with not finishing his piece. I got vulgar taking this easily with a more sound finished piece.
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typical vulgar verse. melting pot. chun li eating weed brownies.
angkor. 401k plan. impressive opening paragraph to a persuasive letter. v/lexicon
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